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Denial / Acceptance / Lust – Chapter 11
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4 minutes earlier
After Alice had hungrily watched Dana exit into the toilet she got up to order their drinks.
“Hi, two absolut martinis please”.
“Coming right up mam”. Alice watched the barman do his thing until she felt a hand on her shoulder.
“God that was quick Dane”. Alice turned around to see a different brunette from who she was expecting, her eyes opened wide as her pulse increased and not in the nice manner. No fucking way, this could not be happening.
“Hey Alice, alone at a bar again?” Alice rolled her eyes and once again turned to face the barman paying him for his service.
“Oh come on, don’t be like that, I was just playing, how are you, you look good”.
“Why do you suddenly care Gabby?”
“Ouch, Pieszecki bites both in and out of the sack”
“Yeah well this is nice and all but I have a date to get back to, so um, see ya”.
“”Wait a sec”. Gabby pulled Alice back by her elbow rather forcefully almost spilling the drinks in Alice’s hands. Alice gave her a glare and cocked her head to the side.
“You know that screenplay about the three friends that I have been writing forever, well it was passed on to Sofia Coppola and she’s agreed to make it into a movie”.
Gabby was obviously buzzing with excitement, it was good and weird to see her in this mood, usually she was so nonchalant about everything that Alice was actually happy for her surly ex. The quirky blonde sat down the drinks and gave Gabby a quick handshake of congratulations in hope that she would leave Alice in peace because she really had other plans than making ‘nice’ with Gabby all night.
“That’s great Gabby I know how hard you worked on that. Yeah, I’m gonna go back to my table now, Dana’s probably waiting.”
“Dana Fairbanks?” Alice squinted at the brunette ready to launch a verbal attack on the woman if she said one thing against the tennis player.
“Yes Dana Fairbanks, do you have a problem with that or something?” Gabby let out a laugh and smirked.
“No I think you’ll find you’re the one with the problem since she just walked out of the place”.
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Yay for the misunderstanding! And also for the funny, hot way it turned out:) So please plost soon and thanks for proving me wrong about the drama, lol!
You are good I will give you that. Loved it. But I still think you are evil and I would love to see just how evil you could be. By the way love the flashing. Please update soon you have me hooked.
Aww, have I mentioned how much I love jealous Dana? Because I really, really do. And I’m glad Gabby fucking Deveaux didn’t ruin the evening. Although I have to say that if the whole “flash the milkies” trick was ever used on me, I’d be a goner. I heart this story.
Ahhhh – thrilled they are back together – but now you have ‘lust’ in your title – can we assume you will be writing some serious lovin!!
Heh. Yay! I love it. Cute cute, very cute. And as usual (because I’m hooked now) I can’t wait for the update =D
This was my favorite chapter so far. Really well written, and left me wanting more. I loved Alice’s little napkin trick too, very cute.
A glimps of the milky whites. Hmmm, is she gonna give Dana another glimps before the night is over? One could only hope. Great update and waiting for the next. And yes u’r chapters are worth it as good as they are!
I like Gabby, but I was glad her appearance was short and the damage she caused was minimal.
Totally loving this story and of course you had to flash the milky white :)PPS