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Love and Pride chp 19
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Love and Pride chapter 19
ONE WEEK AFTER CHAPTER 18
Bette took her new shirt out of the bag and carefully removed the pins and hooks. The door opened and Helena entered – she was just in bra and pants
“Will you help me decide what to wear tonight? “
Bette threw her shirt on the bed and wandered into Helena’s room.
There were five shirts on the bed and several pairs of trousers hanging on the curtain rail
“Why are you worrying about what to wear – you look great in anything “
“Dylan is cooking for me tonight “
“Oh so you are having a little quality time with her – getting serious ?”
“Its going okay “ Helena admitted
“I’ve been so busy this week I’ve hardly had chance to catch up with you – you up for something tomorrow or Monday ? “
“I got to get an essay in for Monday but I fancy cooking tomorrow night – you seeing Tina ? “
“No “
Bette picked up a couple of shirts and looked around at the trousers
“Eh – -the blue shirt with the blue jeans and maybe the knitted waistcoat “
Helena looked at the clothes that Bette had picked out
“Yes that would work – tell me how your week has gone. I have been so busy what with Dylan and getting the Law paper done. Its been insane – I didn’t see you at all from Wednesday “
Bette sat on the bed and watched Helena brushing her hair.
“So how are things going with Tina ? “
Bette smiled
“I — she is wonderful Helena . I just want to be with her all the time “
“And she feels the same way about you ? “
“Totally. We just feel so comfortable when we are together. We talk about everything – really serious stuff as well as daft things. No one has ever made me laugh as much as Tina can. We were in the library working together the other afternoon and we just kept setting each other off laughing – we were getting so many dirty looks but that just made it funnier “
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Well here’s to next Saturday…I will clear my calender…I am sure it will be hot.
This is so good and Im with skycaptain, cant wait to see on next Saturday, hot stuff coming. Hope Tina and Helena will be friend and be nice to each other. OK post soon please, thanks!
No more white lies for Tina. Oh and can’t wait till the DEED happens but I hope they lighten up a little, relaxed and let them enjoy the ride.
Haha… Still trying to decide if the last bit was a nice promise or also a bit of a tease… Knowing you i guess a bit of both! lol… Okay, up until now I thought they were just cute together. Now I think they are cute and oh so HOT! I agree with Helena, let those inhibitions fade out and we’ll have one hell of a new sexy couple on the campus scene! You know, I expect some hot and creative NC-17, geographically speaking… About Tina, i don’t know, I don’t think it’s such a big deal, I think both are trying to spare Bette, and they both seem intelligent and caring enough to keep it that way. I mean, Helena still has to deal with the situation and Tina doesn’t trust her (and even though I think Helena is really behaving, I can’t blame Tina after what Helena did to her and then told her in the library), but I’m not sure about the ‘need’ to tell Bette about something that would make her feel unconfortable… Anyway, that’s your shot Ally! Thanks for posting, I’ll never get enough of this!
You know just how much I love this story Ally and this chapter–well what can I say. I don’t think I have to say anything because since you know me so very well my friend you do know how I feel about this one. I just want to tell you—yes I do believe and thanks for believing too, because that’s what friends are for.
Poor Bette, she is brave enough to go without a bra and Tina doesn’t notice LOL. I love how Tina is understandable causious of Helena, GOOD ally, really, really GOOD :o). Please check your PM’s.
whoa, whoa, whoa….let’s back things up a minute. With the way Bette and Tina are talking about what they’d like to do to each other and how they fantasize about the other while touching themselves I can’t believe they are not jumping each other right then and there. Talk about restraint! And why is everyone (in the story-Tina, Frankie, etc.) so down on Helena? It was a pretty big thing for Hels to give her sister the go ahead to go after Tina and now everyone is talking about keeping an eye on Helena’s actions. I think Helena truly loves Bette and wouldn’t d anything to intentionally damage the bond they so obviously share. So what about another week until Bette and tina do the deed; gosh I sure hope Helena is home that night to hear that one-talk about slow torture. Post soon please and loving the L Wing as well so if you post both updates I’ll be really thrilled.
BetteforTina…Helena can’t get on with her life for worrying about Bette & Tina’s sex life…SHE WANTS TINA…yes she loves her sister and wants her happy…but she wants her sister’s woman also…she knows it…and Tina knows it or she wouldn’t have made it a point to kiss Bette in front of Helena…I hope Tina isn’t playing a catch me if you can game with Helena either.
damn, do you ever write bad stuff? lol every story you write is so damn good! I love this interaction between bette and tina. i’m glad that tina is on guard about hell-ena… i just hope that they don’t end up hurting bette. we know how you are, ally! but we also know that you’ll make our b/t alright in the end! thank you!!!!!!!!!!
