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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 25
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Alice’s Apartment
Dana couldn’t avert her eyes from the name and number etched across the paper. Had all her doubts been justified after all? Was she being played for a fool? She set it down on the worktop and took a deep breath, a montage of the last three months played in her mind. Her anger calmed down to leave a melancholy numbness as she stood deciding what to do next.
Alice was still fast asleep when Dana entered the room. The brunette sat on the bed and gave her girlfriend a kiss on the head as the tears slid down her own face. She stroked the writer’s cheek and whispered I love you into her ear, hoping to God that she wasn’t doing the most reckless thing in her life. Leaving the note on the pillow, she began collecting as much as her belongings as she could carry in the over night bag.
It was as quick as that. She stood in the hallway outside the bedroom door and let the silent tears fall. She’d given up on the best thing that had ever happened to her and it felt like her heart had been ripped from her chest leaving a giant hole that only Alice could make whole again. It’s too hard, this was better for the both of them, she was driving them both crazy Dana tried to reason with herself but couldn’t wipe that eerie sense of regret as she walked out of Alice’s apartment locking the door and never looking back.
Alice stirred awake and immediately threw her arm over to the other side. Her eyes flickered open when she realised she was feeling around in an empty space. She figured Dana had gone out for a run or was at the club training so she got up and walked through to the bathroom to take a well-needed refreshing shower, not seeing the note that had slipped down the back of the bed.
Returning in only a towel Alice took a second look at her bedroom, something was definitely off. The usual cluttered mess that occurred when Dana stayed over was missing, it felt emptier. She scurried through the apartment searching for any sign of her girlfriend, physical or materialistic and returned to the bedroom empty handed. She was beginning to really freak out, Dana was gone and the tears already appeared as Alice dialled her girlfriend’s cell only to get through to voicemail.
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You are so mean. But I will be patient, Danish is bound to win you over from the darkside again.PPS
Love your writing, don’t stop. You’re the best for frequent updates.
loving this story carrie bradshaw…and I love the twist you put on it with Dana being the jealous/insecure one.
Awwww…damnit! Come on babe!!! That’s mean…and yeah…makes for a good story. Blah blah blah. lol. Ok. PPS. This was great :D
Oh no!!!!! That is really not what we want – a jealous Dana yes, but with them making up every time … please.
Hey, just played catch up. Awesome chapter, I feel for Dana. PPS xx
Wait, so that was Gabby’s number and not the chick from the Planet? That was unexpected. But still Yoda has to come to the rescue and get these two back together, she just has to. Well, great update, PPS.
Hmmm… As the Planet Turns. Dana needs to work on her self esteem, and Yoda needs to give some damn good advice or…well you know. Nice bit o’ drama. But please tell me you are better at fixing it than IC!
Tease. Jeez, ur gonna leave it at that huh? Thats so wrong, but i guess i’ll have to WAIT to read what happens next. Just to let u know i’m very impatient :P, so PPS.
oh no – the drama. please don’t drag it out too long. i need some happy danish since i have been having a season 3 marathon the past couple days and tonight is the bad one. thanks for your quick updates all the time.
I go away for a few days, and come back to a ton of updates. Yay! It’s interesting that Dana is the insecure one. I can totally see Dana as being unsure jealous, and quick to make a wrong decision. Right now her jealousy seems like a problem that is going to keep coming back.
Erm… Where are you?…Come on now, we need you.
OR! Wait, I think I get it! Alice was totally tryign to set Dana up to see if she’d leave! That’s Gabby’s number from a long time ago, and Alice put it in there to test her, knowing that Dana’s too lazy to put on her own clothes instead of her girlfriend’s! I’m right, right? She’s testing her! I really need to sleep so these theories go away. Sheesh.
I couldn’t abandon this story if I tried, you went and got me all addicted. Yet again. Fanfic is like my cocaine…and you’re my enabler. Or something. WTF is Dana’s damage? Has she never heard of this wonderful thing called “talking?” Or perhaps “asking questions?” What a dumbass. I like how you’re switching their roles, though…although I’m a bit worried about it being Gabby’s number. Please tell me that the server at the Planet got her old cell number or something, k? Thanks. I don’t think I could handle Alice as a cheating biatch. Then I might have to stop crushing on her entirely. Well, not really, but it won’t be pretty. And now that I’ve babbled your life away, I’ll thank you for the frequency of your updates (which put my posting schedule to shame) and leave you with the customary “hurry up and post again so I don’t go completely nuts.”
Just watch season 2 and you won’t be depressed and then you can make it alright in this story. But then again your story is one of the best on here so pls just carry on and never listen to me. PPS