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All you need is love – chapter Four
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ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE Chapter 4
Bette stroked Josh’s dark curls as she watched him finally surrender to sleep. It was just after 9pm – normally he was asleep by 8 but the excitement of the new house had kept all her boys awake longer than normal.
Even Danny who made a brown bear look like an insomniac had only fallen asleep 10 minutes ago. Despite being the oldest Danny also liked his sleep the most. Also Danny and Josh now had their own rooms. In the old house they had shared a room leading them to fight. It would take a while for Bette but the boys already were at home in their new place.
She made a final check on her sons – Zak had thrown his covers off – carefully Bette covered him up again. Danny hadn’t moved and probably wouldn’t until she woke him up in the morning. Maybe they would find out what time he did wake up if left to his own devices – not being woke up by Josh who needed less sleep.
Lara was in her room setting up her computer
“Need a hand ?”
“No its okay – the boys okay ?”
“Asleep at last “
“How’s the hand ?”
Lara indicated the large band aid on Bette’s hand
“Its okay “
“Not the best start to life with the neighbours “
Bette laughed “ No – poor woman “
“Helena attacked her like a bad tempered guard dog with toothache “
“Worse descriptions have been uttered about her – she is just protective that’s all “
“Which we are all – I still think it was just one of those things – dogs chase cats “
Bette lent against the wall and sighed
“When Emily and I first got together we kind of adopted a cat – it was always hanging around the apartment complex where she lived. And when we moved in as a couple we took the cat with us. The couple next door had a really sweet west highland terrier and Billie – the cat made that dog’s life hell. She would hiss at the dog and the dog was scared witless. Billie would have scared that dog and we would have not had the scene we did “
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Good chapter. Good that B&T have a good talk and can’t wait to see they get to know each other more. Yoda Shane always good. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Rusty sounds a little unsanitary. lol My gaydar is crap when it comes to women, yet according to a stupid okcupid gaydar test I’m great at picking out the guys. As if that is really going to help me.
great job ally….lets see whats next..? p.p.s.
Great story Ally, it’s getting better and better and I really love your shane.
Great story ally. So different than your others. My friends don’t know about this site either. They would probably feel that it is smarmy and salacious being true squares. I think you feel a closeness to authors here b/c of the author’s notes and the honest manner in which these stories are written.
I don’t have Killian’s in it, but I do raise my glass to pancha. As for the site, it’s a secret only to those who don’t ask me about it… most don’t. Those who have asked, I’ve told all. On to the chapter: I have big hopes that Bette works on sanding down Tina’s rusty bits. It’s going to be a very interesting journey for the two of them. nice chapter, ally, post soon!
really am enjoying this story. maybe its the mom of 4 in me!?! great as always. thanks.
Hey Ally, Im liking this story more and more. Looking forward to seeing what comes next. :)
I love all of your stories and very much appreciate that you share them. I always feel a bit guilty that the authors give me so much pleasure and I can do little to return that gift. Thank you for sharing the pleasure that writing brings to you. We readers are very lucky.
Great chapter – they will find each other and I know you will make it absolutely fun and wonderful. I so appreciate all you amazing writers – for me it’s not that it’s a secret that I read but more that those who aren’t in to fan fiction don’t get why anyone is. I like it because it takes a story I love and makes it better – it’s like a kaliediscope taking the basic picture and constantly mixing the gorgeous pieces in every changing and expanding ways. It’s fun and I so appreciate you and Pancha and all the fine creative women who post so that we can all enjoy the unlimited stories.
I’m so enjoying this this update. Thanks for sharing yet another wonderful story.
oooo, first? That hadn’t happened in a while…
Neither Bette nor Tina caught on to the other? Jesus, that is rusty! Tina should talk to Becky about the real deal between her parents, it might help her be less angry about the situation. With all the beer drinking let me ask that those so inclined and have it available to raise a glass of Killian’s to pancha. She was a lady and drank it from a glass. Me, I figure the bottle is glassy enough.
Nice words Ally. I was also very touched by Pancha’s death… I couldn’t quite put my finger on why, other than the obvious, but I guess what you said might be it… Anyway, interesting progression in this story. So, Dana is part of the game huh? I’m wondering what kind of love triangle you’re planning on… Alice? Lara?… Both?… Hehehe… Thanks!
Another great chapter. Love reading your stories.Very touched by your words for Pancha. It seems to be the general consensus that this site is a “dirty little secret” we all have….and thinking about it, I’m not really sure why! Is reading or writing fan fiction something to be ashamed of? I don’t tell people about my addiction to this site and it seems so sad. Any thoughts on that? Anyways….hope you’re doing ok and keeping your chin up in the sunny North!
As always another Great Chapter!!! I also think you are right. I too keep this site as my secret. But I think I do that because it’s my own little world and I like it that way. What you said about Pancha was very touching. Thank you Ally for all the time you take on your stories.
Great Chapter, you have a fixation w/the Brady bunch (tweaked)of course…So why is it that the majority here on this site seem to keep it a secret?? Why do we feel the need? Always makes me feel like it’s a little bad at times…secrets are not good, yet we still continue with them. Hmmm…Thks Ally
Glad to see the dog is safe from the gas chamber! Really enjoying this story, it great to see a love connection in the making.
Great update Ally! Glad that Tina decided to call on Bette. So they have a lot in common, huh? Interesting! :))
Again an excellent chapter. Good that the dog alive. I love dogs, have two myself . Tina and Oli should really frankly talk with Becky. She should learn why her parents have really aparted Please, Ally also further writes the story When Love breaks at down. PPS
Rusty doesn’t begin to describe it… luckily, Tina’s got Shane. What WOULD she do without her flawless gaydar? I think we feel the need to keep the site a secret because it’s complicated and difficult to explain to people who haven’t been as ensconced in an online community as we are. I’ve told a number of my friends and couple are starting to understand, but, for the most part, they don’t get how you can get so close to people you’ve never… met.
this story is getting better, Shane is so good friend and help Tina in this, i can’t imagine a house with 6 kids!!!!
both B&T are rusty LOL…need some of that gaydar fixing…and start hanging out more…….bring on some loving
Oooo this story gets more and more interesting, I’m really enjoying it. So either Bette or Tina have a clue LOL, that’s so cute – and about Dana the teacher, I’m sure she will meet and fall head over heals for the lovely nanny when Lara is dropping of the kids, I love Dana and Lara together!! More on all stories, just more LOL
Ally, Great to see the icy waters between Bette and Tina thaw as they shared a beer or two. Looks like these gals have a lot in common. They both new a new love to bring closure to the past and illuminate the future and give them hope. Their children and friends can only do so much. Loved Shane’s instant recognition that Bette was a Lesbian when Tina had been a little vague. Let the dice roll and wish them both luck in this ultimate game of chance: love. Awesome as always. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.