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I Wish CH11
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I Wish CH 11
Bette sat at a table on the patio of the Planet with a tall glass of iced tea. The letter still sealed sat in front of her on the table. 20 minutes. I missed seeing her by 20 minutes.
Bette looked at her name in Tina’s smooth, flowing script. The sentiment of seeing her name in Tina’s handwriting brought a rush of sweet memories of the little notes Tina used to leave all over the house for her. The ones she was looking at only the day before as she packed her belongings to ready for the move to her new home. The hundreds of them she had saved over the years, and looked at more frequently than she would ever admit to anyone.
With a deep breath, she ran her nail under the flap she could envision Tina sealing with a languid lick of her tongue. Unfolding the neatly written pages, she tried to settled the nerves in her stomach before she began to read.
Bette,
I had all kinds of hope when I planned this letter out before I actually sat down to write it. Unfortunately all thought left my head as I put pen to paper. Where to start? There is so much I have wanted to say to you, yet this forum is not the place. It would take forever to write down all I need to say, and I don’t want to force you into hearing it if you don’t want. But I can try to make some amends in here I hope.
I knew as soon as those horrible things came out of my mouth back in Canada that I had made the biggest mistake of my life. I am so sorry for being that cruel, manipulative person who treated you so unkind, and mean for so long. I don’t know how I let myself get so out of control. I am trying to fix this horrible person I have become. I know I haven’t made any of this easy on anyone, but especially on you. For that, and so much else I am truly sorry Bette. Those words are so inadequate, as I am beyond sorry, I am ….I have no words for this, nothing I can say will ever be enough to tell you how devastated I feel for what I have done to you, and to us, and to our family.
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If Tina is so appalled at her actions she needs to understand how she got there so she doesn’t repeat the process. Therapy would be good for her. I think Bette is already on the other side of her angst and demons and sees herself and her life lot more clearly than Tina did. Taking money from Bette is about the only thiing Tina didn’t do to her wife.
I really like this. I think Tina was sincere (I know she better be) I am looking forward to the Angelica & Bette reunion…Bette’s insides were all torn up over that and to hold her baby would help her alot right now. I wonder what she will say when she finds out Tina bought the house. Keep posting please.
Wow, just read all the chapters for the first time today, and WOW! I’m definately pulling for a reconciliation, but they’re going to have to build up to it. It wouldn’t be right for them to just fall back together right away. There’s a lot of trust that needs to be restored and time for them to regain the confidence they once had in the love they share for one another. At least, that’s my feelings on the matter. But, it is your story.
Season 3 tore my heart out and left it for dead. Not sure what is going to happen in season 4 but at least we have ff writers who give us a little hope. Thank you for being one of those writers who stops the tears or at least changes the reasons why those tears are falling.
I’m a SAP for a predictable B&T Happy endings!! thank you.
Season 3 sucked so bad MY jaws hurt. I wish I could erase it from my memory. I only watched it once…it made me find the good points in season 2. I HOPE season 4 is much better…I haven’t even looked at spoilers I am trying to keep hope alive.
Predictable isn’t always so bad. Sometimes I like angst and sometimes I don’t.
Hey IC has provided enough angst for me to last a lifetime. I prefer anything but that! Thanks cdn – I love your writing and your story!
I like this, your version of a new perspective on B&T. (And the word ‘insane’ does explain a lot of Season 3… ;-)
Oh wow… As much as I would love to see them end up together, I’d rather see Bette be careful and not get hurt again… though, Tina does seems sincere…
i don’t like angst at all LOL…they have to meet
hmmmm… i see maybe there is hope… at least i hope so… please continue
Like Lamentamini said…Predictable isn’t always bad! PPS
WOW!!!! Now B&T need to sit down and talk not yell at each other. I so love your story. PPS
take it slow bette
Well, when you only have two choices…bring them back together, or not…it is hard not to be predictable. However, it is how you bring us to one of those two points that is the unpredictable part. And, that is what you have achieved with your story. This story, i.e. your writing keeps me totally interested, totally capitvated. Thanks!
I truly believe that Tina is sorry for the things she’s done and said, and that the last year has been like a hurricane for both of them. Realizing all of this is the first step. They have and always will belong together, the trust needs to be rebuilt, cos the love is always their.
oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh I so wanted more…of course I so want T and B 2gether but even B and Angel will do for a start and Bette forgive Tina please…let the craziness be over…
I will take your wonderful, predictable story and love it. They deserve to be together and happpy. thanks and pps
I just bought S3 DVD but not watch it yet and I don’t think I can watch it because every stories I read and everyone say is sad, painful and hurt alot, so hope S4 will get things better and get B&T back together. hope you’ll let B&T meet and let them talk and work thing out and get back together again. OK post soon please, thanks!