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    Fall Softly, Snow, pt. IV (FINALE)

    Story written on January 4, 2007 by Lamentamini.
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    Author Notes:

    B&T Christmas short story (yes I know it’s late =p) – “So, what’s the answer, Porter?” Like JB says, “I think you’ll really like it.”

    A few days later…

    "Tell me the truth. Is it good?"

    "Templerschaf, this is perfect! I hope Bette likes it," Tina said as she gave the old man a hug and kiss on the cheek. Templerschaf blushed.

    "Well, I hope the two of you have a Merry first Christmas together," he said.

    "And many more," Tina added with a hopeful smile.

    With a wink and a smile, Templerschaf said, "Of that I am sure. She would be crazy to let a beautiful lady like you go." This time it was Tina’s turn to blush. After Tina collected her purchase, she made her way to Payon to visit Dana.

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    Shane was at the Comodo School of Dance watching Carmen, a new gypsy, help some of the female archers prepare for their test to become dancers. Some of the girls caught on quick while others struggled. It wasn’t out of the ordinary for aspiring dancers to fail the test as the dancing portion was very difficult, but if they were fortunate to one day become gypsies, then the long hours of training was well worth it. Plus, Shane thought with a small smirk, gypsies are hot, especially Carmen de la Pica Morales.

    Inthuul S’lat’halin quietly entered the school and took a seat next to Shane. A few of her students were ready to take their assassin exams that morning and she didn’t want to make them wait until after the holidays. Luckily they were sharp students so they passed with flying colors and none of the proctors had to stay at the Assassin Temple for too long.

    "She’s really good with those girls, isn’t she?" Shane quietly asked her friend.

    "Yes, she is, and she’s an excellent partner for Angus Partridge," Inthuul said in reference to the notorious minstrel who had had his eye on her half-sister for quite some time. She reached into her bag and showed Shane her gift for Tina. "What do you think?"

    "Well if I was Tina I would fuck you right here," Shane deadpanned then winked at Inthuul.

    Inthuul snickered, "You would. I have a plan and I’ll tell you about it shortly, but for now, I’m going home to get some rest. I was up before the crack of dawn and didn’t sleep much the night before."

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    2. You are too funny…what if I just call you lambchop…lol. Just kidding, I hope you are feeling better. I loved the way Bette propsed it was so romantic. I hope you continue to post thank you for this story. *coughMilestonescough* excuse me I might be coming down with something.

    4. Oh i can totally see Carmen as a gypsie and Dana, an archer..nice very nice. It would be cool if we can see the girls in their elements using their power/talent to kick some a** :) Oh and i keep visualizing Tina/Chemist wearing the apple hat on her head and being naked in front of Bette..lol. The proposal and ceremony were very romantic. Hope you feel better soon ;)

    6. I just feel warm and fuzzy inside! That is such a romantic, sweet story, and you managed to keep our characters true to themselves. I wouldn’t mind seeing this continue. But if that takes away from time to work on the others, then I have to think about that! Don’t worry about reads and comments, Lament–you have a loyal base of fans who will jump at the chance to read your stuff. Just do your own thang, kid!

    8. hey Lament… i loved this… love the snow family… and always love it when bette and tina are in love with each other and esp when they get married… please know that i am always reading… i read a lot at work and i can’t comment there.. so keep writing and we will keep reading… later babe

    11. This is wonderful ending and love it. They are funny and cute, Alice is crazy and love her. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see a new one coming!!!!!!!

    12. Lament, That was touching and tender. The simplest of expression on true love. As always you added excitement and a unique take on the Bette and Tina realtionship. I would love to find out more about this amazing universe so am hoping for a sequel. Whatever you write I will read and enjoy. Thank you. Your Loyal Fan.

    14. What do ya mean i can’t call you by the nickname i created?? Well that sucks donkey doo…You know the reason i started to call you that was because i can’t spell your entire screen name…now i have to find something else…LOL…OK this fic was pretty cool, and although i have never read the crossover fic or you know elements of the other characters, i think you did a pretty good job in a small amount of space explaining to us all what was what and who was who. I also agree with nzgrl I thought Helena was a bag lady too!! LOL Hope to see more from you soon!! This was a great written fic, thanks!

    16. i just got finished reading all the chaps inthis story, ^,^ and loved it. (sniffs) :) it was beautiful man. Oh and im not dead, my story is on the back bunner though :)

    17. Hey Lament, I’m so embarrassed that I didn’t read this story earlier. At the time it started I guess I was on holidays but that’s really a lame excuse sorry. Maybe if you could take my age in consideration and know that sometimes Alheimer comes along, you could possibly forgive me huh. Loved it immensely, it has your signature written all over. Deep pure feelings and lots of humour. Fyg. I never look at the rating of a story, I just go with the flow and if I like what I’m reading I’m hooked. You’re stories have exactly that effect on me. Btw. didn’t have clue what nancy720packers was talking about either in her comments on chapter 3, maybe she can explain it so I don’t have to feel like I’m a dumbass. Ok I’m awaiting impatiently for the updates on your other stories. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

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