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Mesmerized part 5
Alice
At 5 o’clock the next day I was running around my apartment in a panic. I had just 3 hours to make myself presentable for Dana. I had already emptied half the contents of my wardrobe and this was sprawled across my bedroom. I continued to throw items of clothing over my shoulder in anger as I failed to find the perfect outfit. It didn’t matter that I had known Dana five years and she had seen me at my very worst, looking a total mess, tonight was special and I wanted to look good.
Finally, when I had emptied everything out and there was only one item left, I found my outfit. That one item was a figure-hugging dark blue dress which I had worn a total of once before, probably because it was the buried in the depths of my wardrobe along with my hundreds of other clothes. I eagerly slipped it on and decided that it was perfect. For once I thought I looked quite good, the dress clung nicely to my tits, one (ok two) of the few features of my body I am proud of. The dress went perfectly well with the silver necklace Dana had bought me for my birthday a couple of years ago. That got me thinking, I wondered just how long Dana has had feelings for me. As long as I had loved her? When had she realized? I couldn’t believe that I hadn’t realized that she felt the same, I thought that I could read Dana so easily, but she had proved me very wrong by keeping such a big secret to herself for so long. As I was deep in thought I put on a silver bracelet and my watch onto my other wrist. When I was doing it up I caught a glimpse of the face and the thoughts and questions abruptly halted when I saw what the time was- 7.50! I had to pick up Dana in 10 minutes! I ran out of my room and slid along the rug on my laminated flooring in the hallway to reach the end, grab some silver heels and head out of my front door.
Somehow, I managed to pull up outside Dana’s condo at exactly 8 o’clock. I adjusted my wing mirror so that I could see what I looked like. Well, the dress was good. I hadn’t had much time to sort my hair but it looked okay, I quickly combed my fingers through it. I pulled my lipstick out of my bag and put it on as quickly as I could, before hopping out onto the curb and walking excitedly to Dana’s door, humming a tune as I went. I tapped a tune on the door, my trademark knock so that Dana would know that it was me. As I waited I took a deep breath and tried to compose my nerves, I hadn’t expected to be this nervous. I looked down to straighten out my dress and heard the door open while I was doing this. I looked up and gasped. I couldn’t believe my eyes, I had never seen Dana looking so beautiful she literally took my breath away. She was wearing a tight black dress that clung perfectly to every curve of her stunning body.
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(22 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
awww, cute date! And you did a great job with the outfits. :)
I’m totally diggin this story, its so cute!
Okay…I still work on sorting out the difference between you and ILUVLEISHA. (And I know you didn’t realize it when you picked your name…but still.) Anyway, I am thorougly enjoying your take on a Danish beginning…sweet, cute, a hint of of hotness about to explode…everything that a Danish story should be! Looking forward to your next post.
A jealous and a shy Alice…
they were so cute together on their date
love it, looking forward to more…
Awwwwww….Danish on their first date! lol @ Alice being distracted by Dana’s foot and Dana finishing their order.
hey… loved your story… njuust wondering where the continuation is though :)