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A Means To An End 9
A Means To An End 9
Everything
Is catching up with me
I awake
To find I’m not at all where I
Should be
And it feels
I’m getting to the end
And it’s hard
To figure out what’s real
And what’s
Pretend
To break from what
We’re tied to….
God knows
How much I’ve tried to…
Ch 20
“Now, what happened to your friend?” The doc asks staring at me like he knows me.
“She is my girlfriend and some asshole tried to rape her.”
The old man just holds Carmen’s weight like she was a piece of paper. The kindly old woman led the way to his office. The home goes by me in a blur it seemed like it was designed to be a log cabin. It seemed familiar…
“What is this world coming to?” The elderly woman says.
“So your girlfriend….the man….. he didn’t succeed?” The old man asks really staring at me.
“No…. I saved her….”
“That is good…..why did you pull a gun on me?”
“Listen doc we don’t have time for twenty questions Carmen is hurt….”
“Now you listen here missy….we are but kind and simple folk….it’s just a question….” Scolded like he was my grandpa or something.
“We….are on the run….Someone took our baby…and Shane doesn’t trust anyone…Please sir don’t be upset with Shane…” Calm cool collected. Carmen eases the doc’s mind.
“Shane…..that’s your name. Shane McCutcheon…..”
“How the hell did you know that?”
“Well I knew your mama and your papa…..little Shane….the spitting image of your father. Same eyes….”
Well of all the fucking luck.
“You knew Shane’s mother?” Carmen winces. The doctor had her on one of those tables with the tissue paper across it.
“Yes I did. She was a beauty…..how is she?”
“She is dead.”
“Well now I am sorry to hear that. How’s your father?”
“He is dead.”
The doc looks sadly on me. I try to imagine how he would look if I told him Pop shot Mom with a twelve gauge shotgun.
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(17 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
looking forward to seeing what happens next.Great!
Kevin Sorbo and Pamela Anderson? That made me laugh my ass off-
Another amazing update!! I can only imagine Carmens frustration, not beeing able to help saving her son! But as you have hinted before, she is gonna show up in honolulu anyways right? AAh gosh I just wanna find out more!!
I can’t wait to read more of this story and see what Carmen will do to protect Shane this time!
Damn…that was so hot. :D I love this story. It’s full of action and the timing is damn perfect. Well…I’m waiting for Shane’s trip to Honolulu! LOL. Great update. Btw, the plot flow is awesome XD
Shane is a criminal mastermind. Bwa-ha-ha! Seriously, though, she left no detail in the meth lab robbery unplanned; she covered all the angles. Excellent update. [Kevin Sorbo and Pamela Anderson? Wow. The show had always pushed the envelope on what’s real and what’s not, but Sorbo and Pam as Muldrate and Liskey would have been like disintegrating the envelope with TNT, spitting on the remains, and mashing the paste into the ground with a shoe.]
This Shane would give Jack Bauer a run for his money. Excellent.
Doc was cool, for a sec I thought he was a traitor. Carmen knows Shane is right, she has to let Shane go alone & stay focused. 1.67 mil.? – Excellent!
I love the buildup to the meeting with Conrad… and the trip down memory lane with the old doc.
you will get over it lol well shanes right carmen cant go because shes hurt. i love this story!!!!!!!!