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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 20B
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Previously:
Dana and Alice are trapped in a room at this house where Carmen is deejaying a Hollywood party.
Bette has told Tina that she has an idea about how they can get what they want immediately—new Medical Power of Attorney documents that will supersede the old ones.
Helena has gone over to Dylan’s house for a booty call.
Stephanie has left town—back to North Carolina to pack up her belongings
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Saturday night, 9:59pm
“Why do you have to keep asking me the same question?” Dana was seated on the bed, her back leaned on the headboard, and her arms crossed over her breasts. “Ten times you’ve asked and ten times I’ve said that it didn’t mean anything.”
Alice was pacing from one end of the foot of the bed to the other, back and forth, back and forth, and Dana tracked her. “You said you don’t mind being in this room with me.”
“Yeah, so? So what, Alice? So what?”
“The question is, what do you mean by it?”
“Just what I said.” Dana stood and moved to the window. She stood at its right edge and stared out at Hollywood and West Hollywood. “Why can’t you just let things stand? Why do you have to analyze every damn thing?” She continued to stare out the window. “It is what it is.”
“Alice stood directly in front of the foot of the bed and looked across the room at Dana. “That’s the thing, Dane, I don’t know what it is. What am I supposed to make of you saying you don’t mind being stuck in here with me?”
‘There’s nothing to make of it.” Dana turned around and anger flashed across her face. “Do you think I hate you? I never, not once, not ever said I hate you or don’t want to be around you or anything like that. Never. You forced my hand. You know you did.”
“What are you saying?”
Dana sighed. “Figure it out.” She returned to the bed and threw herself down on it and scooted back to the headboard, crossed her arms again, and glared at Alice.
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I’m absolutely in love and lust with the way you write Shane and Carmen sex scenes. Just wow.
Great to have another from you. Can we get rid of Josh now. B&T have been through enough and I think Theresa would commit murder if another if her other girl was hurt in that way too.
I am so glad you’re back/still writing!! I think this is the best story; keeps me totally enthralled. I wish I was super wealthy and could finance this version of our beloved show!! poria you rock!!
I meant Portia! I was just so excited!!lol
Lots of hotness this chapter, among other things. Shane and Carmen, Helena and Dylan. I don’t want helena to get hrt, but Dylan needs to come clean before it’s too late. That Josh is a creepy sod… the sooner Tina is out of that center, the better. I don’t think Bette should be leaving just now. Aside from perv Josh, and the carry-on with Stephanie and Henry, I have the feeling a whole bunch of other stuff is gonna hit the fan. I’m starting to think that Theresa is becoming unhinged. She went from weepy and beseeching to angry and bitter all in the space of a shower. Theresa better not put Angelica at risk… On a happy note, yay for Al and Dana! Great chapter, Portia.
I worship you. Pure and simple.
You know I feel kind of stupid because I can’t seem to come up with anything new to say….wow, omg, amazing, brilliant, LOVE IT. You have me sitting at the edge of my seat screaming and enjoying the whole tale unfolding….You, Portia are absolutely out of this world Brilliant!!!!! Pls, don’t ever, ever leave us.
The alphabet. I’ll need to try that trick
I’m not sure if I’ve commented before or not, but I want you to know that I absolutely love this story, and every time I see an update from you I have to make sure I have time to read it thoroughly. There’s always so much going on, and I’m interested in every single storyline. This one is no exception. Outstanding work.
Perfect. Pure and Simple. That scene of Bette talking to Angie describing B & T’s meeting was poignant and absolutely beautiful. Every scene and emotion is written so expertly. Your sex scenes are just incendiary. Raw, passionate and real. All the characters and s/ls are so well written. Complex, layered and dense. I just love it.
DAMN! I’m not a Sharmen fan by any stretch of the imagination, but that was hot in the DJ booth. Danish…WOOOOOOOOOOO! Alice and her circles. lmao Bette talking to Angelica was priceless. And a bus needs to run over Josh. Time to read the next one!
Loved loved the danish scene p21-22, really hot and sexy. I really like your writing style.
I love this story…I love all that you put into it. I need Josh to drop dead or something. I really hope this stuff with the courts and Stephanie and Bette not having any rights end soon. I need Tina to come back fully recovered and at home…I have alot of needs…lol
“After Tina’s return, the small things had gone unnoticed by Bette, but now that they hadn’t been a part of her life, she seemed to latch on to all of them.”…I’m just on page 3, but I had to pause and tell you how real was Bette’s observance of the details of everyday life. I was at one with it. It evoked such authentic feelings in me. I love your story, and I love they way you’re telling it! You are a fine writer, among the best ever here…now, back to the story…
Angelica punches bette as to say on with the story. …haha haha hahaha lol lol too funny