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Lucky in Love (Chapter 21)
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After months of planning and a crisis that nearly killed it before it got off the ground, the Mercedes Challenge Think Pink Weekend finally arrived and took on a life of its own. On a Thursday night.
The screening of At Wit’s End, which was to open wide the following week, was a star-studded event. Just as importantly, LA’s top executives, attorneys, and agents forked out their own money to be at the sold-out affair. Dana insisted that Alice be at her side she walked the red carpet and gave interviews. At the end of that very short, repetitive hour, the entertainment press had been properly introduced to “funny lady” writer and radio commentator Alice Pieszecki Fairbanks.
That meant exactly nothing at the pet store the next day when Alice went to get Dave’s basic necessities, thinking she might surprise Dana. She’d forgotten that her new credit cards and checks hadn’t caught up with her official identification, including her new passport, and the clerk wouldn’t complete her order.
“I think she’s a clone of that little chickie at the Beatrice Foundation,” Alice rambled when she called Dana. “I wanted to surprise you … and I know you have so much to do this weekend … and I know we could try to squeeze this in on Sunday …”
“Baby,” Dana interrupted. “I love that you did this. I’ll be right there.” She left the walk through for that night’s concert without a second thought.
Of course, by the time Dana was done, Dave needed a room of his own room just to house his leashes, collar, I.D. tag, bowls, beds, food, treats and toys. The clerk shook her head as she rang the new total, which was nearly twice the original amount, although Alice did manage to convince Dana that they didn’t have to consider the relative merits of doghouses until they found their own house.
The reviews of the movie were uniformly excellent. Even the most curmudgeonly of the handful of respected critics who had been invited to the screening gave it his highest rating. Helena and Tina were inundated with media inquiries and early congratulations, but agreed to help each other leave the office no later than one. Helena wanted some time with Lara before finally introducing her to Wilson and Jun Ying at dinner with her mother.
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Wow – what a way to leave us hanging on – you better post again soon!!! Winnie is one bitch, it should have been her who went head first over the rail. You write an awesome tale and fantastic Danish. Keep it coming please and often.
Okay. I’ve had a little time to process this now, and after careful consideration, all I have to say is this: Winnie simply must get her ass kicked. End of. That about sums it up. Thanks for a chapter that’s going to leave me wondering til you post again, which I really hope is soon. *sigh* cheers, SG.
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT? (seriously I feel like Lil’Jon over here) OMG Alice NOOOOOO!!!!!! Amazing, I even read the Bette and Tina parts and I don’t even read the Tibette parts of my story. I’m so glad I’ve caught up and I have to say this is a great chapter to begin commenting on. I’m glad you post more often than I do otherwise I’d be going through amazing withdraw. Keep up the great writing.
She fell on her head or fell head first?! :O either way it’s horrible! How could you do that to poor sweet innocent Alice, ok maybe she isn’t so innocent, that bathroom scene prooved that, nice job on it by the way! Anyway you do have to post soon so I can get my next fix of your story. :D Peace out xx
No, no, no, no, no! You had to, didn’t you? There always has to be drama. Just when I thought Dana and Alice’s biggest problem was going to be Dave. I should have known that something was up from the very start, when you assured me that you’re “all about the Danish.” It was a great update. I was happy all the way through, until those last few paragraphs. Loved the bathroom scene. Melissa always rocks. I also loved the black pearl choker. I guess Alice did get something better than a scarf this time. :) Now, Alice better end up just peachy after all this, not dead…or comatose…or paralyzed. Maybe just a whole lot of blood and Dana comes swooping to the rescue, applies pressure, stops the bleeding…and beats the crap out of Winnie. :) Sorry, I got a little carried away with my daydreaming. Anyway…great job. Keep up the wonderful writing. I can’t wait for more.
Right so I was so surprised by the whole Alice thing that I forgot to mention how much I love Jennifer Garner…Ah Alias and TLW together, it’s almost too much my heart, she can’t take much more. Also I loved the Think Pink concept with the pink tennis balls omg with would be a dream to design for…actually I might design something for fun that’s just how much I love it.
ok now you need to update and soon.. please let alice be ok.. god this story just keeps getting better..
