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"Okay, are you sure you’ll be warm enough?" Alice asked anxiously, straightening the knit hat Dana was wearing over one of the Wax beanies Shane had given her. She also had on two sweaters, long underwear, wool socks, fleece-lined waterproof mittens over leather gloves, and a dark green parka that was puffy enough to make her look similar to a marshmallow. The great majority of this "protection" was at Alice’s insistence, and Dana humored her, although she wondered if she wouldn’t be complaining about the heat before they’d managed to get a quarter of the way down the main trail.
"I think it’ll be a miracle if I’m not, Al. Really, do I have to wear all this in the car? It’s a long ride; I don’t want to waste away to nothing before we even get close," she grumbled good-naturedly in response.
Alice looked at her for a minute, and then shrugged. "Fine, freeze. But you’re putting every single thing on before I’ll let you open the car door, you got it?"
"Yes ma’am," Dana said with a mock salute, grinning as Alice put on her glasses and a grey hat on. "You’re really wearing your glasses? What happened to you hating them and only putting them on so you can see the floor on the way to the bathroom to put in your contacts?"
"Yeah, well, it seems weird to wear contacts in the woods when it’s cold."
"Al, that doesn’t make any sense whatsoever. Why the hell does it matter?"
Alice sighed and picked up a scarf, wrapping it around her neck. "I dunno, it just feels wrong somehow. Like, if it’s cold enough there could be this thin layer of ice that’ll form between my eyes and the lenses, and the lenses will get stuck and I’ll never get them out again." She shook her head sadly at the prospect. Dana just walked over and tried her best to hug her girlfriend, a task made much more difficult than usual by her marshmallow coat and the extra layers of padding underneath.
"You’re adorably insane sometimes, Al. And you look really sexy with the glasses on anyway. I think you should wear them more, I might even make advances or something if you did."
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What can I say? Somehow I like your version of the waterfal / hiking trip much much better then the one we were forced to watch on TV. I wonder why? ;)Very lovely done. And I still have to chuckle about the Steffi Graf thing, lol. Back then I honestly thought for a sec they were referring to her in the show, although that’s not really likely, but imagination is a huge thing sometimes. It’s funny that I found it in your story.
Just caught up on your last two posts and can only say that they are up to your usual wonderful standard of writing. Have you thought of writing professionally – you can certainly carry a story. Thanks.
I had this visual of Alice and Dana moshing with their puffy marshmallow coats and bouncing off each other – heh. Adorablicious chapter. Oh! and Yayness! to the up coming ‘Happy Place Interlude’. You do know how much I digeth this story – right?
So much better than the show. I guess I’m showing my anti-Lara sentiment by saying – doesn’t she have any other friends? and can’t she get a hotel? lol
Ok, I’m in denial big time. Your version of the trip to the waterfall, has already become my ‘reality’. I mean…this is what happend last season, right? The reason Dana isn’t in S4 is because she has a big tournament overseas… (Ok ok…coming back to reality now.) Seriously, I loved this update. Good to have Dana around when they took a trip down to memory lane and having her to comment on the stories herself. Btw, I don’t mind Dana (or Alice) being a horn dog. :D
I like, a lot! It’s very cool that you have integrated so much familiarity but with much better results! I am very interested in seeing where we go from this point forward! More specs and more sex, lol!
Totally wondeful, thank you. PPS.
That was great as always
Awesome as always…Love how you wrote in the trip to the camp…Love the visuals of Dana in all the layers…I knew Dana wasn’t tired…she is such a horn dog. I was trying to do the math, did Helena drive by herself? Just wondering…Nice touch with the glasses…also I like how you are bringing Howie into all of this…Thank you again for a great chapter!
Ahaha, love the Gore-Tex. I was almost expecting Alice to walk in saying “Love that Bobka” (I think that was the same ep). Anyway, another fantabulous update. You did great sticking to your storyline while still incorporating the real episode. I loved that they got it on in Hinyata. Steffi may be good at tennis, but I’m thinking Al may be more skilled off the courts? Anyway, woohoo for this story and woohoo for you being such an awesome writer.