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MYSTERY NEVER SOLVED part1
RUBIES NIGHT CLUB
So I’m here at Rubies Night Club. There were around 40 people, mostly fat men drinking, screaming, and laughing… so disgusting. I’m new here, but I won’t stay here long. Sooner or later they will find me and I would have to run again… sad, I know, but that’s life… the owner of the place went up to the stage
“Ladies and gents, we are going to start this now with a new girl” everybody screamed “yes!! a new girl, so give it up for, Domino!!!!” ……. show time.
(Domino took the stage wearing black underwear. She had olive skin, brown eyes, dark brown hair, a body to die for with beautiful boobs. She had a wild look but at the same time a very gentle soft side to her that made everyone crazy.)
so I’m dancing right … having a good time, considering…everyone is looking and lusting at me, I can see in their eyes their desire for me. They give me money…that’s what I want. But good times don’t last forever…
(Domino spots a good looking guy sitting at front, so she went towards him and sat on his lap, still dancing)…
“Take me to the nearest motel” (and she nips him on his lips) “now?” “yea … now” (they got up, people started screaming at her to come up again to the stage, but she grabbed her things at the bar and followed the man out the door)
So we get to his place…. This guy thinks I’m going to fuck him… I got other plans “so Domino, what would you like to do?”( he smiled) told ya “well” (she kissed him) “ we could do lots of thing… but first… " (she kissed him again and pushed him to the bed) “I have to go to the bathroom” “ok, I’ll be waiting”… “I’m sure you will”
(And she went and closed the bathroom door. At that precise moment there was a knock at the door. He go up and went to the door. When he opened there was a woman standing in the middle of two big men. The three wearing black suits )
“can I help you?” “yes” (The woman spoke and showed him her badge. She had short spiky hair and blue eyes)
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dude, im in love…lol this is great.. your a genius.. please please continue like NOW!!!!!
Man!!! This is fuckin’ HOT!!!!!! You gotta’ like continue like now!!!!! I’m lovin’ this . . . shit, I’m almost speechless, this is so fuckin’ genius!!!! Okay, so before I start to ramble, post soon which means NOW!!!! lol Keep up the great work and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!
Interesting twist on Sharmen…do continue.
me again.. watched the vidio… great loved it…
you got me intrigued and I am curious to know what had happened to Shane. Obviously, they were lovers before.
God, I laughed out loud when the guy thought Carmen was jailbait and he was the one in trouble (“I thought she was 18 man!!”). Classic! It’s a fascinating start. Already, I want to know how Shane and Carmen knew each other and what happened that lead to Shane chasing Carmen around. Hmm. And I also watched the video, but I’ll be completely honest with you–I didn’t really dig the song at first. I actually turned it down a little bit. But then I listened to the lyrics and heard that it’s a cry for help and love; it fits perfectly. The video, visually speaking, was touching; I could feel Shane’s torment through the scenes. And just overall, just watching Shane and Carmen together onscreen. . . it’s amazing, you know? You did a really good job.