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The Reason I Came Back pt 3
By the time Carmen pulled up to the hospital… Shane was already getting nervous.. she hated hospitals… hated the smell, that only a hospital could produce… hated the persistent questions the doctors constantly asked… she even began to wonder how Carmen had talked her into coming in the first place… but then again she wasn’t surprised.. she was already felling dizzy from the loss of blood.. and the sight of it… god she hated blood..
"Shane… c’mon… ya big baby" Carmen said teasingly.. trying to lighten the mood… she knew all to well what was going through Shane’s mind as they followed the nurse into a small room…
Shane opened her mouth to say something but thought better of it and shut up.. Carmen saw this and watched as Shane sat on the table as the nurse had instructed her too… she also noticed that Shane wouldn’t look at her but instead kept her head down and fidgeted with her jeans… ‘whats going on in that head of yours’ she wondered.. taking a seat beside the table just as the doctor walked in…
"Hello.. Mrs.."He paused looking at his clip board.."McCutcheon.. " He said with a smile.. before frowning when he saw the damage to her face.. "how are you doing today.." He asked…
"I’ve been better.."Shane replied weakly.. her head still lowered…
The doctor nodded"OK how about we take a look at that arm.. "He said… taking a seat next to the nurse.. then unwrapping the blood soaked shirt from around it.. Shane winced as the shirt brushed against the gash, causing some glass to cut deeper… "mind telling me how this happened"The doctor asked calmly.. beginning to clean the wound…
"um.. i was just trying to move a …stupid mirror into my bedroom, when i.. tripped over my shoes.. and well.. i dropped the mirror and landed on top of it… "Shane explained… wincing in pain every time the doctor got near the gash…
"ah… i guess that’s 7 years of bad luck for ya.." the doctor tried joking.. but his comment only causing Shane to groan.. thinking of what else could probably go wrong…
"i hope not"Shane said… "ouch!!. " she yelled and grabbed the edge of the table in a death grip as the doctor began numbing various places around the cut… what she hated more then anything else about hospitals and doctors was their need to stick you alive with needles..
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(35 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
I love it!!! Wow! What’s Clea doing there? This is such a good story, please post soon!!!!
Protective Carmen + nervous Shane = one fantastic combination! Honestly, I don’t know how you do it, but just when I think it can’t get anymore interesting, it does. And Chase is a really good friend; also can’t wait to see what happens with Clea and how carmen will react. One other thing, thanks SO much for the dedication:D Although, it’s kinda undeserved, lol. Thanks for the post, can’t wait for more; Excellent update!
Yup, this is good stuff ! Clea better not f*ck everything up though, I don’t like that girl…
I love it!!!! I just hope Shane can forgive herself and give herself and Carmen another chance.
Ironweb69 – I love this story so much – please keep it going.See yaFAY
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeed it , perfect the whole protective carmen and the concerned shane awwww i love this fic, i hope sharmen works it out i love to see them together and i have hopes for this one cuz i think they r on the right track . loved it for sure.
Nice chapter there! I miss your other story ‘Hidden Secrets’..are you going to continue?? I hope so!.
jajajalol loved this part loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so fucking cute