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I’ll Keep you my Dirty Little Secret – Part 8
All of a sudden she felt a coldness brush across her shoulders. She shivered and turned around. There was nothing there. She figured it must be a breeze coming from an open window in the hotel. She turned back around to where the others were congregated.
‘Where is she, I’ve said I give up’ she told them, aggravation etched in her voice.
Just before she was about to move away from the desk, she felt a cold hard hand grab her shoulder……
Chapter 8
Dana took a sharp inhale of breath. Her heart began to race. The grip on her shoulder got tighter.
‘Its about time for crying out loud! I’ve been on my knees down there for the last 15 minutes!’
Dana swung round on the spot and was both relieved and pissed off at the sight of her girlfriend.
‘Alice you scared the shit out of me. Why did you grab me when you know about this place.’ She pushed Alice’s hand off her shoulder and took a step back.
‘Hey hey, calm down babe, I was just playing with you.’ She walked around the side of the desk and lifted her hands to Dana’s face.
‘There’s nothing to worry about Dane. This is our last night here. If all that’s going to happen to us is another sex filled night then I’m up for that…are you?’ she asked with a twinkle in her eye.
Dana looked at her, a pout on her lips. After a moments thought her right lip curled up and she scrunched her nose up.
‘Well I suppose I am’
She gave her tender kiss on the lips. They parted as the rest of the gang started to make gagging noises in the background.
‘Alright alright, shows over, you can leave your tips on the counter!’ Alice told them.
They all walked back into the living room and made themselves comfortable on the chairs.
‘Hey I’ve got another idea’ Helena explained.. ‘How about we tell ghost stories?’
‘Are you kidding me’ Dana told her.
‘Awww come on Dana, it’s the perfect setting. A group of friends, in a haunted hotel, sitting down by candle light.’
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(27 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
Oh shit! This is getting really, really good but I really should stop reading it when it’s so late where I am :D PPS
hehe yea its almost 1am here… the best time to read a good old fashioned scary story :D
Holy shit now youd think no harm would come to them if it was just a ghost or someone else but candace and her whole bette luving streak Runnnnnnnnnn tina
Another great instalment kel, doin a fine scary job there… well done! ;)
I wondered if Candace would show up or is that just Tina’s imagination? Ok, PPS!!!
Fricken A I don’t do scary, but this is good.PPS
Oooooh this is getting awesome, I too was tricked by Helena, minx, can’t wait for the next post and Alice was freakin’ hillarious as usual :D
damn it longer
Great! i hope Candance won’t do any silly movement! the next one
Ok, so I guess Candance was the one watching them which, ew. Make her go away, I’m NOT a Candace fan. But then who is? LOVE this.
Shit this is getting more scary!
oh shit was 1st thing that said and now to the stuped bitch candance in the mix god i hate her cam’t wait to see what’s next ppms