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Would She Part 12
Previously
Tina felt her fingers getting wetter and pulled in deeper. When she noticed Bette’s body jerking she knew she had done it. She knew she had pleased the one person that mattered, the one to be forever a part of her.
When Bette’s breathing calmed, Tina slowly removed her fingers. Tina licked them dry and licked around Bette’s very swollen lips. She slid up beside Bette to hold her in her arms. Bette just lay there, still shaking, and tears claimed their eyes because they felt safe in their love. And they knew it would forever be this way between them.
“I love you Tina,” Bette whispered in Tina’s ear.
Back to the present
Tina stood in the middle of the airport. She became angry. If she loved me as she said, why did she cheat on me? Why did she hurt me so? Why in the fuck did you mess things up between us, Bette?
Tina always returned to those questions. She walked out of the airport right past Bette, whose back was turned. Although in the middle of a conversation with the porter, something distracted Bette and made her heart jump.
Something powerful made her turn.
CHAPTER 12
Before Bette turned completely around she stopped herself.
Bette don’t do this to yourself. Don’t pretend to feel someone that doesn’t want you. Don’t pretend to feel a connection for someone who has been out of your life for years. Don’t pretend to sense someone who took your daughter away from you.
These were the thoughts running through her mind. Bette turned back to face the porter.
“Thanks I’ll take it from here,” Bette said to the porter who was flagging down a cab for her.
Neither Bette nor Tina realized their connection was too strong to fight. As Tina climbed into the cab she thought about how she hasn’t heard from Henry in weeks and Bette thought about losing Candace.
Could it be since distraction was no longer present their connection was resurfacing and growing stronger? Or was it the long buried hope of finding and loving each other again after all these years?
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I feel for any child that has a Uncle John. Poor Henry, feel for him. I guess the word that Bette used was the beginning of something,but Tina is still so bitter toward her over Candance. So glad that for Yrs that Angie has Bette as a pen pal. It helped her in her youthand as an adult. thanks
WaaaaHHHHh! I want more. Why did you stop there? PPS, pleeease!
Excellent chapter Michellia. Henry’s past is indeed very sad,I can’t imagine the pain he must be in. Hopefully he opens up to someone and seeks therapy. This is fixin’ to be some drama here though with B&T. Tina’s still rightfully mad about the affair,probably still hates Candy somethin’ awful. I wonder how she’ll react when Bette tells her she married Candace and had children with her.And oh yea, the grandbaby was named after them too.Oh damn, I can’t wait for this conversation.PPS.
Oh Man, you better not have any plans for the weekend, except writing the next chapter LOL. No really this is just getting better. Thanks for taking the time.
I agree so not fair. PPS
Wow, this was the last thing I thought was going on with Henry. I don’t even know what to say. That indeed was well executed. What triggered him? B&T are finally meeting, huh? PPS
I just love the layers of this story and your writing style. Parts were difficult to read which happens when you dig deeply into character and motivation. Bravo and I’m ready for more.
Great story. You are able to make Henry be a sympathetic character and that says alot. Looking forward to seeing B&T rekindle their love
Do you watch Lawn and Order: SVU? Just asking ‘__’ Do ever get tired of all these compliments? :] Again, just asking ;] Well, I’d gush and gush, but I kind of want to nag also because you left off at a very critical moment! gave the sharp breath and widened eyes effect: 0o0 eh, you get the general idea…
Ahh this is getting so good and excited. Pleas post soon, thanks!
Anumgenius……Yes I do watch Law & Order SVU…..One of my favorites next to CSI Miami……Do I get tired of the comments…..NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was deep. I feel Henry’s dilemma; sometimes you can’t trust people and sometimes you just want to forget. Tina and Bette finally see each other, their connection is stronger than ever. What will happen next? Next chapter please.
I can’t believe I feel bad for Henry. But I also cannot believe you left off where you did. Theirs gonna be fireworks before the flame reingnites.
Oh, wow, this is getting really good!!! Looking forward to the next post. I can’t help to wonder what was Tina’s thougths with her Grandchild’s name?
Poor Henry I feel so much sorrow for him. No one and I mean no one should go through such a thing. They way you write this story is just amazing, so much dept, so much longing. I hope Angelica soon finds out the truth. Please don’t let us wait to long luv.
Omigosh! HOW CAN YOU STOP HERE? Baby, so much is happening here…very, very deep about Henry. And such a strong connection still between B & T, along with the revelation of Bette’s significance to Candace. Once again, and awesome story, and you MUST post the followup immediately!
It is getting exciting. Can’t wait for them to meet. PPS.
great update longer
OMG! That is sooooo not fair. I wanna know what happened after that. Come on. Post soon. Can’t wait. :)
okay you have to post the next chapter now…pleaseeeeeeeeeee…I just can´t wait…:-)
WOW! Post Soon!
Wow it’s hard to believe that a connection so strong can go astray so badly. There is a lot of water these two need to wade through. Seems they aren’t the only ones. I never thought I would be saying this Poor Henry. Nice job
Perfect choice of word to give away Bette’s presence. Not sure why, but it made me laugh. I love this story SO much. Intense. Can’t wait for more!
ok here we go
You have to feel horrible for anyone that has gone through what Henry went through. Although this story is fictional, it’s scarey knowing that there really are Uncle John’s out there preying on the innocent. You did a great job telling this part of the story. I hope B & T can start talking openly and honestly with each other. Can’t wait for more Chell!
Mich sweetie you can NOT stop there NOT now please come on give us more this weekend. Wow I really wasn’t prepared to find this out about Henry, I always disliked him but now I guess I have to change my mind about him but he definitely needs to tell this to Tina, after all they have a child together
IMHO, Connections as strong as what B & T share don’t ever go away. Time apart will only make their re-connection that much stronger; and during the time spent apart, I hope they’ve learned enough to not make the same mistakes once given another chance to be together again. Henry – WOW! I’m delighted that your are telling HIStory. I thank you wholeheartedly for addressing this subject matter. I cant believe I’m going to say this, but circumstances warrant it – Poor Henry! The nature of this subject always leaves so many unanswered questions. I understand Angie feeling like Henry should just tell her mom the truth, but how do you tell something like this. Come to think of it, you never did say what truth Angie thinks he should tell; if she knows of his past, how did she find out? PPS Baby!!
What Henry went thru…no child should have to endure. I think he started to pull away when his son was born because in the back of his mind a small part of him wondered would he do that to his son (sometimes that happens) He definately needs to talk to someone…but I got the feeling he was thinking of killing himself…How will Tina feel when she finds out that not only was Bette there for Angelica but the woman who came between what her and Bette had was a big part of her daughter’s life…that’s alot to take in. And if she sees that letter where Candace said Bette & I consider you a daughter…oh my goodness I can’t imagine how she will respond. I am glad they got the chance to see one another maybe they will get a chance to talk. Will Marcus bring Angelica to Bette on the island? Keep posting I love this story.
Hello Mich, Long time no comment but have been lurking and loving your wonderful words and drama. This is a fabulous piece of fan fiction; another magnificent addition to your storytelling resume. This was a difficult chapter to read however one that sensitivily dealt with the most horrific of events; the abuse of children. Thank you for highlighting this all too often event with the respect and lightest of touches. Powerful narrative that seems to educate and entertain. Brilliant. Yout Loyal Fan.
That wasn’t even nice! I am playing catch up on my reading and I don’t see another post from you yet. Please post soon.
you are so bad… and oh so good… how could you just stop there… please continue soon
Wow. That’s all I can really say. PPS!