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    You (Part the Tenth)

    Story written on November 9, 2006 by MutedTempest.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63160
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    Alice has nightmares, Dana has concerns, cars and jets, (this feels like a summary for West Side Story now), and some happy fluffy Danish stuff.

    They’d only been asleep for an hour or so before Alice had another nightmare. She’d been having them a lot lately, and they were making her nuts because no matter how hard she tried to go back to sleep, every time she closed her eyes she’d see the image of Dana in a casket, and it scared the fuck out of her. Great, she’d be up for hours now and they had to pick up Shane and her many housemates and meet Helena at the airport at 11. After checking to make sure Dana was still breathing, she sighed and threw on some sweats and a t-shirt and made her way to the couch, closing the bedroom door behind her.

    It was only a little after eleven, but there was nothing interesting on TV, as usual. Alice put it on mute and got her laptop off the coffee table. Half an hour later, she was busy researching breast cancer survival rates and didn’t hear Dana open the door and walk up behind her. The hand that was suddenly in her hair made her jump about a foot off the couch, and when she landed she turned her head and scowled at a smiling and very naked Dana.

    “Jesus motherfucking Christ. I think I’m gonna ask the hospital for a defibrillator to go along with your meds the next time I go get them refilled. Fuck.”

    “I’m sorry! I wasn’t trying to scare you,” Dana mumbled, but it was pretty obvious that she was laughing.

    “Right, sure you weren’t.”

    “I wasn’t! Well, not intentionally, but that was cute. What are you doing out here anyway?”

    “Couldn’t sleep, and I didn’t want to bother you…which apparently I did anyway. I’m sorry I woke you up, Dane.”

    “You didn’t. Well, sort of. I noticed you weren’t there when I tried to hug you, and I got cold so I came out here to drag you back in.”

    “You probably wouldn’t be so cold if you had clothes on, you know,” Alice scolded, grabbing the blanket off the back of the couch and standing up to wrap it around Dana’s shaking shoulders. “Not that I mind seeing you naked or anything, but you’re sick. You have to stop doing stuff like this, sweetie.”

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    1. Awesome update! I loved it! I love fluffy Danish. I was having a bad day, and fluffy Danish has put a smile on my face. :) When I saw “la di da”, I started singing the song, while continuing to read… “You’re all la di da, driving around in your”…and low and behold, your next line is “Must be nice, taking your sweet time driving around in your flashy car.” It made my day. Oh…thank you for saving me from watching season 3 over :) I’ll stay away. Great job on the update. I can’t wait for more.

    2. This story is so amazing. I love every second of it and I wan’t wait to see what happens next. I couldn’t help but laugh at the reference to the Murmurs lol It made the song play in the my almost immediately. Gosh, my day was sort of dragging and a danish fix is exactly what I needed. Please continue, I’ll be anxiously awaiting your next update! :) You’re fabulous!

    4. Another wonderful chappy. Poor Dana – Alice was way firm (wait…what?) I mean stern in the shower – Alice nekkid and no fun stuff – that’s just cruel – but she made up for it – Yay!

    5. Aww i love this story so much. Another brilliant part. Not sure if it was deliberate or if you are a fan of The Murmurs but i loved the miss la di da comment :) PPS!

    6. Okay, I’m sure I’ve reached new levels of loserdom by commenting on my own story, but yes, it was indeed deliberate! Every time I watch that scene the tune goes through my head. And that’s enough loserdom for one night.

    8. This is great!!! I just love this story…I was hoping for the story to go this way!!!I love this line: “I love you, Alice. It’s always been you, baby.”Once again Bravo!

    13. LMFAO @ Muted commenting on her own story. ;) Ohhh, I like fluffy and happy Danish. This is just what I needed after the week I had. And believe me, you can not wreck it by taking this wonderful D-tour from the original storyline. Again, everything made somuch more sense, the look Alice and Dana shared at the basketball game. I always wondered what happened during and after the basketball game. I think I’ve got the answer now. :DSo I know that there are going to be rough times…but can you be bribed once in a while when some loveydovey pics of Danish are posted over at mediablvd? :P

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