I think Helena’s obsession with Tina is an issue of the one who got away. They have no relationship so Helena should be able to move on, but her pride is hurt so she can’t let go. I get the title Love and Pride. But Pride comes before the fall so hopefully Helena will get a gut check and not interupt these young lovers.
I luv this fic. Bette and Tina are so cute in all their innocence. The only problem I have is with Helena. It seems as if everyone sees her as the bad guy when she is trying so hard for Bette’s sake. She wants her sister to be happy so badly that she lives in misery. Really if she didn’t have Bette’s best interest in mind, she wouldn’t have given them her blessing. I think everyone should let up and give Helena a chance.
Ally, as i read your story, can’t help but reflect what u told me many months ago..that for every person there is a special someone, and i just need to wait to find out..needless to say, she waited for me..i just want to say thank you! my life is surrounded now with 3 beautiful women…to C, who makes my life “sane” in this complex world of mine and to you and R for being the type of friend eveyone will envy to have..thank you for this story
Talk about restraint, these two give new meaning to the word. I can understand Bette taking it slow cos she’s the novice, but I’m surprised Tina isn’t pushing forward just a bit more. Definitly cute, can’t wait for Saturday. Everyone needs to lighten up on Helena, maybe if they all stopped bugging her about it she could move on. So, one got away, like thats never happened to anyone before.
Is it next week yet? Can’t wait for the next date with these two amazing women. What exactly does Helena know about Tina that she is not going to tell Bette about?
I don’t have a problem with Helena. Like someone else said, if she didn’t want Bette to be happy she wouldn’t have told Bette it was fine for her to date Tina. I really think she’s trying to do the right thing and she really is happy for Bette. As for the period phobia, um, I’ve been there and done that and its not something I’d really want to do again. Granted it was with a guy but still. During that time I want everyone (and I do mean everyone) to leave me the hell alone. I enjoy a slow burn but if they’re ready then they should go for it. I personally have a very hard time allowing anyone to get that close to me hence why I’m so reluctant to see them have sex so quickly. It’s just a demon of mine.
Ally – this is so good. Your writing is just awesome. You write them beautifully. Can’t wait for more!
Ally – this is so good. Your writing is just awesome. You write them beautifully. Can’t wait for more!
Love this series…I also love L-Wing (hint hint.
The interaction between Tina and Bette is awesome. But Helena made comment about Tina that got me to thinking. I know Tina does not trust Helena as she should not, but please do not let her be deceitful in her actions, and they end up hurting Bette. Let her play nice w/Helena!!! That’s for the post. My fav after Long.
Yippee! They’re getting closer to the DEED! Bet it won’t take them long to getting over their period phobias. Wouldn’t be surprised if they start getting them in synch, either. I can understand Tina’s reluctance to dwell on her mother, but she needs to stop telling Bette fibs in regards to Helena, even small ones. Tina and Helena can be tolerant of each other for Bette’s sake without resorting to such behavior. And NO DISCO music! Thanks, Ally. (What can I tell you? I’m listening to 60s era Joni Mitchell as I type. I woke up and it was a Chelsea morning.)
so love this and The L Wing….(need a GREAT UPDATE OF THAT SOON). Helena needs to chat with Bette and let her know how she feels, they are so close to lose that bond over jealousy and fears of losing ones place because of a lover.
They sure know how to ‘warm’ each other up… and us too for that matter ;) ‘Next saturday’ please :D And hope Tina would tell Bette all about her ‘plan’ on staying on campus during holidays… and yea, agree with the others… Hel and T be nice to each other from hurting Bette…
funnyone – the DEED!!! sounds way to formal to me. but yes getting over their period phobias will be good. ya crack me up.ally damn fine chappy. its so sweet and tender. hoping that when the DEED is done that hot and sweaty. thanks honey.
Oh wow! Can’t wait for saturday Ally :)
Tina’s little fibs are eventually going to come back and bite her in the ass, aren’t they? Well, I, personally, don’t see anything wrong with how slowly they’re moving, especially considering Bette’s never even dated before. I think it’s a very realistic pace considering the circumstances, and I love it!
ALly, That was perfection! Tina and Bette really are moving their relationship forward at their own pace. Wonderful to see that the emotioanl love was there before they embark of the joys of the physical act. Interesting to see both Helena and Tina’s thoughts about each other but I am sure their love of Bette will overcome their current confused states. Loving it. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
oh yeah??? we have to wait a week???? make a week go very fast, please.
Oh my…you are trying to kill me, I know it. Thanks for the update.
Yee look forward to the big moment to, great chapter
Thanks for the update on both of these fantastic stories!!! L-Wing, anyone???
Great, I was catching up with these series as well and I can only say that I’m amazed, this story is so beautiful and tender it warms my heart. Keep up the good work Ally, you’re one hell of a writer.