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    Denial / Acceptance – chapter 9

    Story written on December 10, 2006 by De_leish_ous.
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    The first danish kiss.

    At first Alice was too stunned to send the message from her brain to her body to start kissing Dana back. Everything seemed so surreal, like time had stopped and all she could see, hear, smell and touch was Dana. She was feeling alive for the first time, truly alive, every nerve ending was sparked by just one kiss. It started out soft and a little hesitant until Alice snapped back from her euphoric dream like state and gently grabbed the sides of Dana’s face.

     

    Dana finally felt Alice responding to the kiss and a wave of relief washed over her. The blonde’s perfume was intoxicating her, causing her to want more, anything and everything from this woman. She definitely had not planned on kissing her best friend tonight but after Alice’s confession her impulsive side overruled logic. Alice tasted even better than she could have imagined. She felt the blonde trace her lips with her tongue requesting entry to take it further. Dana was in no state to deny, she opened her mouth wider giving Alice the access she desired so much. The kiss became passionate as tongues duelled for dominance. Dana felt Alice run a hand up her back, tracing her spine, and let out a suppressed moan. Involuntarily Dana ground her hips into Alice’s causing a groan from the writer this time.

     

    The duo broke away from the kiss when they felt their lungs were ready to burst from lack of oxygen. Neither of them knew what to say. Dana stared at Alice, Alice just stared back trying to find a witty or assuring remark to say. No scrap that, she just needed something, anything. But it was the brunette who spoke first surprising Alice for the countless number of times tonight. “Alice…I’m sorry, I didn’t plan that, it just sorta happened”. The blonde’s head was whirling with thoughts as she gazed at Dana in a trancelike state. Dana took the blonde’s silence negatively and considered she’d just made the biggest mistake of her life, maybe Alice was just being nice or the film’s atmosphere had caught on, maybe she didn’t feel the same way about this as Dana. ‘Oh my god she hates me’, thought Dana. “I should go”. It was said in a state of panic and dread, Dana was already standing and looking for her purse before the blonde found her voice.

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    1. Just catching up on this fic, good stuff! And you are a rock star for writing hungover, now THAT’S dedication. Looking forward to seeing how this story progresses, keep up the great work!

    3. Awwwww. Have I mentioned lately that I heart happy Danish? And I love your work right back, so nyah or something. Don’t mind me, I’m sleepy and have been studying too much to make any sense. Yeah, so…great update!

    5. Ahhhhh… my previous comment was a little “out there”. lol The sports fan in me came out in a big way. The other comment that came to mind was SCORE! because you did. Anyway, I’m back to my usual laid back and reserved self. This chapter was incredibly cute. I especially liked when Dana told Alice that she forgot to tell her that she liked Alice too. Cute beyond words… I can’t wait for their date. By the way, don’t worry too much about not knowing where you’re headed in the story right now. You’re probably just writing for fun, so you can take the story anywhere you want. You can also deactivate the rating system if that makes you feel less pressured. I’m a danish lover. If you keep writing, I’ll definitely keep reading!

    8. I’m really happy they’re giving it a shot, too:) And I think you deserve an award just for writing something as excellent as this with a hangover! Well, awsome work and please post soon.

    10. that was so cute. hungover huh? yeah that was me all weekend – it sucks. hope you feel better and i hope you keep up with your daily posts this week.

    12. Hope u feel better from the hangover. They can be a real b**ch! But u’r writing was still great. This chapter was sweet. I love first kisses with the L girls. They are always so sweet. Great update, PPS.

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