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    Lost In Love Chap 25

    Story written on November 17, 2006 by mindbender.
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    IT’S FINALLY HERE!!! DATE NIGHT!!! Will Tina win back her love???

     

    Bette walked through the door, looking for Tina.  She left work at 4:30 to insure that she would be home in time.  She couldn’t concentrate anyway, so trying to do much work was futile.  She closed the door behind her, and dropped her briefcase.

     

    “Tina?  T, are you here?”  Bette crossed the room and walked toward the kitchen.  She spotted a single red rose on the counter, with a note underneath.

     

    Go into the bedroom and change.  Be ready by 6:00.  Love, Tina

     

    Bette grinned as she looked at the note. ‘What are you up to?’  She put down the paper and headed for the guest room.  As she entered the room, she noticed another rose and note on the bed.  Sitting down, Bette took a moment to enjoy the fragrance of the rose, then picked up the note.

     

    I hope that you like your outfit.  I can’t wait to see you.  Love, T

     

    Bette looked around.  Hanging on the closet door was a hanging bag with a white bow attached.  Removing the bow, Bette unzipped the garment bag and removed its contents. She stepped back and held out the stunning smoky gray suit and matching blouse.  “This is absolutely gorgeous.”  Bette grabbed the garment bag to open the closet in a search for the perfect shoes.  She noticed that there was something left in the bag.  She reached in the shoes and pulled out a box.  Opening it, Bette discovers a pair of Jimmy Choos that match the suit perfectly.  Bette just stood there for a moment, stunned.  A huge smile crosses her face.  “Oh, T…what are you up to?”

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    Bette gets changed and prepares for her date.  She is checking her makeup in the mirror when she hears the doorbell.  She walked to the door and opened it, expecting to find Tina on the other side.  Instead, there is a man dressed in a black suit with some kind of hat on.

     

    “Ms. Porter?”

     

    “Yes?”

     

    “My name is Benjamin.  I am a driver for Peabody Enterprises.  Ms. Kennard sent me.”

     

    Bette looked at the man for a moment.  “Is she here?”

     

    “No ma’am.  I have been instructed to drive you to her location.”

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    2. loving your story… i read a lot of your chapters last night at work… and had to log on and tell you… please continue to show us the love we all know is there between our ladies… thanks… and now its bette’s turn

    7. OMFG, you just matched that scene in season 2 episode 9. WOW, totally amazing. So sensual and loving, like it was rolling across the screen for my viewing pleasure.

    8. Wow thanks for this story. I have a hard time understanding the “taking back” that I read so often on this site. Seems that in love you don’t take, you accept what is freely given. Besides, Bette gave herself to Tina a long time ago, its Tina who chose to give herself to Henry instead. Bette doesn’t need to take Tina back, but Tina needs to give herself to Bette.

    12. If this is your first NC-17 I’m not sure will be able to handle your second. OMG! Reversed roles, Tina take the lead, and Bette can only reap the benefits.I agree with the others, this is how it should be in the show. Great job. IC are you paying attention.

    13. Wow that was amazing and fantastic, I loved it!!! And if this was your first NC-17 I’ll not survive in the future LOL. More please, I’m hooked.

    16. Mindbender, you just blew my mind! Fantastic job on the NC-17! Looking forward to reading about Bette returning the favor. And Tina sure knows how to sweep a girl off her feet!

    18. Don’t know if there’s a word for the opposite of writer’s block – but whatever it’s called, you’ve got it seriously right now, Mindbender. Don’t you dare look for a cure any time soon… ;-)

    19. HELL’S FIRE, AFTER SOMETHING LIKE THAT, I BELONG TO THEM TOO…….JEZUS….WHY CANT YOU WRITE FOR THE SHOW FOR REAL?? WE NEED TO REPLACE ILENE……UM……MY FIRST CHOICE AND NOMINATION IS THE MEDIC……..AHEM…OFF FOR THE COLD SHOWER NOW!!!! BE BACK…..

    20. wow! this was an amazing chapter and i can’t believe that this was your first NC17 because it was excellent! you doing great girl! congrats i hope to read the next one soon

    24. That was amazing. I started reading the first post and couldn’t take my tired, pregnant ass to bed. 1am here. Then the last chapter..damn…that was good. You keep writing..PG to NC-17…thanks.

    26. UM…has Stevie got Xavier with her???? and how great u can just hop on a plane, in my country you have to have passports and entry visa for the place you’re going to and u have a time limit set on how long u can be there…anywayz enjoyed Alice’s driving….

    29. Wow…that was amazing! I was away for 2 days and imagine my surprise when I logged on and saw 85 chapters from you…lol…it felt like Christmas! And I wasn’t disappointed at all all the chapters were amazing and to get to a NC-17 that was so romantic and so hot was the icing on the cake. I loved it! Keep posting.

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