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Goodbye My Lover, Chapter 7
Tina listened as the familiar sounds of the Saab purred in her driveway. She watched from the window as the lights shut off and listened to the sound of the engine powering down. The door did not open and Tina knew that she needed to reel her lover in.
She picked up her cell and pressed the number 2 which connected her to Bette’s cell.
“I am so wet for you.”
Tina heard the sharp intake of breath on the other end of the line.
“We can’t do this.” Bette closed her eyes.
“Yes, we can. Come to me babe. I need you so much. Open the door and get out of the car.”
Bette looked up and saw Tina in the window. The flicker of candlelight illuminated her form for a split second. The sounds of R and B reaching her ears through the telephone warning Bette that once she stepped through the doors there would be no way she could turn back.
“You are definitely not playing fair.”
“How many times do I have to tell you that all in love is fair? I am so in love with you. Let me show you how much.”
Impatient, Tina opened the door herself.
Bette looked up at the sound of the opening door. Tina stood there in a negligee that barely covered her sex.
“You look amazing.” Bette whispered into the phone that she still clutched to her ear.
Tina closed her phone and went to the brunette who seemed rooted to the spot where she stood. She reached out and hooked a finger in the loop of Bette’s jeans, tugging to get the brunette moving. Bette stumbled and moved behind her. Her legs felt like rubber. Once inside the house Tina shut the door. The click of the door sliding into place seemed to snap Bette out of her daze. She began unbuttoning her shirt. The brunette’s eyes never left hers. Bette was as turned on as Tina had ever seen her. Once her shirt was undone Bette peeled it from her body advancing towards her breasts barely contained by the lacy black bra.
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(35 votes, average: 4.57 out of 5)
”I may post more than once a day while I work on this story. ” That sounds like a wonderful idea. ;-)
Now your talking and its clear that Tina truly wants Bette. Hope she cherishes “it” this time.
Whoo hoo! I’m so proud of you Kelika! I’ve been away but I’m catching up and I love the way you weave your words. Now…what was writers’ rule #782? …I think t’was something about no cliffies when the panties are dropping :-* LOL, I love it anyway and please continue :D
Wow! Love where this is going…. great chapter! More, more, please. Thanks for writing!
I like the idea of u posting more often. Especially right now, with whats goin on. Like lwsho2005 said i hope she cherishes “it” and doesnt screw up their relationship again. Great as always :D
Damn this getting hot and hotter and can’t wait to see more. Happy Bette come to Tina, B&T Forever. OK post soon please, thanks!
I love the way these 2 are reuniting! Did you have to end it THERE?! I can’t wait to read the next post. Estatic to hear you will be posting “more than once a day”. YOU MADE MY WEEK!
You like sending me to the showers or finding some form of cooling down don’t you. Bette finally gave into the woman who still holds onto her heart. Now if they can only stop from hurting each other and begin to communicate they may be able to hold onto each other this time.
i like your posting ideal….love this story…and QUIT BEING A TEASE! p.p.s.
wAO! you did it great! this last two chapter were so intense! i really hope that this will be the beginning
omg how could u end there im like drooling let me go get a mop while i wait for ur next post
Damn Kelika that was hot! I really like this take charge Tina. I say keep the posts coming. It’s the middle of the night and I need a shower.
nice, really really nice…i hope both of them are ready to renew their love
I agree, it was really nice and I hope that they are ready too.
damn that was hot! YOU TEASE!!! i love it….i like that you will be posting more often. that sounds like a great idea..especially now.
whoa hot and reflective…reel her in Tina…and great u r gonna post more than once a day becuz i love the tension but…i’m on the edge of my seat here. !!!
Whoo hoo that was Hot! I hope you post another soon.
Poor Bette doesnt stand a chance. Tina is on a mission and Its called Operation Get Porter Back. thanks