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Bette & Tina – The Beginning: Chapter One
Chapter One
“Coming, baby?” Eric called from the living room. “Almost ready!” she replied. He looked down at his watch. “C’mon, babe, we’re running late!” he yelled. He heard her click the lightswitch off in the bathroom and looked up to see her walking down the hallway, looking like she just stepped out of a Hollywood blockbuster movie with her long black dress that fit just right and hugged every inch of her, a slit up the side that flashed almost the entire length of her leg with every step, her gorgeous, long blonde hair curling and waving around her flawless face. She flashed her beautiful, charming smile and said, “Okay, I’m ready. What do you think?”
“Wow, Tina, I – I, ahem, wow!” His eyes raked over her body starting at her 2-inch heels and stopping at her breathtaking, blue eyes. “Why, thank you!” she said as he leaned in and gave her a kiss. “Aren’t we running late?” she reminded him.
“Ah, who cares.” he said. Tina chuckled as she grabbed his hand and led him out the door. He opened her door and helped her inside and then hurried around to the driver’s side. “He can be so sweet sometimes,” she thought to herself. “So why doesn’t this feel right?” Eric started the engine and the Jaguar roared to life.
Forty minutes later they arrived at the art gallery where Eric was hoping to buy some new artwork from the popular Katherine Oprey to add to his collection. As he handed the keys to the valet and took Tina’s arm and placed it in the crook of his elbow Tina thought to herself, “Well, here we go again.” She smiled her most charming smile and allowed Eric to lead her inside.
As they walked around, looking at the different exhibits, Tina tried to make the appropriate responses to Eric’s long-winded comments. She wanted to simply enjoy the artwork; to gaze at it and take it all in. Just then Eric grabbed her arm. “Look, Tina, there’s the owner. I want to introduce you.” he said as he began to pull her away from the painting she was trying to admire. They walked up to a tall, slender woman with short, cropped, chestnut hair.
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(46 votes, average: 4.07 out of 5)
Great start except the ending with Eric. But for those of us who are true Tibetters we always love a story about the begining.
Great Start!!!! I like the way you write. I can not wait for more. Thank you PPS
May I opt for “love at first sight”.
Tina’s eyes are beautiful any color. I could get lost in hazel, blue, purple you name the color eyes and that goes for Bette’s eye color also. Great start.
I am really liking this story, but I love all Bette & Tina beginnings. I think this is really good for your first time…just remember to keep posting.
Was watching a reran on ShowTime tonight Tinas eyes are Hazel. Heck they could be Pea green or purple She is so beautiful. Eric just lost a girlfriend. thanks
of course none of us like the Eric and Tina together but that is a good start. Hope you continue
great start longer they have to b longer
whoa that was pretty accurate…of course the Eric/Tina encounter at the end was yuk!!! imho…Lmao… will watch out for your story.
Yeah what Rau said the encounter was ewww. lol Nice start!
Good story. The writing style is very good and gives full particulars except for a thing. Tina/Laurel has no blue eyes but hazel brown eyes. I like but otherwise the story really very good. Nice start. Please continue fast. Greeting from Germany
great start! can’t get enough of these 2. please post soon.
GREAT start and there is nonething wong with your Tina having blue eyes. It’s your story and she has blue eyes in other stories. Please continue and welcome aboard :o)
see i also love tina with baby blues… and a great start… so now will eric pick up that tina is not there with him or he doesn’t care… as long as her body is… PPS
Great start. Even though there’s so many out there i love B&T starts. So keep posting and we’ll keep reading. PPS
it’s nothing wrong with her, just she met the gorgeous Bette Porter! good post continue please!
Great beginning, we can never have to many B&T stories if you ask me :o)) I like the way you write, so keep’em coming….
Oh goody :D a ney Tibette beginning… And not just any beginning, I can sense that allready! Curuious what you have in store for them! Keep those chapters coming!
Good start and like it. Im with fergz1!