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The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Ten
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Helena paced around Tina’s apartment, picking up pieces of debris as she went around. A stray piece of clothing here, a dirty plate there. Helena took a deep sigh as she went into the kitchen. It was actually cleaner than she expected it to be, but there was still something about it that told her that Tina no longer gave a damn about the state that she was living in. Helena opened the refrigerator door and smiled when she saw what was inside. Tina had obviously been to the supermarket to prove Helena wrong, there was food in this house but nothing had been touched, giving away that Tina had only just bought it.
Helena moved on to the cupboards. She opened each one in turn. In the back of her mind Helena knew that she was looking for half empty liquor bottles. Then she laughed at herself. There wouldn’t be any half empty liquor bottles in this apartment, the liquor didn’t hang around long enough to be half drunk. Then she smiled to herself, funny how she thought of the bottles as half empty and not half full. Tina’s pessimism must be rubbing off on her already and she had only been here a couple of hours.
Tina was in the bath, she had been in there for at least half an hour. It had taken some persuading to get her in there but now she must be warming to the idea due to the lack of movement coming from behind the closed door. Helena listened at the door, trying to discern what Tina might be doing in there. She considered knocking on the door and asking to come in but changed her mind. Her and Tina had already had one tense conversation today and she didn’t wish for another one to come up so soon.
She thought back to earlier. How Tina had said that she would pick Helena up at the airport only to call her and ask her to get a taxi to her apartment. When Helena had asked why all Tina could say was that she didn’t think that it was a good idea that she drive anywhere. Of course Helena had put two and two together and surmised that Tina was still drunk from the night before. Tina had denied it but Helena had known Tina long enough to know when she was lying, and this was blatantly one of those times. Typically, then Tina had got defensive and it had threatened to blow up into a full blown argument. It was then that Helena remembered the promise that she had made to Bette before she made this trip. She had sworn to Bette that she would take care of Tina and that if things were really that bad then she was to convince Tina to come back to LA.
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That was a tease, easing us into the drama that is now Tina’s life…Thankyou, I wasn’t quite ready for a full head on!! My thought is that Tina needs major rehab, a place, somewhere with professionals. Hey “intervention” she needs to confront her alcohol problems, and all the other psychological issues that got her to this place…tks..let the fun begin!!!!
ohh, I was first…lucky me!!!!
Your writing is incredible… just incredible…
It’s hard to give help to someone that doesn’t readily accept it. Good on Helena for being a good friend. And what’s all this about killing Shane then?! Post soon, please (sans Shane dying, if you don’t mind!). Cheers!
I think you want the crown of Queen of Drama, and ya know what, its coming your way!
The calm before the next storm?! You continue to amaze me with your writing skills. Thanks so much…
CG…..I love the dialogue. It’s edgy, sharp, bitchy (in the nicest way) and realistic. PPS. Get Tina back to Bette and into rehab or counseling.
i wish i knew where it was going because my heart won’t survive another heartbreak…the dialog is great, the story is intriguing, post soon
Girl, did you and Jobadge make a bargain to each take one of the pair and see how degenerate you could make them? At least your Tina doesn’t puke in front of us (at least so far). God, your Tina and her Bette are about a step away from Skid Row. Fortunately you’ve each seen fit to throw them a life line. Here’s hoping Tina will be smart enough to grab it. So Helena’s got it bad for her? Pity abounding, pity aplenty.
That was very well written…I like the comment about Bette and Tina being each other’s weakness…get Tina into rehab and back to Bette…as long as they are 2gether it doesn’t really matter…co-dependence with the one you love is perfectly acceptable!!!!
Tina is in a bad place, but she has to want to get better, glad to see helena being such a good friend. As always your writing a pleasure to read….
jp22, rule 10 (don’t kill Shane) is in reference to one of citygirl’s stories where she killed off Shane. We sort of had this discussion at the convention a couple of weeks ago. LOL! As for the chapter, I’m with funnyone.
OK,CG. You actually have me loving and adoring Helena is this chapter. I love that she’s there for TIna, and is not afraid to be honest with Tina. Tina is really ruining her life, and its ever so painful to read. I don’t really know where this story is going,But I’m sooo intruiged and a little obssesed with it.LOL.PPS.
great bette get ur ass to tina so u both can get it right
Tina needs help…and she needs to be closer to family and friends…who up and runs away from her daughter? She does need professional help. I hope Helena gets thru to her…no sex between Helena & Tina it will only complicate things. Bette still cares it dosen’t look like she has moved on so that gives me hope that they will find their way to each other.
great writing. Tina needs to pick herself up and get back LA maybe ?
Tina really need help and hope Helena help her through this if not Bette will come help her. OK post soon please, thanks!