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Love and Pride chp 17
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LOVE AND PRIDE Chapter 17
Tina looked across at Bette who was watching the movie – as much as Tina tried she couldn’t concentrate. All she could do was look at her girlfriend and marvel at how beautiful she was. Lara had asked her if Bette knew se was so attractive – Tina had replied that Bette had no clue. Bette got up.
“I need the toilet “
Tina watched her walk down the stairs to the exit – God she has the most fantastic ass. Just the way she swayed and how her butt bounced was so erotic.
Bette aroused Tina without trying – in how she smiled, the way her shirt showed off her curves and her total ignorance of how handsome she was,
Tina swallowed – she has to stop having these dirty thoughts – well at least until they kissed for the first time. Tina wanted to kiss Bette and she knew it was mutual – she had seen the way Bette had looked at her – especially in the top she was wearing.
Tina turned her attention to the big screen and watched the movie for several minutes. She missed Bette’s return until she glanced up and saw her moving along the row towards her.
Shyly Bette handed Tina a box of chocolates
“For you “
Tina swallowed a lump that suddenly leapt into her throat – flowers and chocolates on their first date. She was a lucky woman,
“Thank you Bette — you really didn’t have to “
“I was worried you might collapse due to malnutrition – after all its 15 minutes since you last ate “
“Sit down crazy woman “
Bette did – Tina put the chocolates on top of their coats. In truth – if she ate another thing she would explode. Tina took hold of Bette’s hand and rested it on her own thigh.
Bette swallowed – that felt amazing but she was scared – was she out of her depth or was it just the logical next step ?
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They are just too cute. 70’s disco, come on, Bee Gee’s, Donna Summers,Slyvester, Weather Girls, etc, etc. Those were some fun times.
I’m glad I caught this before I left for my trip. AWESOME first kiss! *happy sigh* Let’s see 70s disco. I’d say “It’s Raining Men” but that’s a gay man’s anthem so uh NO. lol “I Love the Night Life,” a bunch of Bee Gees stuff. Tina could sing “I Can’t Wait Any Longer” LMFAO That song is so bad it’s funny. It’s basically country disco and sounds like an obscene phone call. OH! “More, More, More” because it sounds like someone having sex, same with “Love to Love Ya Baby.” Thanks so much for this chapter! I can now go off to the convention happily. :)
Ally baby! That was a hell of a first kiss!!! My, my, my… Pfew! So cute and intense and romantic and beautiful… Hmmm… Okay now, where are those tongues? Yeah, yeah, I know, they’re new (and oh so cute!) at this, so I should be patient with them and let them go their own pace. *deep sigh* Thanks Ally, again, you blew me away with that first kiss. Very promising for their first everything! I think a great song that Tina could sing is ‘Can’t take my eyes off you’. I know the original by Frankie Valli is from 1967, but I’m sure one of the many versions was made in the 70′! Wouldn’t that song be perfect for B&T? Anyway, as you know, I’m also glad about the US elections results!…
Good good first kiss, the waiting was worthy!
Sigh… yay.
Dont know many Disco. I’m a country and western kinda of person. Those two are so cute.. Love how sly they are. thanks so much.
Yes please – we want to continue with the kissing :o))
Oo how cute. Thanks so much for this…more please.
Yay, they’re on their way! I’m going to refrain from commenting too much on 70’s disco, let’s just say it’s not really my thing. In NY early disco was an outgrowth of 60’s soul, which makes me very happy, but what was called disco elsewhere-uh, I’ll stop now. But anyway, how long does it take to get good at kissing? Seems like they’re getting the knack already. Have they progressed to tongues yet? After that it’s just a hop, skip, and a jump.
Great chapter love your stories, they are the best
:D Gotta love this story… sweet and innocent…
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
love all the kissing and I got to ready multiple ally stories today because I haven’t been on. OH..and it was wonderful to wake up this morning happy after an election!!
Wow, ideed ! So cute ! Great chapter, Ally, comme toujours… So, about ideas for disco songs, well, I’m thinking Kool and The Gang – Celebration ; Thelma Houston – Don’t leave me this way ; Never can say goodbye ( I know this one is from the 70’s, I have no idea who the original performer is though…) ; the Jackson 5 – I want you back or ABC ; Sister Sledge – We are family ; Abba – dancing queen ( obviously ! ) ; Donna Summer – Hot stuff ; Diana Ross – Upside down and one more ( even though this one is from 1983 ) The Pointer Sisters – I’m so excited .
Fantastic first kiss! AWWWW…just melted my heart…the tenderness and respect these two have for each other is…just….Sweet. Okay, 70’s music..hmmm….how about Barry White’s, “My first, My Last, My Everything.” Got to love Barry’s sexy, soulful voice.
i lovveee your writing….and as you said, your first album was abba……seems as though you and i are about the same age…..lol……anyways, great writing as usual……
Berry, berry cute! Great list of songs Clar….I’m impressed!!
ah honey, you know im a sucker for the first kiss. it was just so sweet and sexy. thanks.
May I sign up for that course?
SO fucking cute! How about some Earth Wind and Fire, Ottis Redding, Peaches and Herb, Donna Summer, Michael Jackson
Aww fist kiss, they are so fucking cute and sweet, love them and can’t wait to see more. About music Im really good about 70’s and claricestarling is say its all and I don’t know this songs is 70’s or not but just say it. Wonan In Love, Waiting For A Girl Like You, Endless Love. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Oh sorry I miss word ” Im not really good about 70’s” Sorry my bad!
Great first kiss! Totally luved it!Lots of songs listed so I’ll let it go. Can’t wait for the next post.
I Love all three Storys, please don’t stop writing – Greeting from Germany
Ally this is sooooo good – you wrote their first kiss just perfectly. I love how you have them talking about everything to make sure they are on the same page with each other and what they are feeling. So fuckin’ cute! Here are some of the songs I remember that might be appropriate: “Happiness Is Being With You” – Spinners; “Heaven Must Have Sent You” – Bonnie Pointer; “You Sexy Thing” – Hot Chocolate; “Ring My Bell” – Anita Ward; “You Make Me Feel Like Dancin'” – Leo Sayer. Hope these help! Love love love this story and your writing is phenomenal Ally! More please!
Great chapter Ally! Super cute first kiss. Let them continue :)
YAY!!!!!!! Great first kiss for these two!!!!! I’m so stoked you posted! :D
Wow, what a first kiss. I am not a disco person but more of a singer song writer and bands person (Eagels, Elton John, James Taylor, Bread, America, etc….).