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Broken Phone Calls Pt 5
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It was a little after 9 before Shane and her brother arrived home.. Shay was so worn out that he was already asleep… their day out had gone by fairly smooth after they left the Planet… except for the problems Shane had enrolling him in school… but with a phone call to his previous school and the help of a lengthy fax, Shane was able to finish the paper work and Shay would start school on Monday….
After enrolling him in school, they ventured to WAX, where Shay met Chase and the rest of the crew… Chase even had him a board made… so for a few hours, while Shane and Chase caught up on business… Shay broke in the new board… he was a natural, after all Shane was the one who taught him how to skate in the first place… but unfortunately the half-pipe was a little to much for him…
Now, after fifteen stitches, a cast, and a trip to the pharmacy, they were pulling up in the driveway… when Shane walked in the front door carrying shay… she found Carmen asleep on the couch… she smiled… she had always loved watching Carmen sleep…
Carmen had been waiting there since she got the call from chase about Shay… but after 2 hours she just fell asleep, her headphones still on….
Shane quickly took Shay to their room… she changed him in to his spider man pj’s and placed him under the covers.. after a quick kiss on the forehead, she left him to his dreams… hoping he would sleep through the night with out any problems… it broke her heart every time she saw the lost and helpless look in his eyes when he’d wake up from a bad dream….
Then she walked back into the living room, where Carmen was still asleep… after a minute of watching her mocha skinned goddess, she knelt down beside the couch, removed the headphones and lifted Carmen up into her arms… causing Carmen to stir in her sleep and open her eyes momentarily before closing them again…
Carmen sleepily wrapped her tired limbs around Shane’s neck and fell back asleep with her head on Shane’s small shoulders… Shane stifled a laugh when Carmen began mumbling Spanish in her sleep as she carried her down the short hallway and into the master bedroom…
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it’s great so far, I’m lovin’ it. PLEASE don’t have Gabriel get custody of Shay…
WOW loved this update….. yay shane and carmen finally together again and soooo sweet. ok and gabriel needs to die ….. omg i cant stand that guy you can not give shay to him please please let the judge see what an asshole he is or maybe even he wont show up at the hearing thats his M.O isnt it. ahhhh he makes me sooo mad but great update this fic is amazing and im soooooooooooooo glad you went for more than 2 parts. please post again soon. loved it.
Man you are awesome, this update was great. Gabriel needs to be hit bya bus
i think its really great. keep it up ;-)
This is amazing!! I see a battle coming up, which I truly hope Gabriel ain’t gonna win!! I think it’s good that Shane and Carmen are taking it slow this time… Keep it coming!
kill gabriel lol im so loving this story love it and love you well keep it coming adict
I’m loving the story and I agree with Adicttosharmen… kill Gabriel! LOL!
I really really like this. And I really like where it’s going so please keep it up!
Awesome chapter! Grabiel sucks..he doesn’t deserve to win Shay’s custody..make him find a woman and disappear again :P
Definitly I love this story.post soon
I love this story now that I have just discovered it! it’s great! I like where it is going, and all. But there is one point I would like to point out, Shay is 9 right? Ermm…. A 9-year-old, if you observed them, are more like young adults, and they definitely are not babies. And it is pretty impossible to carry them around unless they are ultra super tiny. Maybe research a little more about 9 year olds I would say.