WTF!?! WTF!?! WTF!?! Sam…I know you said to be ready for shit to hit the fan…but you didn’t say anything about Alice hitting the deck! OMG OMG OMG!!! That was horrific! And awesome damn it…and here I was about to give you the, you kick ass for the whole week, award by mentioning Jennifer Garner…who I am in love with to the point that if she was any hotter, she would be above Leisha Hailey…that’s how much I love her…and then…AND THEN!!! You pull a dirty little stunt like that…you’re mean…really really mean…and damn it…I love it. Well, at least we got some Danish lovin’ in…ok so…I think Alice fell into a bed of roses, right??? Isn’t that what you were thinking??? Yeah…she can walk that off no problem…This kicked ass…PPS. Don’t be a slacker like me!
OMFG!!! how could you do that to Alice? Dana is so gonna kill Winnie. you have to update this now
WHAT – where did that come from? this should be interesting.
ummm, SammysGirl? did you say that your updates were going to be once a week now? And you just left Alice sprawled on the lobby with a head injury? for a week???? Head injuries should be seen to immediately, right? Waiting anxiously aside…great update! looking forward to hearing more…and good luck with stuff!
A short sharmen part again but it´s worth every single word!!!!!!!It´s awseome to see Shane shane getting to know herself step for step. and how much carmen is helping her with this.I totally love this parts!Great job!
WTF. seriously, never saw that coming. don’t let her die
Oh dear lord!! I was just about to say what a wonderful part and now it was wonderful and dramatic! Please please post soon, don’t leave us hanging like that for long!! :)
I am…speechless. Without speech. All I can say at the moment is that you’d better update soon or I’ll be hunting you down! (Loved it, but cliffhangers drive me nuts!)
aww, no! Girls fight! But not the funny kind. Ok, who wants to smack Winnie? I guess Dana after this..I hope Alice is ok.Great as usual, can’t wait for more.
AAAHHHHH!!!! How could you END it like that?! Sorry I haven’t commented in a while, but I’ve been keeping up with this story, and this chapter was awesome! I hope you post again really really REALLY soon so we can find out what happens!
noooooooooooooooooooo not alice I just hope that she will be ok and I hope that winnie pays dearly for this please post soon I can’t wait to see what will happen like I said I just hope that alice is ok and that everyone is happy at the end of this great update
omfg did u have to do that to Alice, couldn’t she have stepped aside and let Winnie going flying??? you gotta post soon now girl.
okay, after rereading I just have to ask…will you consider using my idea for Dana to beat Winnie senseless with her racket now? She doesn’t have to kill her or anything. Just leave a few net-looking bruises.
Wow…the drama…who does Winnie think she is…I’ll tell you who she is…she will be prisoner G4793458 especially if Alice dies. I love the conversation and tenderness between Bette & Tina they can make new memories in a new home. Please keep posting.
Loved it up to the end, when Alice fell..She has to be okay…I love this story…I love that you had Jennifer Garner there…nice touch, very detailed…Please make Alice okay!
Winnie is out of her fucking mind!!! I love how you’re making Shane work through her battles and Peggy finally stand by Helena.Don’t let Alice die!!!!!! Dana needs her. Winnie will be lucky if our girls don’t kill her, especially Shane.
No way! You just had to end it like that didn’t you… really great… again. Absolutely loved it and I just hope that Alice is ok. Please.
Ok first off i think winnie needs to get LAID! Im glad to get that off my chest! Second,OMG,omg Please Please let Al be ok,please please dont let what i said come true Yor a lil shit! HA PPPS Great work BTW & you still amaze me!!!!
In Sammysgirl I Trust – That’s my mantra. I visualize Winnie in a white room – I see white jackets and drugs lots of them – did I mention the drugs – yup! tons. I echo everyone above – Please. Post. Soon.
…oh I also wanted to add…nice touch with adding Jennifer Garner and of course Melissa Ethridge…I just love this story…but Alice HAS to be okay…
are you f***ing kidding me?????? what kind of sick twisted s**t is that?? no way! ALICE!!! ohmygod this is just too much. i don’t know what to say other then well done and great cliffhanger. please post soon!!!!!!!
I think Winnie just lost it all…the children, the money, respect, etc. Oh I hope Alice is OK. Great chapter! More please!
sorry about the swearing this fic is one big drama after an other
NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO dont let her die dont let her die please amy god seand winnie to jail that bitch i hate her please post soon
So, umm, yeah…I didn’t see that one coming. Who could hurt our beloved Alice like that?! I don’t know if my pleading for Alice’s well-being will help, but here goes: please let Alice be fine (as in, don’t let her die)! Oh and just wanted to say that your writing still amazes me. I loved the conversations between the couples. It’s like they (the pairings) are all meant to be.