LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 12, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Pretty Women, episode 9

    Story written on November 19, 2006 by justloveB+T.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    3 votes, average: 3.00 out of 53 votes, average: 3.00 out of 53 votes, average: 3.00 out of 53 votes, average: 3.00 out of 53 votes, average: 3.00 out of 5 (3 votes, average: 3.00 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 25
    Words: 3547
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63269
    Author Notes:

    All I want is your extra time and your… Kiss ‘Don’t you just love Prince?’ A Bette and Tina beginning based on the movie ‘Pretty woman’

     

    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

     

     

     

     

     we see a reshot on Tina fixing Bette’s tie, we hear their words about a certain job being illegal, but the blonde strikes back by stating:

    ‘Our professions are a lot alike, we both screw people for money’  #

     

     

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before the camera turns and we see them standing opposite eachother, staring at eachother intensly before Tina turnes and walks away, her head held up high…

    The song: ‘Kiss’ by Prince starts playing.
     

     

     

    #############################

     

    Pretty Women, Episode 9

     

     

     

     

    The brunette stood there, blinking, for several seconds after Tina had turned around and walked to the table to finish her breakfast. She caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror, and the smile that had been playing around her lips broke through fully.

     

    Bette Porter had found her match…

    Page 1 of 6123Next ›Last »

    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    2. i will start to think that B&TROX has some mindpowers, but is good to know that as me a lot of people is waiting for your post!, B&T however hard they try to hide their mutual attraction i don’t thinks they would end the week without a kiss (i hope so )what do you think? you know that i love your stories!

    7. I’m sorry, Julia who?… And Richard what? Never heard of them, but what a great new inventive story you have here!!! I’m actually not kidding… this gives a brand new dimension to that old thing from the 80’s…LOL! And I’ve gotta say that putting Peggy and Helena is those roles is just brilliant! And of course, i love that Eric gets to be the asshole! Okay, you pretty much know what I think about your writing my friend, but one again you blow me away! Lots of hugs!

    12. Life is good. A post from Helping Hand and NOW u. I just love this fic and the way u write it so that we are able to read and feel the emotion of the two characters SO VIVIDLY!!!! THANK U. Please post SOOOOON!! It also so much fun for me to read.

    13. So wonderful to come to the boards and find your story updated today. You are doing such an awesome job of making this story belong to Tina and Bette – it melts me everytime to feel their longing . I wait for your posts patiently knowing you will come through when you can – thanks so much for continuing to update this story that has so much warmth and so much love waiting to be expressed.

    14. You wanted to know what I think of this chapter…brilliant…you are taking a story that we all know and love and making it even better, oh how I would LOVE to see this version on the big screen. You are so amazing but of course you already know that…I am sure you are told that many times…just add mine to the list. I think Tina will have the time of her life this week and hopefully she will follow the path that Julia took in the original. Keep posting.

    16. i absolutely love your stories and commenting was never a sacrifice LOL…what a way to bring peggy and helena in, i can already see tina flirting with helena and bette getting all jelouse…and tina in a tub singing prince – priceless

    17. Hello there! I’m not a big Prince fan but I like that song. So the big moment began, they will have so much fun! PS: Loved the update, keep the chapters coming!

    21. Ah, my dear JLBT… another GREAT chapter :D I’m so happy right now that I think I can almost feel Tina’s joy for that ‘business proposition’ too ;) I want to see them KISSING…haha… LOL @ Kword ‘I’m sorry, Julia who?… And Richard what?’ definately agree with her… I LOVE Pretty Woman so much… but this Pretty Woman of yours has somehow crept into a much higher spot in my heart ;) post soon!! :D

    24. Ohh you sure make us wait :O) – glad to see the update and it sure put a big smile on my face and a laugh as well. This is sooo great and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Post soon

    25. What I want to know is, how do you do it…you slowly build up the tension, I’m going along with it and oeps…it vanishes again. Do you have any idea what this is doing with me huh. You know what, I want them to kiss, to kiss passionately, giving everything that’s in them, that’s what I really want. But unfortunately I’ll have to wait and wait and wait. Groot hoofstuk, ik heb er van genoten, bedankt.

    Leave a Reply