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Heaven Can Wait – Episode 11: Inside
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Stiltskin – Inside
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"If you believe it…
Don’t keep it all inside."
She lies in bed, not quite asleep yet not quite awake as thoughts run through head. What is she doing here? Why is this happening? Does she even know how she feels. Lara is plagued by these thoughts as she feels a hand softly drape over her body, followed by another. Immediately beside Lara is Alice who rests comfortably in the middle. On the other side of the bed is Dana, whose left hand is with Alice’s as they drape across Lara’s left shoulder, then chest as Lara rolls to her back. Lara feels Alice’s head lean against her now as she begins to accept the moment and close her eyes.
She feels the loneliness of the room and the couch and rises from it. There’s a feeling of resentment tonight for Carmen. She stands up and walks over to the door to the bedroom of her and Lara’s suite. She slowly opens the door to peek inside. Perhaps she came back while Carmen was passed out. Nothing. Nothing is there. No one is there. Carmen grimmaces and bites her lip, closing the door. She’s gotta do something, she thinks. This isn’t right. What can she do? Anything? It’s not she could just barge in or knock on the door… Carmen thinks on that for a moment…then walks to the door leading to the hallway. She opens it and walks out, with her key in tow.
Lara can hear a soft moan from Dana, but she feels one from Alice. She lifts up her right arm and places her hand over the left hands of Alice and Dana. She looks down as her heart begins to flutter and her mind begins to race. She isn’t sure what she feels more of…arousal or fear. All of that subsides suddenly as she feels an aura from outside. Lara closes her eyes and with Alice and Dana with her in bed, Lara’s closed eyes see a distraught Carmen. Her eyes open and widen, almost causing a full gasp as she rolls out of the bed to her feet.
Carmen stands there at the door, her right knuckles grazing against it. She prepares to knock…but can’t. She stops herself before she can make any loud contact with the door to the suite. She shakes her head, leaning her head against the door now. Nothing about this seems fair to her. A tear rolls down her face as she backs away from the door and slowly makes her way back to her own suite. Everything feels like a lost cause.
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That’s been building for a while. I get the feeling it’s going to be a bit of an emotional roller coaster for a while. I’m in! ;-) Welcome back!
man im so glad ur back!! im glad alice expressed her feelings towards lara. and plz let lara be sorry for being away not for kissing alice! by the way, was the light in dana’s bedroom tunred off? or maybe dana couldn see properly.. lolanyway good chapter but it was very brief. looking forward to the next one!
Who’s zoomin who? My head’s spinning. Just what, my dear Al, are you proposing? Whilst a… ménage à trois could be intruguing, someone always gets left out. And what of young, meh-tastic Carmen? A ménage à quatre? Ugh, no. Scratch that. The idea can’t be borne. I’m enjoying the story, tri- or quadrangles aside, and I hope you post soon. Cheers, kace
WOW!! Great stuff. Lara is the cast member that I can most relate too. Glad to see she’s finally getting the attention she deserves. good job!!
Yay for updates! Oooooh I like the ambiguity of the ‘this is about us…’ comment. So which ‘us’ does Alice really mean? ‘Us’ the two of them or ‘us’ the three of them? Urgh, and Dana still seems so passive towards Lara. What is up? I love that I don’t get it 100%, makes for good reading, lending to tension and even better fanfic. BTW, thanks for giving us some Lara Substance instead of having her regulated to the Plot Device Backburner (thanks for nothin’, IC!). I’m not sure what the deal is with Lara and Carmen. LOL too at your dick jokes comment. I can’t wait to find out more. Please post soon!
That was very intense and i hate to say this but,that was HOT!Lara and Alices kiss i mean! Thanks for another great update and again gr8 work!!!! PPS
now that has been building for a while but what will happen now please post soon I love it great update
thanks for finally posting… i was going through withdrawal, checking every week to see if the next chapter came in but it didn’t..so i stopped checking until today. :D i’m glad youre back and with more chapters…. i like where you are going with this…. :)