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You (Part the Fourteenth)
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Alice got up slowly, trying her best not to wake Dana. She wasn’t able to sleep, and it had more to do with the shit running around in her brain than anything else. She didn’t know what to do, but laying here with Dana certainly wasn’t solving anything.
It was only a little after eleven, so she figured she’d be safe in calling the one person besides Dana who she could confess anything to. She told herself that she was anxious over nothing as usual, but she felt completely torn up inside and she knew it was time to finally get this out of her system entirely.
"Al? What’s wrong? Is it Dana?" Shane answered worriedly, sounding as if she’d just woken up.
"No, no, Dana’s fine. She’s asleep. I’m sorry I woke you up, Shane, I just really need to talk to someone and I don’t want to bother Dana, you know?"
"Yeah, I understand. It’s fine, Al. You’re my best friend; you can talk to me anytime you need to. Do you want me to come over? We’ll be quiet. Or we can go for a drive or something…"
"No, come on over. She’s out like a light, and besides, I’m working up the guts to tell her this anyway, so it’s okay if she hears it. I mean I don’t want to bother her or anything but -"
Shane gave a little laugh, and Alice heard her fumbling with the door lock. "Yeah, I get it. We’ll be quiet so we don’t wake her up, okay? And Alice…relax, all right? I get the feeling you’re steeling yourself up for a big confession, and that’s cool, but don’t drive yourself nuts over it. There’s nothing you can tell me that’ll be bad enough to make me stop being your friend. You know that, don’t you?" She was sincere, but even that assurance didn’t stop Alice’s stomach from tying itself in knots.
"Everybody leaves, Shane…everybody’s got a condition," Alice whispered, unconsciously quoting Dana and hating herself for being so fearful about it all these years later. But she didn’t know how to stop.
"That’s true, and if you tell me the reason Dana’s out cold is because you smothered her with a pillow, yeah, I’d probably rescind my friendship. But come on, pretty much anything else you tell me is just you, Alice. I’ve got plenty of horror stories too, you know. Everybody does, which makes it really fucking stupid to take off on someone for being honest about them. That’s not me and you know it."
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Awesome love making, as usual. The ending though is making my heart stop. I feel some angst coming on. You are doing a beautiful job and there is no such thing as too many updates, bite your tongue. Just keep right on posting thank you very much.
Really awesome job. I love every part of this story, including the angst. You do such a great job of capturing the characters. And I really don’t think there’s such a thing as updating too much so… Can’t wait for the next one.
Aww no don’t break them apart, I don’t want Alice if she’s gonna be miserable without Dana :P Seriously though, fantastic chapter, I love your writing so much, it’s not corny in the slightest and you portray my girls so well. Keep it up xx
Great update, and there never be too many. Looking forward to the next one!
Great Update! So sad about how Dana feels…totally understandable…But better to have loved then to never love at all…cliche yes…but true!!!Can’t wait to the next post!
I don’t know if I’ve ever commented on this story or if I’ve just been lurking, but I really love your take on season 3 and I’m definitely a loyal reader. Please keep up the good work.
Never apologize for frequent updates! I see the set up for the date, but agree that Alice wouldn’t leave if Dana was upset, unless Dana forced her to go. On the show, they weren’t together like they are in your story, so not everything they did on the show will apply to your story. It’s late, and I have to get up early, so I will have to re-read the update tomorrow or so. I didn’t think Alice’s confession was as earth shattering as she feared, but did I mention it’s late? :-) I need sleep!
You are kinda starting to scare me with the Dane thinking about how Alice would deal if she died shit. You’re not gonna kill Dana off, are you?! Please, please, PLEASE say that Danish is going to live happily ever after! Anywho, this update was awesome. I love the fact that Danish are being completely open and honest with each other! :-)
I’ve been lurking for awhile but never commented, and it’s about time. This story is one of my absolute favorites, and your writing is so engaging and completely true to the characters. I agree with everyone else, no such thing as too many updates to this story! I’m interested to see how this is all going to play out, I know you’ve said you were a danish fan so I’m hoping for a happy ending (hint hint :)