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One More Chance Ch. 3
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Dana woke up with the sun shining in her eyes. She groaned loudly as she rolled over. She opened her eyes slowly and noticed that she wasn’t in her bedroom. She sat up, but grabbed her head. She closed her eyes and sighed. She got out of the bed slowly and walked over to the door. She opened the door and walked out of the bedroom. She ran her fingers through her tangled hair as she noticed that she was still at Natalie’s house. She heard a blender going and walked towards the kitchen. She saw Alice and walked into the kitchen. Alice looked up and stopped the blender.
“G’d morning, how you feel?”
“Like shit, why am I here?” Dana sat down at the island.
“You were drunk last night, there was no way that I was going to let Shane take you home like that. I don’t think that Lara would like to have a drunken girlfriend to take care of. So you stayed here,” Alice started the blender again, and Dana put her hands on her ears.
“Stop!” Alice smiled and turned the blender off.
“Sorry, I thought I could make you a pick me up drink.”
“What’s in it?”
“I can’t tell you that or you won’t drink it.”
“I won’t drink it because you won’t tell me what’s in it.” Alice shook her head and poured the red liquid into a cup.
“Just drink it, trust me.” Dana sighed and grabbed the cup. She put the cup to her lips and brought her head back. She pulled the cup away and coughed. She put her hand over her mouth and swallowed. She sighed and licked her lips.
“What the hell is that?”
“My special pick me up.” Alice smiled. “Trust me you’ll feel a lot better. Finish the rest of it, and I’ll take you home.”
Dana sighed and took another drink. She sat the cup down and bit her bottom lip. “Thank you Alice. You don’t have to do this.”
“It’s not a big deal.” Alice put the blender in the sink and rinsed the cup out. “Just finish that, I’ll be in my room getting ready for work.” Alice walked out of the kitchen as Dana took another drink out of her cup.
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Oooh bad Dana telling Lara she loves her when she’s planning on breaking her heart. this is really interesting, I def want to see where you take this.
Apparently I’m retarded and didn’t leave you a comment last time. I could have sworn that I did, sorry! I’m loving this, although I think Dana’s being a bit of a jerk to Lara. Hopefully the poor little soup chef doesn’t get hurt too badly.
Oh dear – Dana isn’t making it easy for herself – telling Lara she loves her when she is running out to meet her one true love!!
I’m in the same position as MT. I thought I left a comment too, and I think Dana is being unfair to Lara – but hey – it helps with the drama! I can’t quite read Alice yet. Their interaction reminds me a little bit of your other story from way back in the days. I’m trying to remember the title … when Dana cheated on Alice with Lara, then Lara with Katie, and Alice slept with Mark, thought she was pregnant, married Jordana, then cheated with with Dana. See, I know the story – at least the danish storyline, but I’ll have to look up the title. I wonder if Alice will really marry Natalie.
Ok so alot of us are retarded. Love the story PPS.
Dana needs to tell everyone the truth Lara and Alice.
well I hope Natalie Goes down lol. But it’s your fic and I respect the direction you will take it. But I got an idea. I was thinking like Have Dana win her match against Natalie but Natalie is still with Alice. So it’s like Yeah Dana won her match yet Natalie Still has Dana’s true love. Also I loved the Secrete Admirer you did in the beginning and I would love to see more of that. But like I said. I respect whatever direction you take this fic. Your writing has definitely gotten stronger over the fics I’ve seen. :) anyway those are just some ideas if you want to use em or not. Once again great chapter :)