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    And The Winner Is! Chapter 20

    Story written on February 20, 2007 by Succulent1.
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    When the gunfire came raining through the window, the only thing Bette could think to do was protect Tina.

    PREVIOUSLY

    Bette stood there, confused. Was it the drugs that were clouding her judgment? Yes–that had to be it, she thought.

    Bette: Tina, I’m going to leave and let you process all of this. When they told me, I didn’t believe it either. But the more I think about, it the more I know that it’s true.

    Tina: Look–don’t stand there and tell me what to think about anything. All I know is that I made a big mistake getting involved with a married woman. I hope you enjoyed the ride because it’s coming to an end.

    Bette: Tina, it doesn’t have to.

    Tina: Yes, it does. Loving you is taking too much out of me. Too much work. Every time I think this might work, I turn around and get hurt. I just can’t take it anymore.

    Before Bette had a chance to take in what Tina was saying, before she could start comprehending, gunfire poured in from the balcony window.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

    When the gunfire came raining through the window, the only thing Bette could think to do was protect Tina. She jumped in front of her to shield her. They fell on the bed and onto the floor.

    Just as Carmen was answering the door, both her and Shane heard the gunfire. Running towards her bags, she grabbed her 9 mm. Shane was already in the room when Carmen ran up behind her.

    Carmen: (instructing Shane) GET DOWN!

    Shane hit the floor and continued towards the bedroom. She was not only worried about her friend but also about Tina.

    Carmen grabbed Shane by her foot and stopped her.

    Shane: Man, I’ve got to get in there!

    By that time, the shooting had stopped. With Carmen’s training, she knew that they couldn’t just go rushing into the room without observing the surroundings.

    Shane: I need to know if anyone’s hurt.

    Carmen crawled by Shane and slowly eased the bedroom door open. What they saw, Shane wasn’t prepared for.

    Back in L.A., Helena didn’t know what to say. Mark had come right out and called her a liar.

    Helena: Pardon me?

    Mark: Come on sis, this is your brother you’re talking to!

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    8. Suc, This is even more tense than I remember the first time. Am sure there were a few changes to this version. All good stuff though. Cheryl really is a whack job. Bruce ain’t much better. Sweet of Mark to tell Helena to go after Carmen but I think that boat has sailed as Shane and Carmen have ignited their spark. Finally on to Bette and Tina, what the hell has happened in their room? You are so bad for stopping where you did. It was exciting but I really wanna know who is hurt and how seriously. Please post soon. Many thanks for this rip-roaring ride. Your Loyal Fan.

    10. Oh man! I knew that Cheryl inseminated Tina, that B*TCH! I hope Bette and Tina are okay, but since theres blood doesnt sound like they are. THanks for the great post, and PLEASEPS!!!

    11. S you got me hooked on your chapter and I am thinking that the blood is from the broken glass from the windows. Now can I say that I hate both Cheryl and Bruce, and love Mark telling his sis Helena to go after CArmen,,,,,,once again love your writing.

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