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Love and Pride – chapter 16
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Love and Pride chp 16
They walked through the back of the college holding hands. As Bette opened the car she turned to Tina – she reached out and stroked her face
“I vow to you that I will be a good girlfriend for you. I will not do anything that you do not want me to. I want to treat you right “
Tina had never expected to hear anyone say that to her – she touched Bette’s face just loving the feelings that Bette produced in her.
“I promise I want to treat you right as well. This is not a race for once. We do things at our pace you know ?”
Bette nodded – she was very close to Tina and it crossed her mind to lean in and gently kiss her girlfriend. Tina was looking at her as if she wanted the same thing but Bette wasn’t sure.
“Lets go for our date — I am really hungry “ Tina said
Bette nodded and they got into her car. Bette was concentrating on the road as they drove down the hill and joined the main road into Lancaster.
Bette had booked a table at an Italian restaurant near where they were going to see the Woody Allen movie. She really wanted to pay for the meal but she decided to wait and see what Tina suggested.
The ten minute drive into town was done in almost silence. When Bette parked the car she looked at Tina
“I am so nervous and I have been so busy rehearsing what to say to you that it’s only just dawned on me that you are probably as anxious as me “
Tina laughed “ You are right there – we’re going to have to get over our nerves “
“I know – I just like you a lot Tina “
“I like you too “
“I know that this is what I want – to be with you and to get to know you “
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These two young girls are so cute, I like the build up to the first kiss :o))
You have great fanfics!. But I adore this one, a weeee bit more than the rest, I just love the idea of B & J are sisters, and their all in high school, or whatever, I’m a sucker for tibette as teenagers, it’s just toooo Cute with a capital C!
love this glad you posted today. thanks
This is so fucking cute I could just burst! But you already knew that because I’m such a sap. Name of the band = priceless! It made me think of an ASCII version I saw last year. (‘) hehe
ah honey that was just so damn silly, cute,with a touch of anticipation. thanks.
ah honey that was just so damn silly, cute,with a touch of anticipation. thanks.
FIELD HOCKEY! Sorry… I just get really excited. I play on my college’s team. I disagree with Bette, though, because I think it IS possible to compete with yourself in fh (and I play the same position she did). Anyway, glad to see this back, and I know I can’t wait for their ‘later’ either!
This story is just so cute—love the innocence of Bette and Tina. Once again please can I ask of you to keep the drama at a low ebb in this one, because I know you must have some planned at some point in this story. Well you are the Drama Queen after all and I understand you even got something for your birthday confirming that. When you go to work this week tell them to quit giving you so much stuff to do so you can have time to write. LOL!!!!!
great both post need to be longer
it was cute, sweet and intense too…great chapter
You were right, this is a delightful chapter. Just reading about B&T’s interaction spurred some rather cool shower moments with the knowledge that there will be more to come.
I love these 2 together…I love this story…keep posting
Two great updates keep up the good work.
Damn, woman!!!… That has to be one of the best first dates in Bette and Tina fanfic history, at least the best as for B&T in College!!! And it’s far from being over…! “Yes babe I am having a great time”… too!!! I’m as excited as if it was my first date!… I loved every second of it! And you’re so preparing the grounds for one amazing relationship! So much chemistry and attraction between them, that’s pure pleasure to read! I’m so happy that L Wing storyline is so different, cause then I don’t feel too guilty saying that L
Oups, sorry (didn’t mean to do that)… that L&P has made it to my other favorite of your stories! I’m just in a awe of your talent and so glad to be amongst the lucky readers! I love the band’s name, Ally! It might be typical of Frankie, but I think it’s above all typical of you!!! Can’t wait for the poster!… But first, on with the rest of the date!… So, where were we? …Oh, yeah! Who the f*** cares about Woody Allen anyway???
Very cute – these two are just the two most innocent beginnners there ever were!
I love all your stories, but this one is so cute. I’m getting so excited waiting for that first kiss.
Yeah! Back row! Just where they need to be. I know they’re nervous but they need to settle down a little as the movie begins-less giggling, more kissing.
Damn they are sweet and hot, and can’t wait to see their first kiss. OK post soon please, thanks!
HI, HAPPY TO SEE THIS CHAPTER;… after a week I was wondering wether you simply dropped the story ;-))))I really love that story… so cute and refreshing…Keep up the good job….And Yes, I’m in Europe, whicch exxplains why I’m first !!
I’ve been waiting for this story for one week… post soon please… can’t wait anymore…
Nice to see another chapter of this story. The girls seem to be progressing nicely. Too bad about the poor movie choice! But don’t get me on my soapbox Woody Allen!!!!!
Ditto, I just this fic. It was second favorite after Long Winding Road. I just love the interaction between Bette and Tina. Bette’s consideration and Tina’s understanding, but I am SOOOOO ready for the first KISS and MORE!!!! PPS.
There relationship seems as if it took place in a bygone era….. such decorum and care. A far cry from doing the nasty on the first date.
oh so cute! Looking forward to their first kiss. Too bad about Tina’s parents, but not to worry. She’s got Bette now to take care of her.
So cute! Can’t wait for the next chappy!
I love how sweet they are together. thanks Ally…
how cute are they? and they haven’t even kissed yet!! this story is developing nicely, ally. will you offer another chapter of l wing today? pretty please……
Alright, so what can I say except that I’m loving this story. This is just perfect. Damn, you are so talented ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter ! Please don’t torture us and post soon…Pleeeease !