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You (Part the Thirteenth)
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Dana heard the door open, even though Howie was trying to be as quiet as he could. He didn’t see her open her eyes and turn her head to look at him as he walked out, and she grinned at the sight of his black running shorts and an old Nike t-shirt. He was wearing his old, beat-up Pumas and carrying his gym bag, so she figured he was going out for his morning run. She raised herself up to look over Alice’s sleeping form at the alarm clock, and shook her head when she saw it was just past six. The kid had dedication. She smiled and snuggled back into Alice, hoping to get a couple more hours. For some reason she always slept really well over here.
She was next awakened by her cell phone ringing in the kitchen, and jumped up to get it before it could wake Alice up. Of course, she barely made it considering she was a lot weaker than normal, and Alice’s apartment had a weird layout. She basically had to move in a sort of circle through the living room to get to the kitchen door, and Alice had a bunch of files stacked on the living room floor that made it difficult. She somehow managed, though, and walked slowly back to the living room with the phone.
"Sure, I’d be honored. No, really, next weekend is great. Is there anything special you need me to do?" There was a pause. "Okay, I’ll get started on it right away. Thank you so much for including me." She’d barely hit "end" before the damn thing rang again. "Hello? Yes, this is Dana Fairbanks…oh my God, hi!…Yeah, I’d love to! Two weeks from Saturday is perfect. Thank you so much."
Alice flopped back over on her side, hoping Dana hadn’t seen her move. She didn’t appear to have as she climbed back in the bed silently, so Alice just stayed silent until she felt Dana kiss her shoulder and bury her nose in the crook of her neck, inhaling deeply. "Dana, please tell me you didn’t just sniff me," she said, trying not to laugh at Dana’s deer-in-headlights expression as she rolled over to face her.
"You shouldn’t fake being asleep like that, Alice! Not fair. And I like how you smell. We agreed that we wouldn’t have sex, not that we couldn’t smell each other," Dana pouted, snuggling into Alice again and sighing as she felt her head being massaged.
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Babbling, crappy story lines….that’s not what I read. I loved it. Hope to read an update soon, or when you can. You’re doing great!
Muted…this was a very sweet chapter and really hit a lot of emotional truth. Feel free to babble like this anytime! Looking forward to your next update…
Ditto to what everyone’s said…this fic is awesome, can’t wait to read more. PPS
Yup! it totally drop kicks pancake ass. It’s that good. I found Helena being all authoritative in the kitchen sort of hot – it may have been the props – err…yeah – great chapter.
More more more :D I love your take on danish! I wish season 3 had gone like this so much. I love Alice in this fanfic, if she and Dana break up can I have her :P xx
Ok. So I have failed miserably on the commenting thing, and I actually just got a chance to catch up on this story. Which is absolutely fan-fucking-tastic! You make the characters so damn real, and I love that! It actually kind of makes me forget all about season 3, which is usually hard to do! I can’t wait to see where you take the rest of this beautifully written story! :-)
Wow you’re fast! I just caught up with the last two chapters (the last one was really powerful). I love it. I have to admit that when times get rough in the Danish department I usually scan the fics…but with this one I don’t. Although it’s sad, I love the way you describe the interaction between these two. :D
Brilliant as usual. So many parts all in the space of a few days!! :) I really will need to start writing again too. Keep it up, i love this story!
Totally wonderful as usual. I have no idea why you think you are rambling and not making sense but if that is the case then I am totally screwed up cuz it makes perfect sense to me. I love it as usual. You following true to life which is messy and makes so sense alot so I guess you are right on track. Keep up the excellent work and I am sorry so of this stuff is hard for you but I am glad you are facing it.
Wonderful, Just Wonderful!Keep Up The Good Work!!
Oh muted,you write so good,this update was just awsome! That was so cute Dana sniffing Alice so cute! Thanks again for the wonderful update babe! PPS
Great Update – as usual. Shane’s reaction to catching Alice and Dana kissing was priceless. Imagine if she had come in a few minutes before! lol Did you set up Alice’s date early in the update?
I love it and I can only hope that dana gets better soon and that you will post again soon great update