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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 43
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Previously
“Dana what the fuck?” Alice questioned as the brunette shoved her out of the entrance and directed her to the SUV.
“I’ll explain on the way home, just hurry up and shift ass before word gets around Alice.” Alice shot her girlfriend a perplexed look before hopping in.
“Fuck,” Dana stated, closing her eyes and banging her head on the steering wheel, vowing never to take a sex toy out of the bedroom again.
Dana’s Condo The Next Day – New Year’s Eve
“Hey Dane where should I put this one?” Dana set down her own heavy cardboard box and spun around to look at Alice.
“Um over by the coffee table is fine, Christ Alice how the hell did you fit all this into your old apartment?” Dana asked as she took in the sight of her own place. Boxes were strewn everywhere, big, small, heavy and light. Of course Alice miraculously seemed to randomly pick up the boxes with pillows or cushions or clothes in them and left Dana to heave the ones marked books or shoes.
“Hey I’ll have you know that number four was deceptive to the eye, it had a lot of storage thanks.”
“Or maybe a lot of what you own is just small and crappy,” Howie piped up from his spot on the couch as he flicked through the latest Vogue.
“You know you could do something constructive like say, oh I dunno… HELP!” Dana replied taking the magazine from him and tossing it aside.
“And let you two strong butches feel inferior? Nah that seems too cruel.” Alice set down her box and picked up a near by flip-flop and took aim at the teens head. Just as she was squinting and about to throw Dana shot her a look of scorn that meant throw that and you’re on the couch tonight. Alice pouted and set down the footwear, she looked outside the front door, they only had a few more boxes to go and then she was officially moved in.
“ We have like four boxes left How, move your homo ass and carry one in at least,” Alice said tired and frustrated with Dana’s lazy brother, thank God he had packed his stuff up and was crashing at his friends house now, three really was becoming a crowd.
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Fan-bloody-tastic update as always. I really love the relationship between Alice and Howie, its so cute. You’ve written the humour of all 3 of them perfectly.
Cute update. Yes I am still following your story, you have a lifelong fan.PPS.
Aww yay! I heart moving-in stories, they always sound so sweet when in reality, moving sucks. This was really freaking cute, and great idea on having Howie move into Alice’s…although he does realize that his sister had sex with Alice there, doesn’t he? That’d weird me out if I was moving in somewhere. Oh well, he has a trust fund so he could always hire a maid, maybe Janice from Season 3. I’m working on my chapter, but I think I’m sort of burned out on it. I’m not exatly writer’s-blocked, I just don’t feel like writing. It’ll be up before too long, though. And yay, another story! I have like three ideas bouncing around in my otherwise vacant head, too…but I think that with “You” being so long I should just stick with that one. Wow, did I babble much? I think so.
Howie and Alice are almost as cute with their fighting as Alice and Dana. Almost… :-)
There is a nice comedic balance between those three stooges! Cute little installment; wonder what kind of trouble Howie will find having his own place?! WQohoo, a New Years Eve party on the way. I can’t wait to see what incidents this will bring…!
seriously, Al, I’ve told you many times, but you’re the best, and your writing is getting even better. Thanks for that line:”You’re everything to me”, it made my day. And they’re gonna live together? OMG!I can’t wait to read about it and about the new year celebration at The Planet too…
YAY! I love when you update,it makes my day a little brighter. And this was a cute update too!
Ahhh – cuter and funny, great writing. You capture the warmth and loving nature of the girls and Howie. PPS
Uh oh…I accidentally hit the 3 stars-button instead of the 5-stars one. Just so you know, you get 5 stars from me! lol @ Alice’s gift of picking out the lighter boxes. A friend of mine is probably ‘gifted’ like that too because I always end up carrying the heavier grocery bags. :S I love the interaction between Alice and Howie…Dana always seems so responsible compared to them (a total contrast to the position she was in last chapter). :) Looking forward to the update. Let’s get the party started!
You sure it doesnt sound sexy? LOL! I dont know what a swedish accent sounds like so dunno. Yes smooth legs are a must so dont go slackin :P. Finally they are moved in together Yay! Howie is going to be moving into Alices old place so hopefully there will be some danish lovin soon ;P Thanks for the update, PPS.
After 3 days of reminding myself to read your update, I finally got the chance and it was well worth the wait! I love this story, so freakin cute. I like that Howie will be around. And woohoo I’m so excited for your trip, you’re gonna have a great time here. Let me know dates and stuff when you figure it out.