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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 32
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Previously
Alice wiggled her eyebrows and replied, “I think it’s best that we try them all out before we pick our favourite though”. Dana just laughed and kissed Alice once again and watched as she slid off the counter and pulled up her underwear. Both straightened their hair and clothing then walked out connected at the hand and again rejoining the group acting as if nothing had ever happened.
Still At The Planet
Alice managed to slip away from Dana and joined Tina in collecting dishes whilst the rest of the women were at the bar getting more drinks.
“You alright Al?” Tina asked her friend whilst they carried plates together into the big industrial looking kitchen.
“Yeah why?” Alice answered rather speedily and averting her eyes to the sinks in front.
“You look a little flushed, you’re not coming down with anything are you?” Tina sad as she gently pressed her hand to Alice’s forehead checking to make sure she wasn’t ‘burning up’. Alice flicked Tina’s hand away and smiled.
“I’m fine Mom, but thank you for asking, I’m just a little hot”.
“Really? Nothing to do with the fact you and Dana disappeared together into the toilet for five minutes?” Tina jibbed and watched Alice’s face turn a surprising shade of pink.
“We both needed to pee…”
“Right ok” Tina grinned knowingly at the writer waiting for her admittance.
“Do you think anyone else noticed?” asked the worried blonde conscious that she would soon face an abundance of ridicule. Tina laughed at the usually self-assured woman; apparently Dana was having quite the effect on the witty journalist.
“I doubt it, not even Shane, everyone’s well on their way to being trashed, just make sure your face calms down and is three shades lighter than it is now” Tina said whilst laughing and setting her plates down.
“Oh God” Alice said rushing to the sink to turn on the tap and splash some water on her face.
“It was that good huh?” Tina asked standing at the door. Alice looked up from her bent over position and smiled.
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Yes i did know u were a perv but now ive got evidence to back my argument. England is great as ever, well it always will be as long as im in it :D oh btw got my house for uni yest. Any way any chance of a bit of jill from home improvement havin a three some with the two?? U know cos u luv me so much :D
You are so damn good at this it should be against the law. You got me good with these last 2 updates. Sorry I didn’t comment on the last one, I have been on a date since friday night. Thank you for giving me credit for what i wanted to see, but baby you know you wanted it too. I hope everything is ok with you. Thinking good thoughts for you. PPS.
Great update. I can just imagine dana standing there in a see through shirt.VERY sexy. I didnt figure that Tina would pick up on what happened in the bathroom. But that was funny. Cant wait for the next chap. PPS
Well, just for clarification, it is a very good thing to leave somebody speechles. At least in my case it was. Anyways, fantastic post:) One small question though, how could you leave it there? Actually I’m kinda used to it by now, but still you have to post soon, please? Again thanks for this and can’t wait for more. PPS.
my brain’s doing okay now, and it’s telling me to tell you to please continue this. I love rain…not for the reason you gave, but I’m certainly adding it to my list. I heart fluffy Danish and yay sleepy Dana.
You make me smile with your updates,thanks! Im moving to LA for good,and coffee sounds gr8! PM me in the threads for address and stuff! Thanks for the wonderful Danish moments!PPS!!!!!
haha, just had a bit of a catch up session – very nice ;-) Keep up the good work xx
Well, you already made my life a lot more interesting by putting a nice visual of a soaked Dana in my head. :D But I’ll think of some other things you can do to make my life even more interesting. :P Btw, I think you just earned a prize, you are the record holder of the most fluffy Danish story out there right now! :D
Wet t-shirt contest you say? I’m all for that happening! Nice to hear Dana commenting about hoping they are as happy as B&T after all those years. YEARS, I like the sound of that. Thanks for the update, and again, such a tease! Dripping Dana, ok that was pervy! lol
You’ve been updating so frequently lately that I can’t even keep up with my comments! Great job once again Bradshaw, happy danish makes me :) So does Dana in a wet t-shirt. Nicely done! Oh and scans tomorrow? Good luck with that.
You are such a freakin’ tease!!!! Now that is certainly a lovely mental image that you have left me with & I certainly can’t wait for the next update. I’m all for you writing that glorious PWP by the way!
Sorry not commented for a couple of chapters but damn computer crashed and couldn’t get on so just caught up on four of your wonderful posts – you really know how to write Danish and keep us on tenderhooks at the end of each chap. Hope all is well with the scans and you can post again soon. X
Yay great update…..Im still lovin lovin lovin it, lovin it like that! PPs
yes, naughty danish makes the world go ’round lol
man. i loved that last scene.