LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 12, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Goodbye My Lover, Chapter 11

    Story written on January 18, 2007 by kelika.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    29 votes, average: 4.69 out of 529 votes, average: 4.69 out of 529 votes, average: 4.69 out of 529 votes, average: 4.69 out of 529 votes, average: 4.69 out of 5 (29 votes, average: 4.69 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 13
    Words: 5286
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64069
    Author Notes:

    As much as I love you Bette Porter, I hate your guts.

     

     

                Bette woke to the sound of her cell phone ringing.  At first she was disoriented and could not figure out where she was.  She looked across the bed and saw Tina still fast asleep and the events of the previous night flooded back. 

     

                “Hi, Kit.”  Bette knew from the caller id who was on the line.

     

                “Hey Baby Sis, how are you?”

     

                “I’m fine Kit why are you asking at this ungodly hour of the morning? What time is it anyway?”  Bette rubbed her eyes and saw it was minutes after ten am.

     

                “It’s a little after ten and the reason I am asking is that Angus and I have a very excited Angelica outside the door but I noticed that your car is in the drive and so did Angelica.”

     

                “Shit.” Bette responded. 

     

                “Is everything ok in there? I was concerned seeing your car there.”

     

                “Everything is fine Kit” Bette reassured her.  “I’ll meet you at the door.”

     

                “Ok take your time.  We thought Tina wanted her back first thing if you want us to take her to breakfast we can.  Happy to help anyway we can.” Kit expounded. 

     

                “I’ll be right there” Bette replied annoyed that she had been caught when she was not ready to talk about how or why she was in Tina’s house, in Tina’s bed,  never mind she grumbled to herself.  She would just get Angie and let Kit stew for awhile with her questions.

     

                “Where are you going?” Tina asked sleepily.  “Don’t go, babe come back to bed.”

     

                ‘That was Kit, she and Angus are outside with Angelica and wanted to check and see if you were ready for Angie or if they should take her out for an early lunch.”

     

                ‘Holy shit” Tina was instantly awake.  “What time is it?”

     

                “Relax.”  Bette soothed, “I’ll take care of it.”  Bette put on Tina’s robe once again and went to the front door.

     

                She opened the door and saw Angie telling Kit and Angus about the plants. 

                “Hi, Baby.” Bette called, always delighted by the sight of her daughter.

    Page 1 of 512345
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    1. More, or less you still keep us wanting more. Damn, these two so need to let go of the past. They love each other, regardless of the hurt, the accusations, betrayal, etc. None of it has ever been able to diminish how they feel about each other. So, get over it, admit you love each other, can’t live without each other and get on with your life together.

    4. DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!! THESE 2 ARE EXHAUSTING AT TIMES!! great chapter. I hate that they hurt each other so much, at the same time they love one another like no one else. Keep up the good work. this story is awesome. can’t wait to see how it turns out.

    7. Well for f*ck’s sake! Get over the past, Bette and Tina! You both hurt each other. Now, move on and get your @sses back together and never mention your f*ck-ups anymore. Only remenisce about the good times and learn from the bad ones. Raise your little girl and be happy with each other or I am putting you both in the naughty corner until you do. =) Great update! These two have me going from happy to p*ssed off in a matter of minutes. Just when I think they are back and over the past, it pops its butt-ugly head up again. Despite my current exasperation, I am enjoying your story. LOL Please, continue.

    8. Ok, lets get the fight over with— move onto the loving relationship with each other that they both long for. Besides, Angelica was too damn cute showing Bette around and wanting them both to be there. this is a family that can and needs to work!

    Leave a Reply