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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 46
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Bette starred down at her empty cup of coffee.
Avery: So?
Bette smirked.
Bette: It was ok.
Avery: Ok? Just ok?
Bette: I mean it was good.
Avery: Come on!
Bette: Fine, fine! It was delicious! The best cup I’ve ever had!
Avery smiled with satisfaction.
Avery: I wouldn’t go that far, but it does make a mean cup of coffee.
Bette: Not only was it the best coffee I’ve ever tasted, but the best company I’ve ever had while drinking coffee.
Avery blushed.
Avery: No wonder everyone wants you Bette.
Avery had not meant to say that.
Bette: What?
Bette’s smile grew bigger.
Avery: I just meant that you flatter people. It makes them crave your attention.
Bette watched Avery’s mouth form the words crave.
Bette: Does it make you?
Avery realized the awkward situation she had just gotten herself in.
Avery: Make me what?
She was back peddling as quickly as she could.
Bette: You know what?
Suddenly Bette’s eyes became very intense and Avery felt herself gasping for air.
She laughed nervously. Bette had just gotten out of a very serious relationship. She was vulnerable and didn’t know what she was saying. She enjoyed Bette’s company but in no way did she want to lead her FRIEND on.
Avery: Ya know what?
Bette: What?
Avery: I think we should get out of here.
Bette: Runaway?
Bette smiled.
Avery: Not exactly.
She reached for Bette’s hand and pulled her up.
Avery: Come on.
Bette: Where are we going?
Avery: You’ll see.
Bette: Oh I hate surprises.
Avery: You’ll love this one.
Bette shot Avery a doubting glance.
Avery: You will!
Bette: And if I don’t.
Avery: If you don’t…hmmm…well I’ll let you surprise me.
Bette nodded her head.
Bette: I can deal with that.
Bette followed Avery to the door and watched as she fumbled through the small closet.
Avery: Where the hell did I put it?
Bette: Put what?
Avery: I could swear it was hanging in here. I remember putting all the way in the back…
Bette: What are you looking for?
Avery: Ah, here we go.
Avery spun around and wrapped a neon green knit scarf around her neck.
Bette: It burns my eyes.
Avery: Not all of us can afford to live in the land of Chanel and Burberry.
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And that…is quite alright with me at this moment. Hot sex for all! Seriously at this point I just don’t care who is with whom as long as someone is happy.
i agree with lamentamini – i’m just glad you’re updating again!!! i can’t wait for more! =)
Lament & Dimples… You SEX FIENDS! lolWhat happened to true love and commited relationships? Will Bette ever find out the truth about the set up? I think Ashley should get hers. She is devil spawn!
sky, did you ever read the first story? It wasn’t happily ever after. lol So I’m not holding my breath for a hap-hap-happy B&T ending. If that happens then great! But everyone can have some fun for the time being. ;)
Reading this makes me wonder why you even wrote a story where Bette and Tina were so in love with each other, because the last several chapters makes it sound like they never belonged together in the first place.
You know, when you first started writing this story I was thrilled with the Bette and Tina push and pull, together not-together but thinking that that is where the story would end. But when you ended it and they weren’t, I still LOVED it! Then the next story started and I loved reading that, your drama was always coherent and your dialogue engaging. I’ve come to realize that its not Bette and Tina that I love, its you! The traditionally counted on predictability of Bette and Tina’s relationship is no longer why I read this story. Its for your writing Flair. Kudos as always babe.
Completely enjoyed the post, hmm, a happy night for all?? I know you’ll keep the drama flowing. ; )
i like this story i do hope there get back together ashley a littel B@#$h
Although I’m a huge B/T fan, I love this story. Tina is almost as mean as in S3 and I like her, go figure!
Damn this is sad and bad, where the hell is love, the true love they have for each other and now see them like this just make you sad. Hope you will get them back together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thank you, Bridget! but, can you do me a big favor? tell Flair to make TiBette together, PLEASE.
NO! Please not let this happen! Someone stop them! Tina is kind of cruel. A ‘me and Bette are different’ is not a good excuse for her betrayal.
i just have one thing to say..PUTA QUE PARIU.man..that is killing me..i hope Tian suffer and suffer a lot..and please make Bette be happy with someone deserve her love..thanks Flair :-)