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One Life Too Many – 5
STW, BBR3, StormyOne and Jwet, glad you are enjoying my story. Keep the constructive criticism on my story coming, i appreciate it. Thank you. J
PS: Huge fan of your work Jwet! You made my L Word less months bearable! Thought id let you know!
Fucckkk!!! Mano did not expect that to be her greeting and double checked to see if it was me. J? Shittt!! Hi Mano, fuck, sorry bout that. And that one again too. How you doing? How cool am I huh? Idiot. Luckily for me though, she laughs, tells me she’s well and asks if I’ve finished uni for the day. I had finished and was going to head home after a smoke with Carla. Mano suggests we go for lunch somewhere and I agree, adding that I would be home and ready in just over an hour. She tells me that she would pick me up and that I didn’t need to get changed, I already looked beautiful. I blush as I always do when I get a compliment and I heard her laugh. I asked her what was so funny and she tells me, Stop blushing and get in the car. Oh. My. Gosh. I have my very own stalker!! Excellent!!
Mano is looking like about $3.4 million dollars right now. Her arms and shoulders are exposed through her black singlet top, her pearly whites are blinding my eyes and her smile is straight from a toothpaste commercial. She has grabbed my full attention and I practically run to her car. I get inside, we kiss for a little longer on the cheek and smile at one another. She tells me that the blonde outside the car is waving goodbye and trying to grab my attention. I don’t turn back and tell Mano the line that has been used a million and one times already, let’s get out of here!
So, Mano, tell me, how long have you been a stalker for? Yay! I get a laugh. She tells me about 10 minutes and she’s had luck finding her suspect on her very first try. I congratulate her on her efforts and asked her what she was doing in the neighborhood. Just went down to the bar to pick up a few of my things then happened to see you as I was driving along and thought I’d surprise you, she tells me. Ok, story seems to check out. I press on asking where we were heading for lunch and she tells me whatever I had in mind. I wasn’t hungry so I throw the decision back to her and she suggests we have something simple, like olives, cheese, fresh bread, dried tomatoes and other deli goods. That sounded so good, I suddenly got hungry and strangely quite excited over the fact that I was going to eat deli goods… I was getting weirder by the day.
We stop at the supermarket, pick up our essentials and Mano tells me to remember this moment in time. It would be remembered as our first supermarket shopping experience. I can’t help but laugh at her comment and tell her that she’s a nut head. She playfully punches my arm and starts to blush a little. I wink at her and we head back to the car. Off to a park that overlooks the city skyline, we find the biggest tree in the park and set up our little picnic area. This is a great moment right here. Wish I could have taken a photo of it and showed you guys. Everything in the picture would have looked just perfect. I loved every second of it. The way Mano looked at me, I thought I had it all right there.
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Way too short. I was just getting into it and it was over, but good.
Have to say im liking this…and am getting into it…..i like your writing!….it has a certain style!
Just caught up with your story and I think it’s really good. Well – balanced, you know? I like that. Keep it up!