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Love and Pride – chp 14
LOVE AND PRIDE – Chapter 14
Tina was so happy with the words that she didn’t notice how long had passed
“Tina ? “ Bette said after three minutes that felt like forever. Each minute felt like an hour . She was trying to come up with what she would say if Tina said no.
Tina looked up and smiled
“Will you ? “
Tina took the pen out of Bette’s hand and in big capital letters she wrote
YES
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“Really ?” Bette could hardly believe that Tina had agreed
“Yes “
“I’m asking you out on a whatyacall it ?”
“Date ? “ Tina filled in the word
“Yeah I asked you on a date – so if – I mean – you will be my girlfriend
? “
“Bette – I was going to ask you out today “
“You was ?”
“Yes – my line was going to be – Bette – will you be my girlfriend ?”
Bette smiled – a huge winning smile – one of relief and happiness.
“So – you like me ?” Bette said grinning
“I do – you like me ?”
“A lot “
“So that makes sense for us to date and see what happens “
Tina was sounding more confident than she felt.
“So tomorrow night is our first date” Bette said “Do you want to do anything different ? “
“No — badminton, food in town and Woody Allen “
“I was just meaning if you wanted to do anything else “
“No – do you ?”
“No — that sounds perfect “
“And maybe we can do something on the weekend ?”
Bette nodded – her hand was throbbing with pain but she didn’t care – Tina had agreed to go out with her – Bette Porter had a girlfriend.
“How’s your hand ?”
“Fine “
“Which is why its red ? “
“Its okay – honest Tina “
“Can I take hold of it ?”
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This has been one of my favorite stories from the first sentence. If pot noodles are what I think they are, then I ate my fair share during college.
Jo, hit this one on the head. So very sweet. I also hope that Helena doesn’t turn into a bitch. Thanks Ally.
Ally, that was disgustingly sweet and so fucking cute! More, More!
Love how shy they are and writing the ?’s down. sound like grammer school. Hope Helena behaves herself. I do believe that Shane will keep her in line. thanks
yes sweet and cute – but not to be a a wet blanket but don’t most people date a bit before they say they are girlfriends??
Helena need to get over Tina….fast. You always want what you can’t have, but in this case, Helena risks losing Bette if she doesn’t bug off. Bette and Tina are just adorable together. I can’t wait until they experience sex for the first time with each other. PPS.
Love on the College Campus. Running and Loving is what these two have in common.
Yes they are sweet and fucking cute couple. Poor Helena but she did a right thing and happy for her!
Sickly sweet! x
So sweet. Thanks Ally!
Great! A very cute couple indeed! Can’t wait for the first kiss.
this story rocks… they are so damn cute together… PPS
And thanks to one Allyemmerson, now we’re walking on sunshine, oh oh! We’re walking on sunshine, oh oh! We’re walking on sunshine, oh oh! And don’t it feel good!!! Yeah, baby, feels really good!!! And they are so damn cute and sweet together! And I agree with Lara, it’s going to be fun!!! … Oh, and Yodah came out at an early age I see! I appreciated this conversation. I think Helena is doing the right thing but is also going through a tough phase, and it was great for her to be able to talk about it, especially with Shane who as always had the right reaction. Maybe Bette could somehow figure out that Helena doesn’t need too many details, at least in the beginning when she’s dealing with her own grief. But I hope she’ll get over it, cause Bette deserves to be able to share her happiness with her beloved sister. Hmm, how about having Ruth join the gang here and steal Helena’s heart… lol! Anyway, greater than ever, thanks Ally!
Oh, and again, I’m so enjoying these descriptions of campus life… Totally hits home! … especially the procrastinating in the library! ;)
ah holding hands at university…sweet memories…and this cute couple are so real Ally…thanks for posting…
They are awfully cute. I hope Shane can help Helena in her struggle to do the right thing and not become resentful or bitter about the situation. Does the theatre have a nice, dark balcony suitable for holding hands and, uh… well, you know? Is Jobadge refering to the sticky bun?
i could use a sticky bun right about now. were any of us really ever that young? Sue
Awwww this is the cutest story, I love your young, naive and inexperienced B&T :o))
Sooo cute!
They are so cute. Was love ever as innocent as this? Especially in college? How pure and lovely.
ahhh new love its wonderful isnt it
So sweet Ally! so sweet. Love it!
Can someone help me to wipe the goofy grin on my face? Perfect!! :D
Ally this is really great. I love how Bette is slowly coming out of her shell because of her feelings for Tina. Like a butterfly from a coccon, it’s great. I appreciate how Helena is trying to act and thank god for Shane! My goodness she’s awesome! I think it’s so cute how Tina and Bette are and how Lara wants them to be happy to…of course there’s loud mouth Alice..hmmm…your two stories are really given Al a bad rep huh? I mean this and L wing…hmm ..oh well. Can’t wait for these two’s date! Keep her coming!
Well, I guess everything has been said already, so I’ll just add another ” so f..king cute ! ” . You are so talented Ally !! Great job ! Thanks for sharing this marvelous story with us.
first love…so very cute…i hope helena will find someone quick to replace tina in her mind before she decides to ruin their relationship
This story is so sweet…young love nothing like it…keep posting
Early love is so sweet, wish I could have it back….