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Picking up the Pieces/Falling Apart Ch. 17
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The vacation is over, and the girls get back onto the plane. They don’t say anything to each other as the plane left the ground. Bette looked out the window and sighed. Helena looked at her and touched her hand.
“I’m sorry that I walked out on you when you needed me the most.” Bette looked over at her. “I didn’t know what to do when you were asking me about Tina. After what we had, I just felt confused about everything.”
“What happened stays there in that hotel room. Don’t ever bring it back up.”
Helena swallowed hard. “O-okay, I just afraid when I get home. What if Dylan isn’t there?”
“What happened to Miss confidence? Didn’t you say that she’s still going to be there?”
“I did—.”
“So what’s wrong?”
“Dylan is more confused than I am at this point.” Helena sat back in her chair. “She’ll probably give up on me and move on. I should have did that before, instead of falling for her once again.”
“Relax Helena, everything’s going to be fine.”
Helena rolled her eyes. “Yeah right, everything’s going to change once again.”
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Shane arrived at her house and walked in. she sighed heavily and dropped her bags as she walked through the door. She kicked off her shoes and walked around her house. She was happy to be home and walked towards her bedroom. She lay on her bed and cuddled with her pillow. She relaxed and closed her eyes.
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Jenny walked into her house and went to her bedroom. Marina walked in and closed the door. Jenny came back with Marina’s things and threw them at her feet.
“I want you out of my fuckin’ house and don’t come back.” Marina looked at Jenny and began to grab her things.
“I’m sorry Jenny—.”
“You are sorry,” she snapped. “Just leave.” Marina turned around and went back out the door. Jenny locked her door and took a deep breath. She walked away from the door and headed back to her bedroom.
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Lara and Alice arrived back at their place. Lara walked into the house, slamming the door in Alice’s face. Alice shook her head and opened the door. She walked into the house and went straight to the bedroom. Lara was throwing Alice’s clothes and accessories everywhere.
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I agree with Bettyvhall. I have a feeling what happened in Vegas is NOT gonna stay a secret. Like I said I think Tina needs to concentrate on fixing the mess with Angelica before she can concentrate on their relationship. You are suppose to think long and hard before you just sign over your child to someone (look at all the drama with Dixie & Tad) that’s All My Children (soap opera) I am showing my love and telling you I love this story. You must remember that sometimes when low scores show up it’s someone being a ass. There are some amazing stories on here that the first time I read them they had 5 stars…you go back and then there are 3 stars…WTF it’s somebody lurking with nothing positive going on in their lives or maybe they submitted a script or story to somplace and was rejected so they are taking their anger out on the talented writers on this site. *mumbling to self* Damn jackases done got my pressure up…lol
Yes i definately see what you mean…but I still feel it’s a shame..=) Just like on the real show right?? I’m such a sucker for happy endings, which often leaves me disappointed…=)
Hey Akira- I don’t know about anyone else but i’ve been giving your stories 5 stars. On to the story – Bette/Helena are just going to pretend that nothing happened-YEAH RIGHT! Both women are powerfula and dare i say it, territorial. I can see them being out one night and Bette getting jealous of Dyland all over Helena or Helena jealous of Tina touching Bette (can you say drama!) So helena had every right to be confident, Dylan was home waiting for her, but just how long before Dylan takes the linders off and sees what it going on b/w newly formed friends for life Bette and Helena. Post soon, pretty please!!!
Thanks for the update.I still think it’s a great story. Will Bette & Helena resist touching each other again? There was way too much passion there to be a one time thing.
Good chapter and Im with bettyvhall and let see more, thanks!
Bette sould be angry with Tina over Angie,First thing I would do it call in so favor and find out every thing about him,from the day he was born, Hoping he has a shaded past that he is hiding. The get the best Lawyer and fight him till hell froze over. I like this stories goes to show you dont do thing in haste and to hurt other people,It will come back and bit you in the butt. thanks
sorry i haven’t commented before, but i am really enjoying your fic. whats going on in helena’s head, does she still want to be with dylan? i hope so :)
helena needs to stay with dylan
Yes yes yes! Make Tina pay for the crime that is Henry. Okay, Bette’s expression cracked me up for some reason. Anyway, I love this Shane. But I’m unsure if she loves Carmen. I don’t mean she should keep her pants on just because she loves Carmen, but is her position one of “take it or leave it, cuz this is me” or “we should just be 3am bed-buddies”? I’m okay with the first if she does love Carmen. But the second in no way whatsoever means love. Hence, my confusion.
aiiiiiiii…. lara n alice.>< i hope alice will finally realizez donna is jz an illusion, shez not dana. and she n lara r meant to b. get story abt helena n bette. but im kinda confused. r they fd? or wat? fd with benefit?