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Lucky in Love (Chapter 34)
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Everything changes. Even the things that are constant in life, like family and friends, evolve with time. When those changes are of our own doing, we seem to adjust easily, but when they’re wrought upon us, humans tend to react badly. With Carmen’s full support, Shane had embarked on making almost as many changes in her life as the ones that were decided for her. This one, however, was perhaps the most mature thing she’d ever done and she wasn’t nearly as nervous as she’d expected to be.
“You ready honey?” Carmen flashed a reassuring smile.
“Absolutely,” Shane answered, signing her name before dating the paper before her.
The mobile Notary Public watched closely and slid the paper to Rico Hendrickson, who signed and dated where indicated. In short order, the official seal was embossed, the additional signatures, made and the declarations completed. Shane was given both copies to review. She saw nothing out of place and handed Rico his copy along with an envelope that contained a very large bank check. And, just that simply, Shane McCutcheon became the sole owner of Wax.
Helena received her first call from the women’s jail at 9:01 in the morning. She declined to accept the charges. The same at 10:01 and 11:01. By noon she realized she should just take the call and get it over with, but didn’t want to do it without a witness, so she arranged for Whit and Lara to be available to be conferenced in.
“Thank you for taking my call,” Winnie did her best to sound contrite.
“I did so only to put an end to these hourly interruptions,” Helena answered curtly. “My attorney is on the line.” She decided that Winnie did not need to know Lara was listening too. She trusted Lara implicitly and wanted to be able to hear her thoughts from first-hand knowledge of what was about to transpire.
“I’d like to tell you what’s been going on with me,” said Winnie. Having spent hours working every angle, Winnie had finally decided that the truth, or most of it, was her best defense.
“It’s a little late in the day for that.”
“Perhaps, but I’d be very appreciative if you’d hear me out.” Winnie’s defeat was genuine in the moment.
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Yay for the talk! Lovely and cute, aww-worthy as always. Liked the idea of Tibette’s double proposal as well.Keep up the good work. You know, I told MutedTempest the same, you and her, and a few other talented danish-writers here are having really lucky gf’s. I kinda envy them. ;) lol
This was another excellent chapter. I am absolutely in love with your story. I can’t wait for your next post.
How about? Wondersplendous! or (in the delicate words of my pal Paul who totally believes he’s some uber surfer – how can anyone claim such a thing surfing in Miami’s hicup waves )Wondertasticfullistic! with an extra hint of hotistic. Wait! the story nearing the end? Colour me bummed:(
Seriously, it’s chapters like these that got me so hooked that I read the first, what, 28 in a row?! Shane buying Wax, yet another step forward into adulthood. The Porter-Kennard proposals, the ever lovin’ Danish, and the Peabody predicament. What’s not to love about this whole saga?! Bravo!
Yes good answer Porter….sorry Jodie.
I noticed that you posted on MB, if you had lost me with this story…..NO WAY I LOVE IT!!!!!!! This is one of my favorite stories, you write great Danish but all so Helena, Lara and Winnie, I don’t know how you do it but keep it up. I also noticed that you said you were not posting another chapter till next week……pls you cannot do this, you have to post sooner. PPS
OK ok ok…after getting EXTREMELY behind on fanfics…I am proud to say that I am all caught up with my favorite fucking story. And damn…ths is just fantastic. I’m telling you Sammy…you are one talented lady. I have missed this story so much (my fault not yours. lol) and it was awesome getting current again. I love where everything is headed and even the TiBette is amazing! lol. Keep up the excellent work my frieind and I look forward to the next chap. Sorry again it’s been so long since I dropped you a line. I have been working overtime with my girls. lol. They are not as gifted as you ;) lol.
Once again another excellent chapter. I know you mentioned before that you only have a few more chapters left, but if I ask nicely with a smile on my face, would you consider not ending this story…like, ever? Cause it’s absolutely one of my all-time favorites. And if asking nicely won’t work, I’d be totally okay with begging. :)
Contrition before conniving? Winnie’s not done yet, I can smell it. Glad Al and Dana *really* talked this time. There isn’t anything they can’t face together. Interesting that Bette and Tina both want to propose at the same time. I wonder who’s going to get their proposal out first? More please! Thanks, SG
well u know i just love your writing and a happy dance in NZ has a few kiwi expletives tossed in along with lots o f arm waving and travolta leg style, and certainly the hips carry the movement…yah…i’m so glad tina took that phone away…for 1 horrible moment I thought u were gonna throw a spanner in the tibette marriage plans…but u were gentle with my tibette heart…pps
Love it..Thank You For Writing This, Seriously…I real feel ‘Lucky’ for you writing such a great story..Okay a couple parts…loved that you had them once again have sex multiple times…I love when they talk in bed, very intimate…also I love how they are talking at dinner and Dana throws in “your georgeous” and then conitinues talking…Love Them…B&T going for it…How can you not when A&D are your friends and you can feel the love off of them…it is contagious! Great Up Update As Always!
aww, the proposal thing is so sweet, and of course the happy Danish is too. Once again you’ve outdone yourself. I’m thinking of printing all these chapters off and reading them properly sometime. I can’t wait to see where the whole thing with Winne’s going, I smell trouble afoot.
Awww this is just so good and it really will be criminal if it doesn’t win an award. I could read your writing all night long. Danish are just so perfect in this I love it, and as your question as to what do I want? Only for you to continue writing as perfectly as you already do :)
Again with a awesome update,2 thumbs up ! So glad Alice and Dana are communacating,and awwww on Tina and Bette! Couple more dyas and i will be in 70 degree weather instad of this dang cold woohooo! PPS
Totally agree with swissmiss, I love this story, wish it never had to end! Can’t wait for the next part :)