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Broken Phone Calls Pt 3
As the house came into view Shane and Carmen remained quiet.. except for the few things said here and there they both remain uncomfortably quiet the entire time… neither of them could think of anything to say.. afraid it might come out wrong… then there was the added tension of not knowing where they stood… were they supposed to just go on being friends now after everything or do they begin again, slowly rebuilding their relationship…
After a month of waiting and worrying, here Shane was.. but Carmen noticed something was very different about the person sitting next to her…. the Shane she knew had always been reserved, quiet, and strong willed but the person sitting next to her was extremely tense and deathly silent… almost as if frightened by her presence… the second Carmen saw Shane at the planet, she felt her heart do flips in her chest but now with the increased silence… she was scared.. thinking maybe Shane changed her mind about them… "what now" was all she could think as she pulled into the driveway and turned off the ignition… turning slightly to look at Shane….
Shane at the moment had been thinking the exact same thing as Carmen…. unsure of how they were supposed to fix everything they had done to each other… except she knew now more then ever she needed and loved Carmen… she could only hope Carmen felt the same way…
Shane barely spoke the entire ride home because she was honestly scares… scared she might say the wrong thing and make their awkward situation worse… but at the same time, the way Carmen had acted at the club gave her a glimmer of hope that things might turn out OK with a lot of hard work… "i mean she did offer to drive us home and all…" Shane thought, then out of the corner of her eye saw Carmen staring intently at her causing her to jump slightly in her seat…
"what" Shane asked her tone calm.. almost a whisper, she didn’t want to wake up Shay…
"we’re here" Carmen whispered, stifling a laugh…
"oh… sorry."
"its okay… i was kind of in my head too.." Carmen told her honestly…
After Shane nodded in understanding, they both slowly got out of the car and grabbed their things, Shane carefully cradled Shay in one arm and picked up their only bag with the other… everything not destroyed in the fire fit inside the small backpack…
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(35 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
In the words of our dear Yoda “so fucking cute”
Absolutely loving it! It’s great that Shay almost immediately took a liking to Carmen; now she can give Shane a hand with taking care of the boy.
I say definately continue, this has great potential. I enjoy the domestic aspect of Shane she is very tuned in to Shay’s feelings… a new side of her that I would like to see more as you continue, Thanks for sharing with us.
shay must really like carmen!! that’s adorable! i’m glad i know a bit more bout what’s on carmen and shane’s mind. and man, sleeping to dj mixes when you’re 10. coolest kid ever! though i guess that’s a given when you live with shane and carmen. KEEP IT UP!!!
THANKS FOR THIS!!!! THANK U!!!! This is really great!!!!
Great story, keep it coming :o)
I think that this is the season 4 I would love to see…Shane and Carmen together. keep going
I think it is a fabulous story. I don’t usually read Sharmen stories, but this one has grabbed onto my heart, and I am truly enjoying every word, and every vision. Thanks!
i totally agree with everyone on here, this is the season 4 i want to see, happy sharmen together adn being all domestic and happy, your story is amazing as usual and sooooo well written. please keep it going its really really good. cant wait for the two of them to “talk” and get back to doing what they do best ….love each other way to go and please please update soon….this fic is what i look for everyday.
great
This story is so good. Keep going please!!! I can’t wait for the next update
This story is so good. Keep going please!!! I can’t wait for the next update
I love it you should absolutly continue this fic