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Love and Pride chp 13
LOVE AND PRIDE Chp 13
Tina was sitting in the kitchen watching Lara rustling up amazing scrambled eggs on wholemeal toast.
“Where did you learn to cook like this ? “
Tina asked as Lara put the food in front of her.
“Both my parents own restaurants in LA – mom’s is three star and dad’s is four star. Its kind of hard not to be able to cook. And because they are divorced they get competitive wanting me to cook as good as them “
“Will you become a chef ? “
“No – it would cause too many fights. I’m more scientific than a chef in the making. I just cook for fun “
“You cooked for Dana yet ? “
“I went round there last night but guess who was hanging around ?”
“Alice ? “
“Yeah – she really has the hots for her “
“Is it mutual ? “
“I don’t think so – I trust Dana – if she wanted to be with Alice she wouldn’t be
sleeping with me “
“I’m glad for you Lara “
“Cheers – anyway — what about you – did I see a certain champion runner jogging away from the vicinity of this college last night when I was coming back to my room ? “
“Might have done “Tina couldn’t keep the smile off her face
“You saw here again -I thought you weren’t seeing her again until today ?”
“I was in the library and she just appeared — looking gorgeous in this black sweater. I nearly ruined it by being tongue tied but somehow I redeemed it and she came back here and we talked “
“You jump her yet ? “
“No I did not — I wanted to though Lara — we hugged for a few minutes “
“Promising “ Lara announced handing Tina a cup of coffee.
“Today — somehow — I am going to ask her out “
“As in Bette can I be your girlfriend ? “
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Ally, more please and quickly. These two are just too cute.
I love these two and your story..
I love this story, please continue soon very soon
“I’ll go and get you some more tea – I want a can of pop ” I almost jumped up to do a happy dance. I call it pop as well. LOL! Awwwww that was so cute! I have that problem too where I can’t speak to save my life. These days thought if I’m chatting online and I’m nervous I’ll add the stutters to add realism, although it probably makes me look like a bigger loser than if I verbally stammered.
Way too cute. Luve this story. I can’t wait for their first kiss!
I like Bette’s middle name, sounds familiar for some reason … xx
Ally..that was so cute. I sure hope you post anything soon. thanks
So cute! I love Annie Hall.
LOVED IT!LOVED IT! LOVED IT! TOO CUTE!!
pop is pop, what else do you call it?? Tks Ally that was another great chapter, I myself was hanging on the edge of my seat wondering how it was going to turn out…sweet w/the note!!
gotta love it – great way to end the day
Goody, goody, goody! It’s a date! I’ll remind you that I want them sitting in the BACK of the theatre when they go to the movie and I think you know why. Better still, the back of the balcony (if there is one). Would you like a flu shot? I’m becoming legend for my gentle hands.
I absolutely love this story…they are so cute together. Please continue…bring on the date.
Very nice job, Ally. That was indeed very cute ( as usual ) and quite funny too. Please don’t keep us waiting too long for your next little gem.
Ally,Loved the Marlee Matlin reference! too funny! I haven’t commented before, but I really am enjoying this story a lot. thanks!
:D This is so cute… Awww… I can so imagine they’re ‘talking’ through napkins on the date ;)
YES INDEED, Bette!!! So fucking cute, Ally! Wow, you keep surprising me with every chapter. What a suspense for a simple question! Very promising for the progress of their relationship! These two are so into each other, it’s brilliant! Is it Friday yet??? Thanks Ally… (I guess you can ignore my little suggestion, LOL)
YES!!!!!!!!!
Yeah! I love the fact that they are so anxious and geeky(the good kind)! Gosh I wonder what it’s going to be like when they “do it” lol
That was really very cute…thanks for the chapter!
Ally that was so cute. You brought “happy tears” to my eyes as I was reading it. More please Ally!!
I agree they are so so cute.
THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME, ALLY!!!!!!How cute was Bette? ‘WILL YOU BE MY GIRLFRIEND?’ on the napkin……That was so classic!
YES! Ally, can you hear all of us scream in front of our computers?
How ABSOFREAKING ADORABLE was that??!!
Happy belated birthday. They are so tongue tied it is not just funny but so endearing. Glad to see that they are girlfriends.
I just love this adorable story. Bette and Tina both being so naive and innocent is just too cute. Now my friend I just want to ask you a favor. Please let this story not have to much drama—just a teeny tiny bit. I know you are a Drama Queen and how much you like to tease us with you cliffys, but you have your other two stories to do that to us. Oh and just so you know—-yes I am begging. LOL!!!
The napkin things is just too cute Ally. And happy elated birthday. How about another chapter to celebrate?
They are so cute and sweet, love them!
Awwww so fucking cute and LOL at the middlename, I know who that is :o)) BTW Happy Birthday yesterday :o))
at last girlfriends but did u have to bring up MM? i feek sick everytime i think about her with Bette… PPS
Awww, that was so cute! We need more… :)
This story is just too cute
Awesome chapter and story. Good work throwing in Marlee Matlin. Tom is creepy. Anyway thanks for takin the time.
Sweet! Thanks for your story. Keep posting!
This is such a nice story, love the interaction between those two shy girls.