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And The Winner Is! Chapter 6
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PREVIOUSLY
Bette: I don’t know. I will receive a complete shooting schedule tomorrow.
Bruce: (sighing) I’ll call you when I get home. Love you!
Bette: Love you, too. Bye, Bruce.
Bette hung up the phone. She had always hesitated when he talked about starting their family.
Always believing that there should be a least one parent at home with the child, neither she nor Bruce was ready to make that sacrifice.
A few hours later, Bette was awakened by the knocks on the door. She walked to the door and realized it was coming from Tina’s room.
Bette smiled, thinking that Cheryl must have left. Now they could spend some time together. When she opened the door, it was Cheryl.
Cheryl: Hi–I was wondering if I could speak with you a second?
Bette: Where is Tina?
Cheryl: (stepping past Bette into the room) She’s still asleep.
Bette: Sure–come right in.
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What in the world could she possibly want? She doesn’t know me, and hopefully, she doesn’t know about Tina and me! Leaving the door open, Bette turned around.
Bette: So, what is it?
Cheryl looked Bette up and down. Seeing her and Tina today provoked some concerns. Yes, Tina was always upset when she showed up unexpectedly, but something was different this time.
Something about how she looked at Bette. How Bette looked at her. I’ll be damned if I let some overrated actress steal her away, she thought.
Cheryl: I don’t know what is going on between you and Tina, but it must stop.
Bette: What do you mean?
Cheryl: I’m not going to beat around the bush or play nice.
Bette: Ok–don’t!
Cheryl: Tina is mine!
Bette: (growing angry) Are you sure about that?
Cheryl: What the hell is that supposed to mean?
Bette: First of all, you come into my room talking about something you have no clue about. Then you order me around, which, my dear, isn’t a good idea. Now what’s going on between you and Tina is your business. And if there were something between me and her, it’s our business!
Cheryl: NO! That’s where you are wrong! It’s not just your and Tina’s business; it’s the public’s and your husband’s!
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u love the hot water!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
Now THAT was steamy, and I’m nowhere near my shower. Now is that biotch Cheryl going to try to ruin them just to satisfy her overwheening urge to control? Hey, superdaddy, with all due respect, some of us haven’t read this before. Can you not spoil it for us?
“…but her passion sapped the last of her energy and she tumbled head over heels into the whirlpool of ecstasy into which Bette plunged her.” This is just one of the many fantastic descriptive lines in this post! You truly have a way with words, baby! Hmm…guess you’d better consult with your editor about when the next chapters will be available!
Great chapter Love this story
Wow that was pretty discriptive, in other words HOT!It better not be like the others, cause I won’t read it K
Lord have Mercy!!! WHew…I’m exhausted just from reading!! LOL! You are truly gifted with the NC-17’s. You always leave me on the edge of my seat, wanting more. Post soon.
“…but her passion sapped the last of her energy and she tumbled head over heels into the whirlpool of ecstasy into which Bette plunged her…” Very descriptive words. Love it!
WOW! I love your detailed scenes. Nicely written. Like it first said, Wow!
Oh my goodness…why am I panting while I read this? Am I in heat? lol. This was so sexy! Wait…why am I licking MY fingers? What have you done to me. Keep posting please.
Hey Succ, You truly capture the primal desire between Bette and Tina. They are each moths dancing around a flame that can equally fulfill or destroy them. Cheryl is wicked and needs some serious therapy to sort out her controlling and demanding personality. The shower scene was the perfect foreplay to the massive orgaism that followed. I love the way that Bette demands everything from Tina even at this early stage for their relationship. This is balanced by Tina’s willingness to enjoy all Bette is offering her in their carnal exploits. Brillinant!! More pleae and don’t make it too long. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
AND THE WINNER IS Tina…and Bette!!!!! Love this story…PPS
I find myself asking again….r u headed in the same direction with the violence, rapes, and killings????
I love reading this story again…OK..heading to the shower.
what a great lover Bette is! wow!!!!!!!!Love this story. Different yet interesting. Bet you they’ll get in trouble soon. I love your style. pps.
Love this, Both are in so much trouble. A husband and a crazy girlfriend. thanks
Having someone to wash my hair would be great. Actually that would just be a bonus to some hot sex. Did that make any sense? I’m so tired. I need sleep. lol
hey suc. happy new year.. and what a smokin story about tibette.smokin hot.thxs for the update lovin it.p.p.s. babe
I forgot how erotic this story was/is. I know that Cheryl is going to fight but picking a fight with Bette was the wrong way to go about fighting for Tina. Bette has Tina and Tina has Bette hands down. Just one look and they are lost in that sea of love and sensual dancing.
Welcome back! That was HOTTT!!! Yeah for Tina kicking Cheryl to the curb…..now let’s just hope that Cheryl is wrong and that Tina doesn’t go running back to her. It’s interesting that Tina is so willing to give up control to Bette in their loevmaking and yet she dumped Cheryl b/c she was too controlling. Must be something about that Porter chram that got her…..lol. Post soon please.
Damn that was hot and sexy love it. Im with superdaddy and hope you not and hope you will make them have a happy ending and not like the first one. Ok post soon please, thanks!