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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 41
Previously
Sweat shimmered on curved backs, chests and necks, as the two women lay together exhausted. Both never having felt this intensity before tonight, it had been something new between them that neither could describe. Still panting Dana lay on top of Alice catching her breath and marvelling in the warmth and comfort beneath. The writer kissed the top of Dana’s head and wrapped her arms tighter around the tanned torso, softly stroking the sodden skin under her fingers. They met with a final drawn-out kiss before settling into each other and swiftly falling asleep, finally content now being in each other’s arms.
Alice’s Apartment
Dana appeared in the kitchen to find Alice making toast and coffee, just what she needed today after her surprise entrance earlier this morning. She wore a white robe that clung to her figure and opened in a revealing V shape, dishevelled hair that was beginning to take after Alice’s own and a sleepy grin on her face. Tanned arms encircled a similar robed waist in front as lips made their way towards a delicious ivory neck. At first the writer jumped when she felt contact but after feeling another body push against hers from behind and the arousing sensation against her neck, she relaxed into the embrace.
“What’s cooking good looking?” Dana murmured into the blonde’s skin as she gave it a quick peck, then another and another…
“Um toast, it’s hardly fancy but it’s good enough for me, plus I have a vast variety of supreme spreadables for it.” Alice grinned widely then turned around in Dana’s arms to be greeted with an equally large smile back.
“Mmm I like the sound of that, plus toast sounds pretty near perfect right now, I need some energy fast I’ve a three hour training session that starts at twelve.” Alice tried to hide her disappointment as she heard Dana, she’d hoped they could spend most of the day together, this morning had been a big turning point for her and Dana wasn’t exactly acting like it seemed that special by blowing her off so quickly. The brunette picked up on Alice’s mood change straight away, the sparkle had left Alice’s eyes and her body language became despondent, she was pulling away.
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(24 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Damn you are good, twisted and good. PPS.
This is gonna be fun! :D Great chap, cant wait to see how it goes. PPS
LOL! this is a great fic, I love every chapter!
Call me perverted, but after reading the first page I happily clicked to the next page, hoping to get a preview (or even more) of some (ab)use of this nice new toy Dana gave Alice… Landing on page 2 I then realized you left us hanging with Alice swaggering towards the bathroom! A typical example of a De_leish_ous interruptus! ;)
you’re just evil, you know that, right? This is one hell of a cliffhanger my dear, and I loved the fire thing. You’re too good at this, you really are.
Okay, the toaster fire actually had me laughing sohard I had tears in my eyes. I can so actually see Alice freaking out over it and Dana standing back and watching the events unfold. HOWEVER the end of the chapter had me a little shocked, in a good way but still, holy shit! This situation is going to be a scream. Well, only if you write it properly, lmao!
Yay can’t wait for the next chapter this is going to be soooo god! :D
The fire thing was hilarious! You wrote it so well! Looking forward to the next chapter :p
LOL at the toaster incident! You write their banter so well! :D Can’t wait for the next chapter… hot Hot HOT!
Fantastic – can’t wait to see what happens.