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    Love and Pride – chp 23

    Story written on November 22, 2006 by allyemmerson.
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    Morning love

    Love and Pride – chapter 23

    Bette tried for the fourth time to finish the final paragraph of the paper she was writing on American Politics. She could not concentrate and she knew exactly why – all that was in her head was one person – a blonde and beautiful person.

     

     

     

     

    The woman she loved – one Ms Tina Kennard

     

     

     

    She had been working on the sofa sitting with her knees up since about 8 o’clock when she had come back from a long run. Helena was sitting at the dining table beside the window also working steadily

     

    “Want a coffee Hel ? “

     

     

     

    “What I want is this freaking essay finished so i can go away tomorrow night without worrying about it “

    “Is it hard ? “

     

     

     

     

    “Not really – I am just — as Helena says an ill disciplined little first year”

     

     

     

    “Very romantic – what does she study ? “

    “Business and Law – joint majors – she showed me a dissertation she is writing for the end of term. 15,000 words. God I sit counting the words to get to 1500 “

     

     

     

     

     

     

    “You get used to it I guess “

     

     

     

     

    Helena collected her books and papers “I am going to work in my room – some music might help me concentrate “

    “You can put it on here “

     

     

     

    “No – it would distract you too much “

     

     

    “A marching band could not distract me as much as I am at the moment “

     

     

     

     

    Helena laughed “ Ahh – my sister is in love “

     

     

    “I am – totally “

     

     

     

     

    “I am really happy for you — you do know that ? “

     

     

     

     

    Bette nodded “ And I am happy you have found Dylan – I was really impressed with her. She really likes you “

     

     

     

     

     

     

    “I really like her – she works hard and plays even harder. I like that in my women “

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    5. The best part about this chapter is that you wrote it honest. True to what probably would have happened between two people who love each other and for the first time. Neither was overly confident/experienced, all very realistic. That is a credit to your dedication to this story and us readers…now of course Bette having a bit of help from shane….that I’m thinking would go just a bit different. Way to go ally, thanks!!!

    10. Wow ! So Bette’s been getting a few tips from Shane, huh ? LOL ! Nice prospects… Certainly very promising given her reputation. Besides, with Bette being a marathonian… LMAO ! Anyway, wonderful chapter, Ally ! This story is definitely charming and… Intoxicating. I knew you could not disappoint us… Now, I guess we are all ready for round 2, I mean part 2…

    12. God almighty, it’s about time! I am now prepared to forgive you for your sadistic delay in this coupling. See, girls? Just like falling off a log. Or maybe not. But anyway, I’m very glad the loving (physical variety) has commenced. Hmmm….tips from Shane. I think Tina’s in for the time of her life. I may be persuaded to take a few notes. And thanks for the nod to Joni, I wasn’t expecting Helena to be a fan.

    13. Oh, I think WE are in for something special Ally babe!… Hehehe! Tips from Shane??? Yeah, one Bette Porter always “comes” prepared!… Oh, Ally, once again, you’re my hero! Many great fics have this “scheduled and all planned” first time evening, and stick to it, and even though it’s always done wonderfully, I just always wish that the girls would rebel and say “You know what? We don’t want to wait, you writer might not be ready but we so are!”… and then they would go at it right there and the writing would just follow!… Well, you just fulfilled my wish! It’s as if Bette had come back with that coffee, seen Tina in her bed and thought “Fuck it!”… ;) Thanks for that element of spontaneity in the story, so in line with these girls’ love & youth! Oh, I wish it could happen in the show… B&T would have it their own way and send IC to hell!… Anyway, you’re the boss, and nothing happens that you haven’t wished and orchestrated, so thank you, thank you, thank you! You’re so forgiven for calling off the ‘you know what’. Hey, I was never angry anyway, you know that, hun! ;)… Now, looking forward to the continuation of that sweet, yet so hot “first time” loving!

    14. How do you do it Ally? Three different stories & they all work! With this one you’ve taken us on the journey of young, sweet, innocent love. Ok, this is Tibette land, they’ll soon get over being innocent! Ally, keep on doing what you do so well.

    16. That’s pretty similar to how I would’ve written it. Sweet, lovely, a bit of uncertainty. Although I’m mean enough that Bette may not have had an orgasm. LMFAO! Simply perfect, Ally. =) I wonder if Bette’s moaning woke up Helena? =O Can’t wait for the next chapter!

    17. That was wonderful. Two ladie loving each other, and coming together as one for their first time. They will learn in time whar pleases the other one. thanks

    18. Don’t know how T’s going to feel about that last statement. With Bette and Tina both being virgins and both in such a state of innocence concerning their sexual experiences I think the first thing that would run through my mind (if I were Tina) is that I want Bette to make love to me like Bette, not like Shane. Plus, you kind of threw a ‘whammy’ in Bette’s character there…I don’t see this shy character of Bette talking to Shane about something so intimate. I can see this Bette asking her sister for suggestions maybe, but not Shane. Maybe that isn’t what Bette meant by that statement? All else considered you did a great job with their first time so far. As always, I can’t wait for more Ally! More please!

    24. Score! About freakin time that these two popped the cork off of that bottle. i’m still baffled by the fact that they waited as long a sthey did and especially while sharing a bed. Bette’s turn–watch out Tina! I hope Hels doesn’t go searching for the ladies anytime soon b/c i would hate to se Bette and Tina be interrupted.

    31. “After several minutes she moved back to look at Tina-her eyes were shut and she was breathing deeply. That had to be a good sign” yes definately a good sign…I had to keep opening my eyes…they kept closing for some reason…lol. Some people say it’s better to be with someone who is “expierenced” the first time…but in this story it shows the fun you can both have learning together…now on to Tina.

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