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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love
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Previously
“Yeah about that shower, it’s not so much broken as a payment for disturbing my fragile young mind.” Dana and Alice both squinted at the teen before realisation hit.
“YOU!” They both yelled, Howie was up out of his seat and running towards the door before either could say another word whilst Bette and Tina looked on and laughed at the comedic threesome that had brightened up their morning already.
Alice’s Apartment
Alice was sitting at her desk typing away furiously and throwing herself into her next article. True it wasn’t due for another two weeks but tonight she was writing for a number of reasons. First of all she wanted to prove to her editor Mark that she was better than just ‘best of lists’, yes they were fun to do but they weren’t in her long-term career plan. It’s not like she wanted to still be sitting there at sixty and writing the ‘best hospital to get your hip replaced at’. Then again hard-hitting journalism wasn’t her usual topic of interest, this gay representation in sports piece seemed the perfect intersection between formal and informal and something she considered important in her own everyday life.
Secondly she’d forgotten how engrossed she became in her work, interviewing researching, writing, editing, it was all second nature to Alice and her inquisitive personality. Once she was interested in something, be it a person or topic, she was into it one hundred percent and this is the stuff she lived for. Being able to express her opinions freely and sharing them with the rest of the world, the satisfaction was like no other.
The last reason she was sat in her own apartment late into the evening and alone was due to the fact she couldn’t seem to find any her and Dana time at the moment. Howie was always interrupting or asking to be taken somewhere or needing to talk to one of them that it was driving her crazy. Sure she was understanding of the issues he was facing at the moment and she wouldn’t trade places with him for the world, but was half an hour alone with her girlfriend really so much to ask for? She had to share Dana enough with her tennis career and other friends that a quiet evening between the two of them was vastly becoming a rarity and one that the blonde missed deeply. She wanted her girlfriend to succeed with her ambitions and to be there for and close to her family but that didn’t have to mean being excluded completely in the process. Sleeping at her own place just seemed the easiest solution for the meantime and hopefully things would go back to the way they were soon enough.
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Wow…not only hot, but incredibly intense too. You did a great job of exposing the deep emotional connection between them as they moved into an entirely new level of their relationship — something that was reflected in the lovemaking, but not at all about it. Looking forward to your next. PPS
Very good, i like the serious writing, ur a really good writer, not suprised though. Any way keep up the good work
dang…how can you not be confident writing serious sex scenes?? This one was incredible, not to mention incredibly hot. I’m glad you’re giving these two the real, non-comedic connection they lacked on the show. This is fucking superb writing. You’re making me jealous!
and you did it again, hun! You know…you’re the best! After reading that maybe i don’t prefer having sex than reading about it haha. And thanks for this one: “You’re not going anywhere but my bed Fairbanks”. I loved it.
I never would have guessed that you weren’t confident writing those scenes. I’m looking forward to your next update.
Ok WOW to start with, and are you daft or what no good at love scenes, please. Do you really think I would offer to come all the way over there if your imagination wasn’t driving me wild. OK so you don’t suck, keep writing and post soon. GOT IT GOOD. Love ya.
that was a great chapter. i love it.
Oh my little Bradshaw, this was absolutely wonderful. Seriously, I loved how you got more into the motivation and thoughts of both Dana and Alice. It was just fantastic. Um, and the sex scene…I concur with everyone else in that you have absolutely no reason to not feel confident. It was an excellent finish to a great update.
It never occured to me that you might be writing a non comedic sex scene yourself when you asked if Alice ever had one. Well on the show it’s still a ‘no’, but in your story she did…and I loved it!
Hey baby I am still loving this story and I chech every single day to see if you have posted another chapter….this is the third time I have read this chapter….PPS
:D Really cool chapter. Loved the image of Alice in that shirt I have to say. I like the intensity of the love scenes, you shouldn’t be lacking in confidence! Looking forward to the next one!
It’s not just an opinion, but it’s a known fact that your writing isn’t anything less than wonderful:) You prove it with each post. And thanks for the hot, intense update. PPS!
oh how i love 4ams :) hot, HOT, hot… the eye lock during the love making swept me off my feet indeed. you did a great job hun. LOL lets hope Howie can not interrupt this time around…
Rest assured, you write fantastic hot scenes and not only hot, but with the sort of emotion and intensity that is ‘Danish’. Thanks again and please post again soon.