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Love and Pride chp 24
LOVE AND PRIDE Chapter 24
“You have been talking to Shane ? “ Tina said in shock
Bette laughed “No – but the look on your face was a picture when I just said that “
Tina slapped Bette playfully – Bette reacted by starting to tickle Tina – they were both laughing as they fought good naturedly. Tina managed to get Bette on her back despite being smaller than her lover. Eventually Bette surrendered
“I give in – please stop before I wet myself “
“You totally surrender to me ? “
“I totally surrender to you “
Tina let go of Bette’s wrists and found herself on her back in seconds
“I play to win “ Bette said
“You cheating cow “
“Yep “ Bette lent forward and kissed Tina on the lips “But you love me “
“I do – so much “
Tina wrapped her arms around Bette and pulled her into an embrace.
They hugged for several minutes
“Bette – was that okay ? – I was so worried that I could not make you come “
“You did – it was great – totally amazing – thank you honey “
They kissed again – Bette stroked Tina’s face
“I did think of asking Shane or Helena but – well I figure its between you and me to learn together. If we make mistakes we’ll learn from them. I love you and I want you to be satisfied “
“I almost asked Shane too. “
“Why didn’t you ?”
“I didn’t want to admit that I didn’t know what to do. Well I do but – well “
“I know — I’ll tell you something that no one else knows. I was taking some videos back the other day . Helena and I had had a meal and a movie night. So I was looking around at the videos and I went into the adult section and looked at the gay titles. Tina – I didn’t have the nerve “
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(6 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
this was beautiful, first love, i hope not much frama will come their way because i would like for B&T to be each other’s first, last and forever and in between
MMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i think we need some more…..1ST.LOVE is the BEST….thank ALLY YOU ROCK WOMEN!
Damn that was hot and beautiful and sweet, love it. Can’t wait to see more, post soon please, thanks!
*wonders what B&TF meant by frama* Could that be fucking drama? ;) Octopus! lol I remember my first time and it was definitely not with anyone like Bette or Tina. I probably would’ve turned into a sex addict if the other person had been one of these two girls!
I do believe that everyone could turn into a sex addictm if we had Bette or Tina as a teacher, thanks
Young love…..
Lol wish I had Bette standing in the nude making me an omlette… hell i just wish i had bette lol… I dont comment a lot but I felt this one needed a little applause *claps*.. keep the NC17’s coming my friend! *no pun intended… well no direct pun inteneded lol
Sopt. Rewind. Press Play! So Tina is a virgin. How did i miss thta one? I knew she hadn’t slept w/ another woman but it never occured to me that she had never had sex period. Well duh, that explains her little “problem” there. Hopefully after she eats something and relaxes a bit moe Bette will be able to give Tina another go and w/ better results. Tina might want to prepare herself for a little pain though. Thanks for the great update glad to see Bette and Tina are having fun now that thye have finally crossed that NC-17 barrier. Off to read the L Wing…..
Awesome description of my favorite couple and the beginnings of a long long relationship.
ally… well between last night and all day today… i have read all 24 chapters and loved each and every one of them… you really know how to do SLOW BURN… DAM GIRL… please continue
sweet as can be – the first time – you’ve made it so so memorable.
well im going to bed for an….. omlette!!! thanks honey. that was fantastic.
Beautifully done Ally! They are so sweet together, so loving of one another. And you wrote it just perfectly. More please Ally!
Mmmm, think I need an… o.. o.. omlette!
Ooo, on top again!
so freaking cute, these two!
oooh…. fantastic!
I totally agree with Jo’s first comment LOL
Seems like a certain someone is getting a real kick out of being on top!!!…;) But again, who wouldn’t want to be the first to comment on Ally’s writing? Especially this chappy of L&P… Beautiful, Ally, and nice little touch of “first time” realism… With those two, works like a charm! And I’m sure the Porter’s magic will make it through (no pun intended… almost). I know it’s already been two, but I hope you’ll treat us with a third B/T loving chapter! Great as always, thanks Ally!
Someone should remind Jo that variety is the spice of life. After all, what would an omelette be without salt and pepper? Well, Ally, you made us all wait long enough (just a sec-I have to go put my PJs on), but it seems to have paid off. Just make sure that Bette files her nails. We all get to go back to bed together in the next chapter, don’t we?
This was awesome and realistic. They are so great together. I love how they listen to one another and try to make the other one comfortable. Keep posting they have a long weekend ahead of them.
oh Ally, has somebody told you that you’re a genius? you sooo are!!
This story is beautiful. Hat’s and clothes off to the author
you have been so good wiht us, another NC17 chapter? and what a chapter! amazing chapter as always Ally,
i loved this alley…..most wonderful…..please post again soon….u are an amazing writer…..thanx
oo o o o o o o o hhhh my what a great chapter…
hottttttttttttttt longer man and u know it
hey they still have Saturday and sunday…so more NC-17’s…..this is like a home run…of many sorts!!!
Was catching up with the last 4 chapters Ally…they were just amazing. They made me look back in the past and thinking about my first experience with a woman…you did a great job here. O for octopus, hilarious, glad to know that I have now another nickname for my wife ;)
I am with Jo. Just OMFG GREAT!!! THANKS ALLY!!!!
I am with Jo. Just OMFG GREAT!!! THANKS ALLY!!!!