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Love and Pride — chp 22
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LOVE AND PRIDE – Chapter 22
Tina lent against Bette’s body and sighed with satisfaction. Being held by perfect girlfriend as they swayed to the last song “ Three times a lady “ by the Commodores was another wonderful feeling in a day of highs – with one pretty rubbish low.
Tina had wanted to win the race so much – she knew she was more than good enough to have finished several seconds ahead of everyone else. But her disappointment had been soothed by how wonderful Bette had been. She eased away and looked up at Bette and gently kissed her lips. Bette who had been a world of her own opened her eyes and smiled
“Nice “
“Want me to do that again ? “
“You could do “
Tina kissed Bette harder – easing her mouth open and pressing her tongue against Bette’s. The kiss went on for several minutes until Tina realised that the song had ended. She moved back and looked into the dark eyes
of the woman she loved
“Oh babe – I am so happy “
Bette smiled “ Me too – why don’t we go and get you a change of clothes and your jim-jams “
“I like that idea “
Bette kissed Tina “ I like being in love “
“So do I “
Tina glanced around “You realise we are the only couple still standing here holding each other ?”
Bette looked around and giggled “Come on “
They returned to their table were all their friends were watching them – everyone had a big cheesy grin on their faces – who could not be touched by how cute the new couple looked
“What ? “ Bette demanded with an even bigger grin on her face
Shane was the group spokesperson
“You two have not a single idea of how fucking cute you look together “
Bette blushed “ We’re heading off to Tina’s room “
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Talk about restraint, OMG, I don’t know how they do it. Come on Friday. Could you print it early cos I’ll be gone and won’t have access for a week.
So fucking cute! Loving that Bette is the cook! You know something reading this, the story has so much potential for some hard-core drama and I don’t know how you are resisting that urge to do so. I am curious as to what direction you would have taken it had your mates not persuaded you.
smiley has a point. We’re past 20 chapters and no major drama. Not that I’m asking for major drama but I agree there is some potential for it.
So fucking cute.
i was PLEADED with when i started this to make it drama free but I have had one or two ideas that might give you some action – let them enjoy themselves for now thou gals
Ally, I have complete faith that when they do finally “do it” that you are going to give them absolutely everything. Hmm, I wonder if the rest of the week will go off w/out a hitch…the waters have much much to calm the last while….
Don’t even think about being an EVIL DRAMA QUEEN in this story!! You have other stories you can go all psycho in!!!
what you do to us, Ally… but looks like we’re going to get lucky pretty soon. i can’t believe bette and tina managed to fall asleep, if i was one of them, i’d end up staring at the other all night long, touching them from time to time to make sure they’re real… uh, they’re incredibly sweet
oh yeah, i forgot to mention that i thought it was pretty hot when bette’s hand slipped under tina’s t-shirt, i had to stop reading for a moment to get my breathing back to normal.. what you do to me, Ally, what you do to me
There is something wrong with all this aldolescent restraint
Ally I love it…you’ve been doing this so well. Once they get the physical side of their relationship together, it will be even better now that they have expressed their love for each other verbally. It was absolutely perfect how you had Tina sing to Bette how she felt. They are so sweet together. I love it…can’t wait for more!
You stole my line, Mad Maggot…:) Just what I was gonna say… “You have no idea what you do to us Allyemmerson!!!” But I guess great minds think alike! … I’m with Jobadge on this one, don’t even think about drama with this story, especially now that you’ve called a certain presidential wedding off!!! Grrrr… Just kidding, I always like a little bit of drama, but how about waiting after the “corps a corps” marathon on Friday, and maybe even after you fix some appendicited-yet-engaged-President! Thanks for the sweet chapter Ally, although with no sex involved, the first night together with the one you love is so precious and deserves to be treated highly, and that’s exactly what you did!… I also loved the first physical touch… Veeeery promising indeed! ;)
What!?! “I’d like a couple of nights just holding each other”!?! PJs?!? Look, Emmerson this just isn’t going to work if you pair up 2 masochists. But then YOU’RE more than enough of a sadist for this situation. Would you fucking get these 2 laid already? They deserve it. We deserve it. Mercy! Uncle!
Thanks for posting great chapter bring on friday
So FREAKING cute!
drama free story is great, so if you have to bring some, don’t make it too hard on B&T, waiting patiently for next chapter
lol…@ funnyone…and I bet you had them in flannel pj’s didn’t you alley…you tease you. I am kind of torn about the drama maybe a little. Oh my goodness what do you know…it’s friday already…you know they say tuesday is the new friday right….please post soon
This story is so much fun. Hmm, drama, before they finally give in to each other or after?
i don’t know how they managed to just sleep but is a good thing that they waiting because the first they have to enjoy it and be sweet. I like the drama but the ligth drama then please if you are thinking something for this story make it light drama please!!!!! you have me waiting in the edge for the next one
I think I would have skipped class…what a sweet story you have given us. I’m with Jo. You can be evil, and are, in other stories. : ) Thanks, Ally.
I have no idea where they are getting the self-control.
Very sexy and as usual these two are sweet – but their restraint is almost unbelievable or is it just me.
you know what your doing to us tho. naughy girl you. thanks again.
bring on ch23…I love the image of these 2 which u have drawn…
Ooooo… what can we do to prevent drama from this story? *Sigh* with Ally’s ‘promise’ of drama and with Tina’s hesitation for physical intimate… looks like we gotta be fully prepared for drama… :(
Great, Ally! Please no drama. Let this story be all sweet and cute! LOL … Can’t wait for friday :D
I for one like the drama free zone you’re in with this story. Since L-Wing has lots of it. But any direction you go with be good since you’re so talented. Please write the next soon, so that I can say I am most thankful for getting a new Love and Pride chapter! Can’t wait for the sex marathon that must be coming considering the restraint these two or showing.
Aww they are so fucking cute and sweet, and can’t wait to see some hot love coming. Ok post soon please, thanks!