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Picking up the Pieces/ Falling Apart Ch. 16
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Shane woke up with the sun hitting her in the face. She groaned and rolled over. She wrapped her arms around Carmen and sighed softly. She kissed Carmen’s neck and snuggled against her. Carmen moaned and ran her leg up and down Shane’s. Shane grabbed Carmen’s leg and wrapped it around her. She ran her hand over her ass and gave it a little tap. Carmen moaned again, and Shane smiled.
“Good morning,” Carmen shook her head.
“No,” Shane giggled softly as Carmen tries to sleep. Shane bit her bottom lip and placed her hand on Carmen’s inner thigh. She felt Carmen tense up at her touch and smiled. She slowly crept her hand towards her lips and stroked them softly. Carmen bit her lip and moved her head. Shane continued to look at her as she slipped her finger inside of Carmen. Carmen tightened her eyes as Shane fingered her in the early morning. Shane leaned forward and kissed Carmen softly. “…You’re so mean,” Carmen purred as Shane smiled. Carmen slowly opened her eyes and smiled at Shane. She leaned forward and kissed Shane keenly.
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“Oh God!” Helena screamed out loud as she came once again all over Bette’s hand. Bette dropped on top of Helena out of breath. Helena moaned softly as she ran her fingers through Bette’s damp hair. Bette kissed Helena’s sweaty skin and rested her head on her breasts. “I can’t—believe–we did—that,” Bette smiled as Helena tried to catch her breath.
“Fucking each other like jack rabbits for–,” Bette looked at the clock. “For six hours.”
“That has to be a record,” Bette smiled softly and closed her eyes.
“I’m so tired,” Helena stroke her hair.
”Go to sleep,” Bette began to fall into a deep slumber, but her cell phone rang. Bette opened her eyes and slowly sat up. “Don’t get it, let it ring.”
“It might be important,” Bette reached over to the nightstand and grabbed her phone. “H-hello?”
“Bette, it’s Tina.” Bette sighed and rolled off of Helena. She grabbed the sheet and wrapped herself in it.
“Hi Tina,” Helena looked at Bette and looked away. “What is it?”
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ok shane is being such an ass and i know might be in the minority hre but i think shane is very capable of a one woman relationship with carmen but she is being an ass in this fic a definite player and right in fornt of carmen right after there whole night of passion and telling each other they want them back and everything nope im not likeing Shane at all in this one….
I want to feel bad for Helena but she knew what she was getting into w/ Bette. It’s not like Bette hid the fact that she had just been w/ Tina fom her. And Helena should never have done the whole I want you but I can’t have you thing w/ Bette. It probably just spurred Bette’s competitive streak and caused her to work that much harder at seducing Helena. Is Bette just playing games w/ Helena – I don’t think so. Bette is probably very attracted to helena sexually and on top of that she is strong and passionate much like Bette is, so if Bette’s head wasn’t so messed up w/ Tina she might be able to build a real relationship w/ Helena. But b/c of the Tina/Henry drama i think Bette really wants Helena as a f***buddy and friend right now, while Helena wants all of Bette and that is going to cause some friction. Oh yeah, Dylan who??? That’s what Helena must have been thinking after six hous of the Bette Porter treatment. Please post soon AKIRA, i love the story!
Oh I’m so agreeing with dre!! Shane is acting like a complete a-hole!! And didn’t she call Carmen a hypocrit?? Please…as much as I love those two together, but Carmen can do a lot better…
Damn this is bad!
I’m hangin! I loooove Shane in this. Hot update. I mean I like the idea of Shane and Carmen, but not if Shane has to be ‘forced’ into restriction. If she had no desire whatsoever for other women, then it’d be cool. But Shane is yummy Shane so yea, I like this. Please post more. Bette cracked me up. Friends with benefits, with Helena? Where is her head? LOL. I love it.
Shane : Ya know what Carmen ? You can deal with it, or you can leave it. What-evah ! Great, loving this (even if I want a Sharmen happy end, right).
Carmen should get a life. Then she wouldn’t need to hang on to Shane so much! Will Dylan have enough love and patience for Helena to help her get over Bette? Just sit back Helena and thank God for the six hours of great sex with Bette. Wow! What, you knew where her heart was and always will be, before getting into this, right?
shane’s just being selfish, poor carmen.. update soon!
I don’t think I would be willing to sit down and talk about the ex of someone I f*cked for 6 hours either…unless they had NO connection, but shoot there are still feelings involved and a child involved. Helena should just go back to Dylan and tell her what happened and let the chips fall where they may. I think Bette needs to keep it in her pants until she figures out what she really wants (and it had better be Tina)
sssorry i haven’t been commenting but I’ve been enjoying this fic to pieces;) Woah, so what’s with the sudden Alice doubting Lace thing? Will this mean a breakup (and then of coures hot reunion, lol)? I can’t wait to see what’s gonna go down at Treasure Island…keep up the good work!