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You (Part the Ninth)
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Shane just rolled her eyes at the blonde wig Alice had picked out. “Come on, she’ll look really fucking stupid in that, Al. We should have just gone to a wig salon or something, I’m sure they have those somewhere around here.”
“Of course they do. But this is more fun and besides, I don’t expect her to actually wear any of these ugly-ass things anyway,” Alice retorted as she threw a wig that was some color akin to reddish into the basket.
“Then why are we even here? I told her I’d fix her hair for her. Besides, this place is weird. I think the costume department for every shitty horror movie made in the past half century has shopped here exclusively.” Shane was stopped from her analysis of the little costume shop by its owner, a decidedly tiny man who was apparently an immigrant from an as-yet-unidentified country.
“Ha, I wish they would! I would be famous then, and rich. Sadly, no movie people come here, just young people. I like young people, but they often have very little money.” He trailed off and looked out the grimy window somewhat wistfully before waving a short red wig in Alice’s general direction. “Here, your friend would like this one, maybe?” he asked, smiling at her hopefully.
It took every ounce of self-restraint Alice had not to laugh. Shane was having an even tougher time, barely making it outside before she started giggling uncontrollably. Alice just handed the guy a hundred and told him to keep the change before joining her.
“Dammit, I almost made it! I would have felt so bad laughing at him in his little store. Poor guy.” Realizing she still had the basket under her arm, Alice made a quick dash back to the door and set it just outside before jumping into Shane’s Jeep with the wigs.
“Those things look like they’ve been in somebody’s basement since the late 70’s, Al. Poor Dana, being subjected to old fake hair by someone claiming to be her best friend. That’s just cruel.” Shane said it with a laugh, punching Alice’s shoulder good-naturedly. She stopped laughing when Alice just bit her lip and looked down, though. “Hey, I didn’t mean anything by it. I’m just kidding.”
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Well done!! Please continue, and I find it a lot more fun to read knowing that the road may be long but there is happy Danish at the end!!
IC read this and re do season 3 please!! If only you had been on the writing team maybe we would have had the ending we all wanted aswell as the realistic character development, (sighs) great chap anyway, PPS xx
This was awesome. I actually had tears in my eyes at one point and that’s never happened to me before. Great update!
what a great chapter. really well written and rather touching. i was a little thrown off at first by the recapping of the season. but i like that you are filling in holes and adding your own touches to it. now you have me wondering if you are going to continue to tell the story with the same horrific ending that the shows creators went with. my fingers are crossed for a happier ending. please post soon.
Ok. This was fucking fantastic. Seriously. Why did we not get this in S3? Damn. Ok so I love it my friend, but I have to ask…what is the future of our favorite lezzy tennis star? She’s gonna live…right??? Right??? Come on…you know you want her to :) PPS
Great update! Beautifully written. Shane really lived up to her nickname of “Yoda” in this update. Everything said just clicked…it made sense. Also, I’m glad to see Dana and Helena hanging out on a one to one basis. Great way to build up their friendship. She was so supporting and encouraging. I always did think about how the people at the baskestball game just happened to have a montage tape of a professional tennis player. Your way definately works. And here I am again, wondering if that happened too. I seem to be second guessing myself every single time I reference season 3. I really need to watch the whole season again. The “hair falling out” scene was hard for me everytime I saw it. It made it all the more real, that this was really happening and they were following through with this story line completely. Very sad. I did love Alice’s and Shane’s crazy hair. That was funny. The bathroom scene made me cry when I saw it, and reading it didn’t change that. I love how you took it further. Awesome job. The whole scene was very emotional. Now that I’ve babbled half your life away (and you’d probably just like to read “good job. post more soon”.) I’ll stop talking. I can’t wait to read more. :)
Hmmm…a bit late, but I can still comment right? Just wanted to let you know that I love your version of S3. The further you veer from the original storyline the more interesting it gets. :) You did more than all right! You get an A+ from me. :D Everything makes so much more sense now. For example, it explains why Helena took Dana to the basketball game later on. And you did a great job on the NC17…I felt kind of guilty (because of Dana being weak because of her illness), but I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work! :)
Wonderful..You made it touching and bittersweet…Nearly cried.the scene of the bathroom was intense and you conveyed so beautifully the love and sadness that they were feeling.The emotions were real.Thanks.
Absolutely beautiful, the way love is meant to be. Thank you so much, you made my day.
Really nicely done. The emotional connection is completely realistic and totally believeable in the context of both this story and Danish as we know and love them. Looking forward to chapter 10…PPS!
…and I am glad to know you are doing Fine!!! :)
Beautiful, Simply Beautiful! Thank You!
Dude! This was excellent. So super sweet and hopeful – we should all have an Alice *sigh*
CLAPPING way to go muted!!!!! That was awsome update,and to think you were worried it wasnt going to be good HA! Hey,i will be there for you theough thick and thin,dont worry about that!! Im always going to be here for you ! ALWAYS!!! Heart ya too my friend!! PPD ps Keep up the great work!!
Gorgeous!
Wow….that literally made me all hot and sweaty, but brought tears to my eyes at the same time. I am TOTALLY digging your take on season 3. Fuck IC for not letting it play out the way you are writing it. Please update again soon! I fucking love this story!