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MYSTERY NEVER SOLVED part3
You can stop thinking about it… but you can’t forget
So I’m here at my apartment. Two weeks have past since the little incident between me and Carmen. The guys never knew, so that’s good. The next day I told the guys about the bag. They did ask me why I didn’t tell them sooner. They know it’s hard for me to do this, so they bought the lie that, I was figuring out what it meant. Well technically… it’s not a lie. Then I told them that I thought she was in her old house. This time they didn’t ask why. And I was totally ok with that. So we went there fully armed. I knew she wasn’t going to be there. I knew she was already gone. So later, we went back home to downtown LA. And here I am…
It’s sad you know…We lived together for almost 2 years… I remember how we met, like it was yesterday… I was getting out of a bad relationship. Real closet case. She broke my hart telling me she was going to mary this guy, I didn’t know about. But apparently, lot’s of people did. A month later, I was still devastated about the fucked up situation and wanted to get fucking drunk, so that I wouldn’t feel the pain that was eating me alive. I went to this place cold… The Planet….
<(FLASHBACK)>
(Shane/Planet/ Lots of people)
(Really cool place. I knew the owner, Kid. Her sister and I used to date, so… But there she was. She was the DJ…Kid saw the look I gave her.)
“ok, Shane I will introduce you to her after she’s finished” what can I say…
So after she was finished, Kid introduced us we got a table and started to talk. I don’t know why I felt so comfortable with her. I told her about my job and why I became an Agent. She seemed intrigued by my old, sad story.
(Now I know why… That’s what she meant when she said “and I know you know what I’m talking about Shane” some thing like that, the last time we confronted each other… Anyway back to the story)
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(30 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Goodness, Shane must be so torn up about the whole situation. She wants to see and be with Carmen, because she loves her. However, if she does find Carmen, Shane’s job is to send her to jail. It’s an unenviable conflict. I loved the flashbacks, and I was shocked that Shane cheated on Carmen and kept it from her for so long. I guess it was on of her more shameful moments. Now I’m wondering what Shane will do next. Will she use their recent fight to find the strength to arrest Carmen, will she try to ask for forgiveness, or will she do something else entirely? Can’t wait to find out. Great update, keep it up. :D
great update.. im totally hooked to this story… love the flashbacks… could someone please kill cheri jaffe..lol.. please continue like NOW… thanks
This is fuckin’ awesome!!! Ya’ had me hooked from the start, Baby!!!! I bet Shane is really goin’ through HELL right now!!! I’d want my fuckin’ heaven too . . . I just can’t wait ’til you update again . . . I want more!!! I need my fuckin’ fix, Chicka!!!! LMFAO!!! Whelp, ya’ got a loyal fan in this tomboy and I love ya and I love this!!! So just post soon and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!!
So Cherie Jaffe was the woman with whom Shane cheated on Carmen? Cherie Jaffe? Ugh. Don’t get me wrong, lots of chicks half her age would kill for a body like hers, but still… she’s no Carmen. Oh, and another question: did Shane cheat more than once? The other chick made it seem like it was an ongoing thing (“You were sleeping with me and coming home to her”), but Shane talked about it like it just happened once (“It was that time when we had that enormous fight”). I don’t know what to believe! [*grumble* And God! I can’t BELIEVE I misspelled “one” in my previous post. I feel so stupid! *grumble, grumble*]
this story is great
Pls update soon and more drama, please.