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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 27
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Alice’s Apartment
The blonde remained sat on her couch starring at the TV screen although it was on standby. The waiting was killing her as she sat twiddling her thumbs unsure of what to do with herself. How could she start and activity and concentrate on it when she didn’t have a clue what was going on between Shane and Dana? Was she still in a relationship? What was Shane telling Dana?
She’d tried calling Shane’s cell phone but it was switched off and she was still being put through to voicemail every time she rang Dana. She was beyond frustrated when her stomach growled interrupting her thoughts. She realised then that she hadn’t eaten anything yet and it was coming on to lunchtime.
Making her way to the kitchen, Alice tried calling Shane one more time then threw her home phone onto the couch when she was unsuccessful. She flung open the refrigerator and grabbed some left over take away from yesterday. The food was heated in the microwave and being currently consumed on the couch until Alice heard her cell going off. She hastily followed the shrill sound of footloose music through to her bedroom and spotted the phone vibrating on the bedside cabinet nearest her.
It was precariously balanced on the edge and one final vibrate sent it spiralling off the table and onto the ground.
“Shit,” Alice said as she ran towards it, getting on all fours and peering under her bed. She spotted the device and grabbed it when something else caught her eye. It looked like a piece of paper or receipt had slipped down and she made a mental note to check it out after she took this call.
“Hello?” the writer answered.
“Hey Al, it’s Jenny, how are you?”
“ I’m ok thanks, you?” Alice wanted this over with quick; she didn’t have time to listen to one of Jenny’s fantastical rants about her writings when her own life was so completely fucked up right now.
“I’m good thanks, really good, I was calling to ask you if I could borrow that John Peers novel you were telling me about last night, I think it would really help my writing process right now since I’m having a problem with separating fiction from autobiography.”
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Ooh maaaan, this way too short ! I want more.
I wonder what Alice will think when she sees that the paper under her bed is gone.
Ahhh, but where’s Dana? What’s she going to do to win Al back? Is Alice going to find out about the letter? Is “un-drunk” really a word? Am I beginning to sound like Carrie as well?? Okay, well, I won’t call you Carrie anymore, but I reserve the right to refer to you as Bradshaw. And Al is a great nick name, not only for you and Alice but for my gf as well. So you’re in good company!
Ok now I know you are just being plain evil, this post is way to short. Plus you left us hanging, that is not nice. PPS
damn. im not being that patient today.
Ugghhh, the torture, no wait, that was last night. This is the good stuff! You’re such a tease with these little cliffhangers… but I’ll be waiting!
I’m glad u forgave me. That was to short. I know u’ll make it longer next time so i guess thats ok :D I was sure Alice was gonna read the note before Shane got there, just to cause more problems, but Shane to the rescue. Thanks for the update and cant wait for the next one.
Sorry i havent commented untill now,been busy getting things packed! Im caught up now and you are soooo doing a awesome job with this story babe! Please dont let Danish fight to long,it makes me sad! Please post as soon as u can PLEASE! Thanks again!
man u got me! please next time make it longer!… and if it has some NC-17 better! lol pps.
Okay, so was Jenny in on Shane’s plan or is she really that clueless and lucky to call at that exact moment? I suspect some Shenny scheming. And there’s no way Alice isn’t going to notice that note missing! Blah. I hope your next chapter is happier and full of nice scorching makeup sex, as it will only be fitting to the storyline. And you think you need another chapter from me??? I’m not half as cruel as you are with the cliffhanger stuff.
Glad to hear you have got a social life, but if it means you are going to leave us for days without your fanfic, then you must limit it to a day or two only each week – great that Shane made it – I knew you wouldn’t let us down, but you must post again soon and longer. X
Well, as your new best friend, would it be within my limits to plead for more and soon?lol. Either way, even if this one was long or short it still doesn’t matter since it was more than great:) So, thanks for the post and looking forward to find out what’s going on with Dana. PPS.